HumTum FF PRT4 PG3 READ NOW! :D

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^ Part Four ^

Hum Tum

Another new fanfic by flygirls!

Scroll down the page for PART ONE...!

Anam...xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice promo.... picture ff great something new!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi friend iam new here n i have seen ur promo.ur effort is really great n simply superb 👏 .n finally waiting 4r ur ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just watched the promo
looks good!!!
sooo plz continue soon!!!
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Thankyouu for the comments....glad you liked the promo...
Heres the link to the second promo...

And here's part one of Hum Tum...!

Hum Tum!

A 2 guys are playing tennis in a tennis court...

Some other three guys are cheering...

Guys - Goo Shiv!! Shiv!!! You can do it Shiv!!!! Come on yaar!!

The ball hits the net...

Guys - 😃 Wahhooo!! You're the besttt Shiv!!!

Shivs smile is shown...

And his clothes...

Shiv - Hard luck Machaan..

Machaan - Like always...you're the winner...ek aur khelle?

Shiv - Sure...

Shivs phone starts to ring..

Shiv - Ek minute Machaan....Hi Dad...whats up?

Mahen - Betha kya aaj tum office aahsaktein ho...ek zaroori baath karna hain..

Shiv - Teekh hain Dad..main aatha hoon...

The phone disconnects..

Machaan - Kahan jarahe ho...game toh finish karro naa..

Shiv - Nahin yaar...tu jeetha...

Shiv smiles at Machaan and goes into the changing rooms..

He gets changed into a white top with jeans and a leather jacket and sunglasses...

He leaves for office...

Receptionist - Shiv!!! Shiv!!! Shiv!!!

She gets up and hugs Shiv...

Receptionist - Good morning sir!!! Howw are you..!!??

Shiv - Fine...😕😊

Shiv walks on...

Everyone stands up as he passes by....

Shiv - *thinking* Aaj sabh mujhe aise kyun dekhrahe hain...😕

He goes into the office...

Mahen - Shiv..agaiye tum...betho betho...

Shiv sits down - Dad aaj sabh mujhe muskaraake kyun dekhrahe te..??

Mahen - 😃 Kyunki aaj...tumara ek rishta aiya hain!!!

Shiv - 😲 Rishta...matlabh...shaadi ka..!!???? 😕

Mahen - Haan betha...woh bohot khoobsurat hain...woh Kalkutta mein rehti hain...mere ek dost ki bethi hain woh...

Shiv - *gulps* Shaadi...lekin Dad...

Mahen - Challo...hum yeh kahiin aur discus karte hain...

Mahen and Shiv go to a coffee shop and sit at a table..

Mahen - Betha main aaj bohot khush hoon...muhe pattha hain ke tum shaadi ke liye thayaar nahiin ho lekin jabh tum uska chehra dekhogi na...tum khud usko pyaar karne laghoge...uska naam hain Gauri...

Shiv - Woh kaisi dekhti hain Dad?

Mahen - Yeh loh...

Mahen gives Shiv an envelope...

Mahen - Mujhe office mein ek meeting hain...main ghaari mein jaraha hoon...jabh tumne yeh dekhliya hain...aajaho...

Mahen leaves the shop..

Shiv opens the envelope...

He slowly pulls a photo out...

Shiv - 😊

Its a photo of the girl...

He cant stop looking at the phoro...

Shiv - 😃😃😃

His mobile starts to ring and he realises what he was doing...

He smiles to himself and leaves...

Shivs House

Shiv - Mom..!! Dadi...!! Dadaji...!!! I'm home..!!

Nikhila - Shiv betha..!! Tum aaj itni jaldi aiye..

Shiv - Haan woh...dad ne hi mujhko ghar bejhwaiya hain...

Nikhila - Teekh hain....tum jaakhar fresh ho jaho...main khaana laghaati hoon..

Shiv goes upstairs...

He freshens up and gets changed...

He lies down on the bed and opens the envelope again...

He smiles at the photo..

Shiv - Mujhe sirf woh din ka intezaar hain jabh main tumme milloonga..😃

Nikhila - Shiv!!! Khanna thayaar hain!!!

Shiv puts the photo on his sidetable and goes downstairs...

At the table..

Shiv - Mom...mujhe tumse kuch poochna hain...

Nikhila - Haan bholo...

Shiv - Ahem...woh...er...woh main Gauri se kabh miloonga...

Dadi - Oi hoi..!

Shiv blushes...

Nikhila - Woh kal hi humare ghar arahe hain...

Shiv - Kal!! 😃

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Next Day...

Gauri and her family arrive at Shivs house...

Shivs upstairs getting changed...

Mahen - Alok ji! Aho aho andhar aho...kaise ho aap..!!???

Alok [ gauris dad ] - Main teekh hoon..aur aap?

Mahen - Main bilkul teekh hoon...kaisi ho Gauri bethi??

Gauris smile is shown..

Gauri - Teekh hoon...

Alok - Shiv nazar nahin araha...

Mahen - Aatha hi hoga.....dekho woh agaiya...

Shivs standing at the stairs wearing a suit 😉

Gauri's face is shown...

Shiv winks at Gauri but she pretends she didnt see and blushes...

Mahen - Shiv...betho...

Shiv smiles at Gauri and sits down...

Gauri blushes...

Palak comes walking in with a tray of food in her hands..

She puts it on the table and sits down..

Everyone fills a plate with food and starts to eat...

Alok - *whispers* Kya Shiv ko Gauri achi laghi?

Mahen - *whispers* 😃 Bohot achi laghi...

Palak gives Shiv a plate whilst hes staring at Gauri...

He picks up something from the plate and bites it smiling...

Shiv - 😲

He realised he ate a chilli 😆

Shiv - *thinking* Damn!! Aaahhh bohot mirchi hain..!!! Kya karrooon..!!!

He sees Gauri looking at him and giggling to herself..

He starts to laugh too and picks up a glass of water and drinks it....

Mahen - Alok tum Kalkutta kabh woppas jarahe hain?

Alok - Aaj hi jaana hoga...Mumbai mein koi jagha nahin hain...

Mahen - Yahan rehjaho...

Alok - Yahan..!! Nahin nahin Mahenji....

Mahen - Kyun nahin...challo hum jagha banaate hain...

Mahen moves the sofas and stuff out of the way in the living room and puts sheets down on the floor with pillows and blankets to make several beds...

Mahen - Abh hum bhi tumare saath is kamre mein soyeinge..😃

Alok - Thankyou soo much Mahen ji...

Mahen - Youre welcome..

Few Hours Later

Everyones getting ready for bed...

Shiv goes on the balcony because he cant get to sleep...

Kaaya - Gauri...Gauri uttoh...!!!

Gauri - Kya hua Kaaya?

Kaaya - Jigu upphar balcony phar hain....jaho usse baathein karro Didi!!

Gauri - 😳 Teekh hain..

Gauri goes upstairs to the balcony..

Shiv - Aap...yahan..?

Gauri - Woh...mujhe neend nahin arahi thi...

Shiv - Mujhe bhi nahin arahi thi...

Gauri - Woh er...

Shiv - Gauri main aapke like ek doffha laiya hoon...

Gauri - Doffha...😳

Shiv - Yeh loh....

Shiv gives Gauri a box..

Gauri opens it and theres a really nice necklace inside...

Gauri - 😲 Itna khoobsurat doffha...

Shiv - Haan...lekin tum se zaada nahin...😊

Shiv goes downstairs..

Gauri smiles...

To be continued..

Hope you liked my first part...

😃

Anam..xxx

Edited by flygirls - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really nice beginning, it reminds me alot of the film vivah, continue soon
xxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great story, pls. continue soon.
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wonderful start!!!!!
Shiv is totally flat!!!! 😆 😆

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Thankyouuu for the comments...xxx

Part Two

The next day...

Everyones having breakfast whilst Shivs upstairs getting changed...

Mahen - Arrey yeh Shiv kahan hain...itna dheer laghaata hain...

Nikhila - Main dekhti hoon...

Mahen - Aap rehne doh...Gauri betha...jahakar Shiv koh kehdoh ke nnaashta thayaar hain...

Gauri - 😕...Haan Uncle...😕

Gauri goes upstairs feeling really nervous...

She walks inside...

Gauri - 😲

Shivs lying on the bed without a shirt on staring at Gauris photo 😃

Gauri turns around quickly..

Gauri - Er woh...naashta thayaar hain...

Shiv gets up and realises that Gauri was there..

Shiv - 😕 😲 ....Haan main araha hoon..

Gauri leaves the room smiling...

Few minutes later Shiv comes running down the stairs..

Mahen - Kya hua...jaldi mein kyun ho?

Shiv - Dad humme jaldi nikhalna hoga...mujhe ek early meeting hain aur...

Mahen - Uff....phelle kyun nahin yaad aiya...challo...

Shiv runs to the door and bumps into Gauri and a photo of her falls out his jacket...

Shiv - 😲 Woh er...

Gauri smiles and picks up the photo...

She gives it to him and waks away...

Mahen winks at Shiv and they both leave...

Nikhila - Gauri bethi...mujhe tumse kuch baath karni hain....

Gauri - Haan kya baath hain Aunty..?

Nikhila - Gauri main chaati hoon ke aaj raat tum Shiv ke saath kahin bhaar jaho...taakhe tum ek dhoosre ko jaansako...paichaan sakho....you know what i mean?

Gauri - Haanji Aunty...

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Office...

Nikihla tells Shiv to take Gauri somewhere as soon as he leaves office...

Shiv phones Gauri..

Gauri - Hello?

Shiv - ..........................

Gauri - Hellooo..!??

Shiv - Er....

Gauri - Kaun?

Shiv - Woh..main Shiv....

Gauri - 😃 Shiv...aap...

Shiv - Main tumme ek gante mein ahoonga...thayaar hojaho...

Gauri - Haan...

Shiv disconnects the phone..

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Gauri gets ready into a white shalwar kameez and the necklace that Shiv gave her...

She hears a car horns and looks out the window...

Shivs cars there...

Gauri goes outside...

Shiv - 😲

Gauri sits inside the car...

Shiv drives to a restaurant....

The sit down at a table...

Its a beautiful restaurant with roses and heart balloons...

Gauri looks around..

Shiv - Achaa lagha mera arrangement?

Gauri - Aapne yeh sabh kiya..? Main lagha ke aunty ne hi...

Shiv - Gauri...aaj tum bohot achi laghrahi ho...

Gauri - 😳...

Shiv - Er...toh...

Shiv and Gauri talk and get to know each other more..

Hum Tum *song* comes on

Shiv - Dance?

Gauri - Why not?

Shiv and Gauri dance...

Shiv - Mujhe kitni dheer laghi...yeh ain saas karne keliye ke tumne woh necklace pehna hain...

Gauri - 😳

Shiv - Sach mein bohot acha laghra hain...

Shiv kisses Gauris hands...

He leans in to kiss her neck but she back away...

Gauri - Shiv...

They stare into each others eyes and Shiv kisses her on the neck...

He slowly puts his arms round her waist and and gently kisses her on the lips..

Gauri puts her arms around Shiv neck and cuddles in..

Few minutes later.. [ stll kissing ]

Shivs mbile starts to ring and they realises what they were doing..

They let go of each other embarassed....😃

Shiv picks i up..

Shiv - Hello?

Nikhila - Sabh teekh taakh chalraha hain na..???

Shiv - Haan mom...

Nikhila - Teekh hain main disturb nahin karna chaati...main phone rakhti hoon..

Shiv - Bye mom...

Shiv disconnects the phone...

Gauri - Er...challeh?

Shiv - Haan...chalte hain..

They both go in the car and drive home..

Before Gauri gets out the car...

Shiv - Gauri...aaj raat mujhe bohot acha lagja.....

Gauri looks at Shiv whos VERY NERVOUS...

Gauri turns his face towards her and kisses him on the cheek...

Gauri - Mujhe bhi...😊❤️

She smiles and leaves the car..

Shiv - 😃

To be conitnued...!!!!

Anam...xxx

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Edited by flygirls - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very sweet update flygirl, pls. continue soon.

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