'Irony Of Fate':FF END uptd pg.1 05/08 - Page 8

neetu.....nice ending

why he have to desert her and why he changed his name to gaurav ......silly man....wasted so much time 😉 of him and gauri...... 😉

Hi dc,

I LOVED the update, actually yours & Chandni's FF totally made my day! 👏

First, things first, why did you end this FF? Why? o why? 😭

It was soooooo short!! 😭 That is the only complain I have against you - the FF was short, very short, I want more scenesssssss! 😳😳

I loved the descriptions... girl, you are good at describing, totally brilliant, if we had an award for Best descriptions - Excellent writing skills - Sizzling dialogues - all these would go to you! The dialogues, especially oh lalala, I can never ever ever write such dialogues. So beautifully written in Hindi/Urdu, my friend now I am definitely coming to get Hindi/ Urdu lessons from you 😆.....

Girl you are GOOD! I loved both Gauri's & Shiv's character from start to end, this will definitely be a FF, which I will be reading again!

I loved the entire part, the flashback, the ending so appropriate & perfect!!!! I am in a hurry right now, will definitely try to come back tonight & write more.

wow!!awesum update..too bad it was a short FF..luvd the ending

well superb 👏 😉 😉 but y did both of them changed there name to shivani n gaurav 😕
it was awesome really well written 👏

simply breathtaking.....yaar i'm using tat word too much when it coms 2 u...par kya kare?....its true.....it was simply breathtaking......so wait...this is not a riencarnation story...its the same lifetime but they jus changed their names....n they didnt kno how the other looked during the wedding so tat explains them not being familiar wit eachother.....but the ending was so beautiful....it was perfect.

Originally posted by: smartc

Neetu.. Part 2 was... Hayee....Subhan Allah~ 👏 👏 👏

Di~

Thanks Di... I'm schmiling like no end!😃

Originally posted by: fida-cute

awesome as ever 👏 👏 👏 shivani n gaurav from shiv n gauri 😆 😆 both the part was ummmmmmmmmm 😳

Thanks Zainu!! Yep... Shiv-Gauri always❤️

Originally posted by: koolkitty

awesome 👏 gud job 👏 cont soon

Thank you!!😊

Originally posted by: kaira

amazing ff 👏

Thanks Kaira!!😛

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

shivani and gaurav 😕 dont' confuse my little head with these new names...they are gauri and shiv and that's what it'll be forever *hmph* 😃 😆
ooo so i'm guessing they have a past...a bad one??
Continue whenever possible..will be waiting patiently 😊

Haha... Me and confuse you? Darling, that's my dimension😆 But yes, they'll always be Shiv-Gauri... And a past they share indeed... The last part is up and explains most... Please ask if clarifications are needed!😆 Your patience is much appreciated!😃

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

👏
I have no words to express the depth of the feelings and
the beauty of the etched out emotions.......

keep up the good work!!!!!

Thanks Pabu... You're such a dahling! *hugs*

Originally posted by: rashi85

simply amazinggg!! 👏 👏 👏

Thanks so much Rashi!!😛

great update, yippeee, one more part 😳
Thanks DC

Thanks Jenna... Yes, one last one... I did go a little overboard😳

Thanks guys, will reply to the rest later!

Cheers,

dc

Edited by desi chic - 18 years ago

how many sexy billi r u thanking??? 😆

Originally posted by: Andekhi

Awesome Parts!!!!!!!! 👏

Simply Beautiful dc! 🤗I LOVE this FF of yours!!!!.... it's sooooo goodddd... I sighed when you said you went overboard, keep going overboard hun 😃. Please, o please write three more parts to this FF! I just can't get enough of those three brilliantly crafted parts... I want moreee....

Andekhi,

Thanks so much sweetie... You're a gem. Thanks to your words, I'm smiling like a langoor... Good thing I'm in my room😆 Sorry hun, its gonna be short as I have other commitments... Ermm I'm sure some people wouldn't mind me "hurrying it up" on that one😕😳😆

Originally posted by: sum2005

neetu meri jaan,

hey why is gauri akka shivani hiding her identity....and is this gaurav is shiv and what r they upto...i think they r married and seperated.....hope u will clear our doughts in the final episode and i want a long update ......ok......

nice work jaanu......like cute shanthi.....uufff.....hamari forum ki nanai si pari neetu.

Sumu... I hope I've cleared the confusion in the last one😕 Confusion mera peecha chodne ka naam hi nahin leti😆...Khair... Aww, that's so sweet!! "Humari forum ki nanai si pari neetu" I love the sound of that!😳 *Big Japphi*...

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

does the last part really has to be the last? i';m absolutely loving this fic! god tat was HOT! hai...maar dala.....its really interesting how u write it....almost like the present is being merged wit memories of a different lifetime.

Yes babes, its the last... Hot? Haha... Go read your own works... I'm still burning.😳... Wow, what a comment... Erm, I'm speechless?... Thanks jaanu, you're too kind...

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

oh i just read all the parts...the fist word that comes in my mind is amazing...you described things so well...i am glad you are going to write more....can't get enough of it 😳 continue soon plz

Thanks Roop!... You know that old song "Tu roop ki raani, main choron ka raja"?😕 Lol, I always think of you with taht... Haha... Arre yaar, you're just too kind!! Thanku so much... I can't get enough of your siggies😳

Originally posted by: mansi1219

Originally posted by: mansi1219

wowies.. u did it again.. me.. totally blown away!.. an awesome awesome part!

i think they have a past... and i m thinkin who its wit now.. 😆 ... hopefully somehow each other.. my crazy brain.. wat can i say..

ur RAMBLING.. as u call it.. is superb! keep doing it.. and o yea.. keep going overboard.. i m loving it.. u can take the fourth part being the last too.. i mean 10 more wont hurt wud it? 😉.. lol..

i m thinking how u r gonna end it in a part.. i really m curious to c how its goin to end..

o.. how were ur tests?

cant wait!
(before u ask for wat... the next part.. )

luv mansi.. 😊

The zoo has really taken affect hasn't it?😆 jk... Haha, you're too funny kudiye... Thanks a ton!! Erm... mystery solved... And ten ki bachi, if I were to continue on with this one, you guys can wait forever more for "Khamoshiyon..."😳 Tests were just great thanku!! Aap sab ki dua hai... As for the ending, read and you're the judge😕

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

hmmm hold on.. still lookin 🤔

plz just wait.. these dictionaries nah😡 no help..

wait wait.. still looking.. 🤔

let me find d proper words to comment 😃

.. cuz u see.. afta readin the first three parts... i've realized.. i don't know d proper english to comment.. so im lost.. isliye.. usin d dictionary for help.. at the moment im speechless 🤔

excellent, superb, wonderful, fabulous, fantastic, brilliant - its that and MUCH more.. 😳 even d dictionary's at loss of words 😉 😉

now update soon😳 😃

👏

waise beemari buddy.. any chance this ff could change from 'short' to Long 😃

and stop drooling ova d siggy - i did that.. and still haven't finished my work 😭 😭 😭 now if my prof. asks me y i haven't done d work... i blame iqu

Ok... I'm *lmao*😆😆 Now are you sure that is a dictionary... You know, the one which carries terms with definitions??😳 Sorry jaan, no chance of extension... You want me to update the other one right? Toh phir chup hoja😉 *bows*... thanks BB... tu sach mein mujhe mein jaan daal deti hai... Good luck with all your papers and stuff... waise keep checking the mailbox eh, shayad FEDEX waale got my msg😃

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

Hi Neetu babe, Sorru gal been a bit busy, hope ur papers went well, 😃 😃 , I have copied all parts into word and planning to read the printout tonight, will comment morro girly, glad i come to kno of this.

RDi!!!!!!! Omg *gasps*... It is you na? Kadon da tuhanu labdi firdi aan!! Kite rehnde oh tussi?😭😭 I sent u a PM... but ghar par lagta koi tah hi nahin... Waise do me a favour before I seriously die, UPDATE!!!... *sighs*... thanku😛

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

OMG OMG OMG..well i realli hav no words to describe ur work..i guess the words great, awesome, fantastic, fabulous, amazing, mindblowing...dont even cover it..lol..but seriously ur work is realli unique..you aim for perfection!!plz update soon

Hai ni kudiye... I have no words... *bows humbly* shukriya jaaneman... Perfection vection kuch nahin boss... I'm a junior... only trials... I'm humbled😳

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

look i know u were buzy last night.. now be a good buddy and start typing 😃 😃 and thanx to u i couldn't finish my update last night 😡 😡 i started listenin to music.. then i was till i dozed off 😆 😆 but i am expecting an update tonight fo this ff 😳 😳 and fo d other one 😉 😉 but fo now.. this one 😃 😃

*ROLF*😆😆 "Baarish ki rimjhim gun gunah rahi hai... betaabi dil pe mere chah rahi hai..."😳

Originally posted by: Catwoman

OK for a moment then i thought what is DC writing now... 😳 Gosh!! BUT you can't end it there???....

Your geting as bad as RANO (RD)!! 😆 😆 😆

I am all over the place you have to update 😳

Love Kat!! 😉

Haha!! I'm defo not as bad as RDi... Not even close infact!! Uff... Di, tell her to come na... dil todh ke rakh ditta...😭😭 I updated.

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

👏
brilliant work!!!!!

Thanks Pabu!😃

Originally posted by: Catwoman

You Ended it!! 😳

WOW must say this style was very different and refreshing from you!! You have a great style and keep going what you are doing!!

Love kat! 😉

Shore did... Haha, different it was, and difficult in its own way... Thanks Di... You're always very encouraging! *japhhi shappi*

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

what a sweet ending 👏 Madam ji aab zarra Khamoshyion ko bhi update karengi 😊

Thanks Jenna... Aapka hukam sar aankhon par😳 That's next on the list... please forgive!😕

Originally posted by: sum2005

neetu.....nice ending

why he have to desert her and why he changed his name to gaurav ......silly man....wasted so much time 😉 of him and gauri...... 😉

Sumu... thanks!! You know they say, "pyar mein pagal"... 😆 He is a silly man... a man that makes others feel the same😳

Originally posted by: Andekhi

Hi dc,

I LOVED the update, actually yours & Chandni's FF totally made my day! 👏

First, things first, why did you end this FF? Why? o why? 😭

It was soooooo short!! 😭 That is the only complain I have against you - the FF was short, very short, I want more scenesssssss! 😳😳

I loved the descriptions... girl, you are good at describing, totally brilliant, if we had an award for Best descriptions - Excellent writing skills - Sizzling dialogues - all these would go to you! The dialogues, especially oh lalala, I can never ever ever write such dialogues. So beautifully written in Hindi/Urdu, my friend now I am definitely coming to get Hindi/ Urdu lessons from you 😆.....

Girl you are GOOD! I loved both Gauri's & Shiv's character from start to end, this will definitely be a FF, which I will be reading again!

I loved the entire part, the flashback, the ending so appropriate & perfect!!!! I am in a hurry right now, will definitely try to come back tonight & write more.

Aww... I'm glad it made your day... At least I could do that much😕😆 So sweet of you to say so! But yeah, my Chandu Rani is like that... dipped in sugar!😳

To answer your first question... This was meant to be short. I had never intended to go the full way with it... and to be honest, I don't think it was ever meant to. Plus, I've got to other ffs rolling around here... hazard to my health enough already😕😆 jk... Hence, I have to pay attention to those commitments. If you're willing to endure more pain, please visit the link called "Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan..." 😳

Hai Rabba... Girl, you're too much! I'm not worthy of such things... You're words and time are much more valuable than anything as such! Readers serve as inspiration of sorts... I'm glad I came around here to find you all... Bless me, you guys are way to generous!😳

Read again... brave you are hunni!😳

Thank you so much... You're words mean much!! *hugs*

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

wow!!awesum update..too bad it was a short FF..luvd the ending

Thanks jaanu... shortness was in it's "karam"😕😳 Glad you enjoyed it though!

Originally posted by: fida-cute

well superb 👏 😉 😉 but y did both of them changed there name to shivani n gaurav 😕
it was awesome really well written 👏

Thanks Zainu!!... That's a good question... Despite distances, perhaps they'd always felt some sort of connection... You can fill in the blanks😉 Thanks again!

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

simply breathtaking.....yaar i'm using tat word too much when it coms 2 u...par kya kare?....its true.....it was simply breathtaking......so wait...this is not a riencarnation story...its the same lifetime but they jus changed their names....n they didnt kno how the other looked during the wedding so tat explains them not being familiar wit eachother.....but the ending was so beautiful....it was perfect.

JC... bachu, that term is reserved for you... But thank you nonetheless... No, its not a reincarnation story, it's still the same lifetime... And yes, that is why they didn't recognize each other immediately, but there was an instant connection😳... You liked it? Sigh... Thanks!

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

im here.. im here.. i thought i should comment before i type up my paper🤔 awww man that was simply amazing.. so they were linked due to their past.. and they changed their names.. wit d connection of each other.. shivani/gaurav.. smart move dude 😉 😉 just loved that.. and d song -- lyrics.. were simply 👏 d ending was ADORABLE... she's pregnant and d lil birthday cake.. awwwwwwwww.. do i get a share🤔i want cake tooo.. but d ending couldn't have been betta... gauri'll alwayz be shiv's.. AMEN!!!!!!!!! to that.. a total mkl moment.. thru and thru 😳 simply loved this ff.. short and sweet.. made me faint.. blush.. smile.. sighhhhhh.. truly a masterpiece.. LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDD IT.. now i gotta rush.. otherwise i'd make d commento longer 😭 😭 but thank u fo sharin ur thoughts and providing us wit a wonderful ff 🤗 -- i mean.. like i said.. put a smile on my face 👏

BB!!!... Aww yaar, tu humesha edaan kardi ehn... making me smile like a langoor!😃 Thanks jaan!!... They're linked since centuries yaar... Yep, she's preggers and the cake... Yeah well, I couldn't exactly think that well at one in teh morn... and that's what came... But it turned out to be a MKL moment na?😳 AMEN is right baby!... SG forever... Thanks yaar... Tussi great ho!!

Originally posted by: Catwoman

how many sexy billi r u thanking??? 😆

Billies there may be hazaron... but only one schexy billi of mine!😃 And she needs no intro...

*Thanks to all you wonderful people, I'm on cloud 9... I seriously cannot express how overwhelmed I am with all your support! You are all truly amazing, and serve as a great inspiration. I love and cherish all your comments and appreciate your time... *mwwuaaah*

Cheers,

dc