New Beginings- new part 4 pg 8 - Page 2

Originally posted by: smartc

Amazing..But I had suspected early on about the end *hehe*. Nevertheless, loved the narrative. 👏 👏 👏

Sana~

hehehe...i did ramble a bit too much na ? thing is when i wrote my first draft it was one page on word but really short for even a one shot ff. hence i rewrote it adding more stuff but ended up repeating. there is only so much i could do with the word "her"....lol...neverthless u liked it..so thanku

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

very good! u really had me fooled until the very end.

thank u so much for reading and liking it

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

your fanfic was great 👏
i didn't figure out till the end that his wife was gauri 😉

hiii...thanks so much for liking my ff..i'm glad it took u by surprise. mission accomplished

Originally posted by: just4coll

Totally rocking. I actually thought I'd was Ipshit right till the end... It was short n sweet and totally perfect.. Thanks!

thank uuuuuuu

Originally posted by: paki_angel

WOW dat was really gud!!! 👏 👏 👏

thank u so much for liking it

It was absolutely brilliant. Till the end I kept believing that he was looking at gauri in the store and thinking as if she was anupam's wife, but the ending really took me by surprise.
It was awesome, looking forward to reading more or your work in the future.

great work!!!!! an unexpected twist in the tale!!!!!!!!

gr8 👏 👏 👏 !!very diffent n nice even i till the end thought that it was ipshita his wife n gauri n anupam together !!!awesome 👏 plz continue soon

Hi, that was one great piece of writing, 👏 👏 Shiv is married to Gauri and have a little girl, so sweet, 😉 love the way the it was done giving out the idea it was Gauri in the market. Damn good skils, thanx

by the way thanx for changing the font size, much easier to read not that i wear glasses, its jus u sit on the bloody machine and ur eyes start to give up,

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Wat a good writer and u surely know how to fool people....dAt was really gd...thnkx 😉

Xx.Gold.Gurl.xX

Great work hun..omg..u totally had me fooled... 👏 👏 👏

Min

oh my god that was brilliant u had me fooled keep up the gud work