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Cytherea

@Cytherea

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

so shiv is going 2 b dre...nd gauri is going 2 b dre...nd the 2 mite hopefully...possibly meet.. 😃...Yay!! cant wait for ur update...cont soon

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Jenna Dutt

@Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

yur story is great Amneet, pls. continue soon, things will get interesting for Gauri at the pooja, can't wait to read the next update.

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Shina

@nsheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

wow!! just read the ff!! u ought 2 continue!!!
Sounds v interesting! cant wait for darling Shiv's entry 😳 😳 😳

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Naina

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Please do continue. Its nice and fabuolous.

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Diya

@PassionsKaSh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

loved it amneet 😊
cont soon 👏

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

amneet hey its me sukhi! u wanted me to come and read ur new story, so im here, and that means u have to continue writing or else....! plz continue im loving it rite now! 😃

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: amneet89

i jus luv u.u make me feel on cloud nine.u jus like my elder sis as she knows i won't do anything without scoldings .well i promise that next part will b long.thanx a lot.can i call u di plz as i miss her becos he is in india and i m in canada plz.thanx a lot

arre yaar... dil khush karditta sweetie... I remind u of your older sis? is that a good thing?😆 how cute, thanks hun. of course you can call me Di.😊 scoldings eh? I'm good for that hehe😳... ab aap apni ungliyon ko kaam par lagaeingi mauhtarma?? or would u rather an appointment with my danda?😃... u promised a LONG part bachu, and big font don't mean LONG... ahem... *folds arms across chest, taps feet*... waise update ke baare mein kya kehne!! 👏👏 chakaas!!!... kya attitude hai Ippi ka, and the loveria infected Anu😆 Second update and already a friggen raaz!! uff... too many K-shows na?😆 You have really good hindi👏 Beautiful update... very intruiging *HINT HINT* don't u love my subtlety?😆

Cheers,

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saima

@mizz_innocent

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

that was a really gd part 😊 😃
continue soon !! 👏

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Nandini

@nandini27

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

wow, gr8 ff.....just read the 2 parts....its gr8 👏 👏 👏 ...keep up the gud work...update it soon....waiting eagerly.....plzzzzzzzz sooooooooonn.....

LUV NANDINI

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

recap- anupam and ipshita convince gauri to attend the pooja that dadi kept for shiv
gauri- ok but don't expect me to stay for a long time

Part-3

i-(happy tone) thats like my gauri
g- so if u both r done can i go,mujhe bahut kaam hai
a-well ipshita is done but not me(making a wondering something face)vo gauri dadi ne pooja organise karne ki zimmedari mujhe di hai so can u olz do it
g- ok..aur kuch
a-haan vo next day shiv ke liye party bhi organise karni taaki vo saare new clients se mil sake
before anupam could complete ipshita interrupted
i- anupam gauri insaan hai koi robot nahi..sarre kaam hamesha tum issi ko kyun dete...baaki log mar gaye hain kya tumhaare office mein
a- becos my dear would b wife gauri is perfect aur gauri jis cheez ko haath laga de vi apne aap perfect ho jati hai and u know shiv loves perfection
i- i don't anything,gauri itna saara kaam akele nahi karegi
g- ipshita relax.. main manage kar loongi,tum chinta mat karo
i- par gau..
g-ipshita plzzzz
i- karo jo karna hai,waise bhi meri baat yahaan maanta hi kaun hai,jisse dekho apni marzi karta hai,bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha
g-(suprised) look who's talking..well i'll take ur leave,i have lots of work
gauri leaves.ipshta thanks to anupam for helping her to convince gauri.

for next whole week gauri was loaded with work.she has to handle the preprations of pooja and party plus the office work.they are planning to overtake two companies as soon as shiv comes so she has to do that details.anupam helped gauri but still she was working overnights.anupam has given gauri a list of guest,they have to invite everybody by phoning becos of shortage of time.this was first time a work was given to gauri and she hatwed to do that,when ever she calls girls go crazy listening shiv's name and thier stupid questions irritated gauri most.she thinks don't these girls have mind, and what thing this shiv is.he must really idiot that he waste his time with such girls.the pooja was preponed to saturday evening.shiv's flight will arrive at friday morning about 5 and the party is on sunday

AT AIRPORT

we see anupam,dadi and nikhila waiting fir shiv.the arrival of his flight is announced.we see a hot dude coming in blue jeans,rust color shirt and while blazer.he has his gogels on.he is driving ever girl nuts there.this is none other than SHIV KAPOOR.shiv arrives to dadi and touch her feet
d- jeeta reh
dadi puts a black spot taking out kajal from her eyes at back of shiv's ear
d- mere pote ko kise ki nazar na lage
dadi gives disgusting looks to all the girls who were checking out at shiv. shiv smiles at her act and hugs her
s- dadi mujhe kisi ki nazar nahi lagegi..(pointing at a girl who is wearing a mini skirt)waise dai vo ladki itni bhi buri nahi hai,aapka kya khayal hai us ke baare mein
n-achi hai lekin mera kya hoga shiv
nikhila speaks.shiv touches her feet .she bless and then hugs him
s- nikhila mom aap to meri permanent girlfriend ho,aap ki jagah to koi nahin le sakta,aap chinta mat kijiye.

all laugh. then shiv turns to anupam then.they both look at each other from top to bottom.and then give each other a tight hug.
s-ab to mujhe bhi shaadi ke baare mein sochna padega,kam se kam koi tie to baandh dega meri(says pointing towards anupam's tie and dadi and nikhila laugh)waise itni subah subah kahan jaana hai tujhe..i mean ye business suit
a- yaar ek important meeting hai.tum sab ko ghar chod kar seedhe office jaoonga. lunch tak wapis aa jaoonga. i promise
s- u better keep ur promise..WARNA
they all head towards home.as they enter the house shiv takes a big sigh and speaks
s- jo sukh chajoo de chubaare oho balakh na bukhaare(a saying in punjabi that means home is the best,no matter how many beautiful places u see)
by the time anupam's cell phone rings,it is ipshita
i- good morning dobara bolne ki zaroorat to nahin hai phir bhi good morning,shiv aa gaya
a-haan aa gaya
shiv asks is it ipshita and anupam puts phone on speaker
s- hai would b bhabi
i- hai shiv, kaise ho
s- main tumse bhaut gussa hoon,tum mujhe lene kyun nahin aayi.
i-i m sorry,tumhaare liye welcome gift ready kar rahi hoon.issi liye nahi aayi..aur haan anupam gauri aaj office nahin aayegi
a-(suprised and tensed)what..par kyun
i- becos vo mere saath shopping par jaa rahi hai.
a- ipshita tum jaanti ho gauri mere office ki lifeline hai,main uske bina kaise mange karoonga
i- well tumhaare office ki lifeline se pehle vo meri best friend hai.aur ab gauri ko tumhe tumhaara schedule dena hai so talk to her
a- gauri ye sab kya hai.main akele kaise sab manage karoonga
g-sorry anupam,but mere pass koi aur option nahi hai,maine receptionst ke pass saari details de di hain,ofiice jaate hi pick kar lena,waise u have only two meetings today,with khurana's and mehra's.aur isse pehle ki ipshita mujhe maar daale main phone disconnect kar deti hoon.bye and best of luck

all look at anupam with lots of questions on thier faces but he just leaves in anger. shiv was so memorised by the voice he just heard.it has something in it that attracted him.it aaded sugar to his ears,made his heart beat faster.he never had such feeling before.he wants to meet the girl whom anupam calls lifeline of his office.

well here goes part three and i know u all r going to eat and beat me up fot short update but sorry i had homework.i promise,pakka ,next update will b long.till then bear with this piece of crap plz and don't forget to reply,atleast reply for yelling back at me

asever 😉
amneet 😳

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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