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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: nandini90

hey gr8 part and shiv is sooooooooo sweeeeet....wow he is already in fida with gauri without seeing her and just with her voice....cant wait to read the next part......waiting waiting waiting.....pls cont soon.....
once again....it was superb 👏 👏 👏


LUV NANDINI

thank you so much.well keep reading as there is much more to come.😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: prishika

ohhh...amneet....>>ur ff is just awesome!!
continue soooooon......if it woz upto me i'd say update it ASAP!! 😆

but yah...i also read ur kyph ff...!i love that one too~!

i can't wait to see wat will happen when shiv sees gauri in the pooja 😳 👏

and pls....make it the next update exxxtraa 😉
looooooong

arre yaar pehle gauri ki report to sun lo,phir dekhtein hain.well thankyou so much u r a sweet heart🤗



will be WAITING IMPATIENTLY! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: crystalclear

sorry amneet abb chance mila hai parne ka me sari updates pari hai ajj. i muct say tehy were mindblowing. so gauri is the lifeline of office haan. soon she will become shiv's lifeline. i wnated to read it before but you busy with marriage thing. but keep it up girl i will read it when i get a chance. and thanks for the update and cont. 😉

its okay dear😊i kow u r busy and thanx a lot for reading

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
simply Fabulous!!..plz continue soon

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Min
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

oy kudiya ki kardhi ah tuh! (im not sure if i spelled that right! 😆 ). u better hurry up, i cant wait for the next part im loving it so far! hurry plz! 😃

thanx sweety🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv has become absolutely fida over gauri's voice....whats gonna happen to him when he actually meets her face to face 😃 😃 😃 wonderful update.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

shiv has become absolutely fida over gauri's voice....whats gonna happen to him when he actually meets her face to face 😃 😃 😃 wonderful update.

thanx a lot

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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap-shiv comes back to india.all girls on airport go nuts on him.ipshita and gauri are going for shopping.shiv listens gauri's voice on anupam's phone and liked it



Part-4

it is saturday,the day of pooja.all are sitting on dining table and having thier breakfast.ipshita also came to anupam's house as she knew gauri is coming to check and do the arrangements personally as anupam told her tthat this pooja is really important for dadi and she was everything perfect.ipshita didn't wanted gauri to b alone here.the only person missing is shiv.he is still sleeping as love to sleep in free time.he is not going to get up before two in the afternoon(jus like me 😉 )
d-anupam.yumhe yaad hai ki nahi ki aaj ghar mein pooja hai..kyunki jahan tak main dekh rahi hoon abhi tak koi arrangrments nahin huye hain.aur ye shiv kahan hai.breakfast ke liye kyun nahin aaya.
n-relax mom(nikhila calls her mom as she is age of her mom)aap janti hain jis din shiv free hota hai he sleeps like as if there is no tomorrow...do baje se pehle nahin uthega
d- hey bhagwaan is ladke ki do aadaton se main bahaut pereshaan hoon-ek hai neend aur doosri gussa.
anupam is smiling at dadi's comment
d- aur anupam tum hasna band karo and i need explainations about arrangements
a- fikar not dadi.gauri will do it.she is a magician
ipshita gets mad at anupam becos anupam has given gauri so much work that she does not have any time for herself.she speaks in angry tone
i- mujhe lagta hai ki ye tumhara pet dialouge ho gaya hai..koi kaam karne ko bolo to keh dete ho gauri will do it.anupam gauri bhi insaan hai.voh akeli kitna kaam karegi.
anupam tries to speak but ipshita didn't give him a chance
i- agar tum mujhse ye kehna chahte ho ki tumne gauri se poocha tha ki if she will manage this work aur not..to tum bhi achi tarah jaante ho ki nahi shabad naam ki bhi ek cheez hoti hai duniya mein ye gauri ko pata hi nahi hai.par main tum par apni energy waste kyun kar rahi hoon..tum to gauri se bhi gaye guzre ho..but u were rite gauri is a magician.uske paas har problem ka solution hai
d- ye gauri kaun hai jiski wajah se anupam ko itni daant pad rahi hai

jus then gauri enters anupam's house.she is wearing a salwaar-kameez of light blue color.she has her glasses on.her hairs are open.her simplicity is adding to her beauty.ipshita notices her and walks towards her.they both hug each other.ipshita escorts gauri to dining table
a- what timing gauri
g- ms chatterjee sir
a- matlab
g-main yahan pooja ki arrangrments dekhne aayi hoon jo mere boss ke orders hain,mere dost ke nahin

a big smile spreads on dadi's face when she saw gauri.somewhere in her heart dadi felt that this girl really is gonna make everything right.ipshita introduces dadi to gauri.gauri touches her feet and dadi bless her and then kiss her forehead. nikhila also does the same and tells her to call nikhila mom instead of madam and also call dadi- dadi.this was first time gauri was greeted by someone with so much affection.her eyes get moistened but she took hold of herself without letting anyone know.anupam,dadi and nikhila leaves as they has some urgent work and also has to pick the priest from temple.as they go a tear fall down from gauri's eyes.ipshita hugs her

i-dekha maine kaha tha na tumhe yahan aana chahiye.

gauri nods.they both now get down to work.all the servants are helping them.now gauri had tied her hair back and wrapped her dupatta on her waist.she is instructing servants and also helping.she is totally engrossed in her work.ipshita is also working.
i-(yelling at servant)ye orchids yahan kya kar rahe hain...gauri ne kaha tha ki orchids main door par lageinge to ye main hall mein kya kar rahe hain
servant- soory mam
i-(louder) what sorry hun
gauri stops ipshita and tell servant to place the orchids at proper place.ipshita asks gauri to take some rest as they both worked for four hours continously.major part is done so ipshita requests gauri to take some rest and have some coffee.they both sit on sofa.they r holding cup of coffee in thier hands
i- tum sabse mil chuki ho bas shiv reh gaya hai
g-usse milne ko interested bhi kaun hai
i-gauri tumhe usse milna chaiye,vo ek acha insaan hai.har ladki usse milne ko tarasti hai aur tum ho ki mana kar rahi ho
g-tunhe bataane ki zaroorat nahin hain.pichle ek hafte mein main shiv ke baare mein sab jaan chuki hoon.waise tumhare is so called ache ladke ki aaj tak kitni girlfriends reh chuki hain.
i- explain plz
g-anupam ne mujhe list di thi-u know special guests of mr shiv kapoor jis mein saari ladkiyaan thi.mujhe sab ko phone karke invite karna tha.aur jab bhi main unhe batati ki ye party mr.shiv kapoor ne rakhi hai to mere aage questions ki line laga deti thi..OMG SHIIIV... WAPAS KAB AAYA...MAIN USSE BAHAT NARAAZ HOON VO MUJHE BATA NAHIN GAYA THA...MY SWEET HEART...MY DARLING...USNE MUJHE PROMISE KIYA THA KI AANE SE PEHLE MUJHE PHONE KAREGA...I DON'T BELIVE U...ipshita ek ladki ne to hadh hi kar di,mujhse kehti hai ki main shiv se door rahoon,main uski employee hoon aur employee ban ke rahoon.shiv sirf uska hai,i mean vih ladki jaanti kya thi mere baare mein.shiv uska ho ya kisi aur ka mujhe isse kya.stupid girls,inke paas aur koi kaam nahi hai kya karne ko
i-(laughing)gauri vo smart hai to itna flirt to chalta hai
ipshita then tells gauri about the airport incident.
g-pata nahin ye shiv kapoor kya bala hai..u know qwhat ipshita tum sab ko uska naam shiv se badal kar krishan rakh dena chahiye.kyunki shiv ji to sirf gauri ke the aur tumhaare shiv ki to krishan ji ki tarah bahaut saari gopiyaan hain.mujhe to shiv ki bwi par abhi se taras aata hai.bechaari jaanti bhi nahin ki kahan phasne waali hai..poor girl

without evenn realising what she has said gauri gets up irritated and starts working.anupam,dadi and nikhila had heard her but they pretended that they had not heard anything.there was axbig smile on dadi's face.ipshita is sitting confused.but there was also one more person who heard it.he was awake becos of ipshita's loud voice.yes shiv also hears everything but he was not able to see the face of the girl who was saying all this but he recognised the voice that it was same as that voice that he heard on anupam's cell.gauri's voice.thwere is a big smile on his face as if he had found world's biggest treasure.he is lost in his thots and words SHIV SIRF GAURI KE THE kept on ringing in his ears.he was feeling top of the world.on the other hand gauri has taken the leave.and again thay were not able to meet




here goes the next part.hope this is long enough.and plz do reply to tell me if i should continue or not.till next part bear this crap


as ever 😉
amneet 😳



Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
that was such a sweet update..loved it all the way....wow shiv is fallen completely for her and the line" shiv sirf gauri ke the" mindblowing.....it was superb..i think she is feeling kinda jealous when those girls talked. i hope they meet each other next time. well cant wait for ur next update..keep up the gud work.... 👏

PS: i i think i'm the first to reply....yipeeee
LUV NANDINI
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
Shiv is sooo sweeeet 😍 !! Gauri said tat "Shiv sirf Gauri ke the" How very true 😳 . Plz make them meet soon 😳 Cant wait. It was a lovely part 😳

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