Short FF: 'MASK'..Last Part: PG1 18/06 - Page 23

omg i just read part 5
it was so sad 😭
awww she thinks shes cursed
hope she gives in and goes wiv shiv
shiv is so sweet!!
continue soon plz!!!

part 5 was so sad, but I luv Shiv's arrogance about having her at any cost, keep it up darling.

wow..devika already like him
anupum was talking abt sum1 right??? but who???

3 more parts???? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😳

brilliant part 5, I loved it, the charmer has charmed the grandmother aswell, 😆 😆 , h is just so sweet, my cupcake. 😳

such a heart renching part.. but still it was beautiful...

please do continue!!!~

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u potrayed the emotions and desires so beautifully!!!!!
Shiv is very understandin.... and Gauri should stop blamin herself!!!!
i jus love the way Shiv keeps proclamin his love for Gauri time and again.....
And the way he describes about her,about what he found out about her durin the hong kong party was beautiful!!!

Aww...poor Gauri thinks she is cursed. 😭 Poor thing is in love with Shivy but does not want him to die. I hope Shiv is able to break through her negative thought.
I loved the Shiv's confidence and his response to Gauri "No matter what you say or do I will have you" made me 😳😳😳. He is so bloody confident and knows how to get what he wants. He even charmed Amma 😆.

Di,
the last two parts were simply breath taking. I guess its the highly emotive content, the way she falls apart when he's around. her pain and anguish matched by his passion and support, simply stunning~
Lovely as always... Now would u plz update Fanaa! 😳

Cheers,
dc

Nice update Kat... so gauri having an unhappy past.... I thot she was a widow.. but she isnt married at all...!!!!!! omg

Originally posted by: Raihena

awww that was soo sad and cute at the same time, when is she gna giv in and let him heal her lool
continue soon
xxxx

thanks rai!!😳

Originally posted by: gujibabe

omg i just read part 5
it was so sad 😭
awww she thinks shes cursed
hope she gives in and goes wiv shiv
shiv is so sweet!!
continue soon plz!!!

awee don't cry!!😃😳

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

part 5 was so sad, but I luv Shiv's arrogance about having her at any cost, keep it up darling.

JD u are sweet as always!! cheers dear!!😳

Originally posted by: ash9

wow..devika already like him
anupum was talking abt sum1 right??? but who???

3 more parts???? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😳

Yo smart cookie will come to that sooonnnnnnnnnnn!! 😳

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

brilliant part 5, I loved it, the charmer has charmed the grandmother aswell, 😆 😆 , h is just so sweet, my cupcake. 😳

RD u just like this seductive Shiv!! 😉...eatable guys!!😆

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

such a heart renching part.. but still it was beautiful...

please do continue!!!~

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Awweee thank u!! 😳

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

👏
u potrayed the emotions and desires so beautifully!!!!!
Shiv is very understandin.... and Gauri should stop blamin herself!!!!
i jus love the way Shiv keeps proclamin his love for Gauri time and again.....
And the way he describes about her,about what he found out about her durin the hong kong party was beautiful!!!

Aweee cheers Bibiji!! 😆😆... Goolguppeee better be waiting for me!!😳

Originally posted by: pooks

Aww...poor Gauri thinks she is cursed. 😭 Poor thing is in love with Shivy but does not want him to die. I hope Shiv is able to break through her negative thought.
I loved the Shiv's confidence and his response to Gauri "No matter what you say or do I will have you" made me 😳😳😳. He is so bloody confident and knows how to get what he wants. He even charmed Amma 😆.

i lost count how many times did he have her!! not enough😆😳😳...

pooky as alway thank you!!😊

Originally posted by: desi chic

Di,
the last two parts were simply breath taking. I guess its the highly emotive content, the way she falls apart when he's around. her pain and anguish matched by his passion and support, simply stunning~
Lovely as always... Now would u plz update Fanaa! 😳

Cheers,
dc

DC emotive contents awweee cheers babe.. just write from the heart thats all!!😳

U know u in the q right!! the amount of request for that is unbelievable!!...british sence of humour rocks!! 😆😆... on friday for sure!

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

Nice update Kat... so gauri having an unhappy past.... I thot she was a widow.. but she isnt married at all...!!!!!! omg

Thank u notice ur reading my work thanks!!😊

Cheers guys even the silent reader!!...more to come from this Shiv and Gauri... time to unravel things!!😉