New Beginings- new part 4 pg 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: just4coll

Hey it doesn't actually... its interesting, and fun, and I love it. And I love the idea of one shot ff, you don't need to wait on tenterhooks for the nest update. Though I wish u'd put in how they broke the news to Ipshita too....

Any more stories u'd like to tell us... Waiting eagerly...

oh ur just being kind.
as for how they broke the news...i wrote tht in the first part...she walks in on them hugging....and stormed out of their lives for ever

all the charm we need is Shiv and Gauri, so ur doin great, please do continue. 👏

WOW! amazing work hunnii.. brilliant!! i would love to read more of your
stories.. even if they are a prequel and then a part..


hunnii.. you should not be harsh on urself.. the writings are brilliant!!

keep going!

👏

Originally posted by: apapap

oh ur just being kind.
as for how they broke the news...i wrote tht in the first part...she walks in on them hugging....and stormed out of their lives for ever

True... you had... but I was looking for more masala... the entire confrontation scene maybe...
:-D...
But this was good... better than good...
now why not add a sequel... you have written a story... a prequel... if you add a sequel... you'd be completing the circle..!
😉

You did continue... well you had to!! Omg... I'm so excited, but I can't read right now ... Will be back shortly though!!

Sweetness... 😉

Cheers,
dc

u kno wat
this was tooo goooood 👏

beautiful part !!!You truly did justice to it amaziing 👏

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

all the charm we need is Shiv and Gauri, so ur doin great, please do continue. 👏

heyy...i totally agree...shiv and gauri...sigh...thanks for reading it.

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

WOW! amazing work hunnii.. brilliant!! i would love to read more of your
stories.. even if they are a prequel and then a part..


hunnii.. you should not be harsh on urself.. the writings are brilliant!!

keep going!

👏

lolll....ur too kind and sweet...thank u 🤗

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

What are you talking about? Can't write 😲...it you can't write then no one can write, taht was so beautiful ... wonderful...keep up the great work...👏

...thank u for saying so...ur ff is awesome...it brings a smile on my face always

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome story 👏 gr8 👏

thank uu

Originally posted by: angel_tia

u kno wat
this was tooo goooood 👏

thank u so much

Originally posted by: kaira

beautiful part !!!You truly did justice to it amaziing 👏

...i dont know whether i did justice...but thanks for reading

Originally posted by: abhita

True... you had... but I was looking for more masala... the entire confrontation scene maybe... :-D...But this was good... better than good...now why not add a sequel... you have written a story... a prequel... if you add a sequel... you'd be completing the circle..!😉

hey...i did want to write a whole confrontation scene with a bitter showdown etc...but i was totally stumped on how to do so...blanked out mind...have u ever experienced that ? i wanted to write an emotional story ended up writing one bordering on humour...if i had written the confrontation i would have ended up clowning in that too...