VeeraZara-ff 4 Shiv-Gauri-last partPage13 - Page 3

Part-5.....Shiv's brother cumes near them.
Shiv:this my
student gauri bhai. he:hi,i'm vivan.nice 2 meet u.
they shake hands.
G was writing sumthing. Ipshita
cumes:what r u writing gauri?
G:i'm writing a letter 2
Veer.
I:wow!but how did u get his home address.
G:its
not his home address.in the magazine a separate address
is given 4 his fans.
I:a lot of fans will be sending him
letters.will he notice urs specially?
G:no idea.but i
wish that he'll understand my interest 4 him.i've
expressed everything in this letter.i've written that
i've started learning music.when i reach a stage 2 do a
stage show,i'll surely sing his poem.thats my gr8set
dream,will it happen ipshita?
I:yes.gauri,is it an
ordinary craze or u just luv him?
G:i dunno.but i really
doubt whether i'm in luv with him.if i get him
4ver..i'll be the most luckiest person in this world.
A
few days later,G gets a reply.she opens the cover. "i
think u r a special fan of mine.i'm glad that u'll sing
my poem 4 ur 1st stage show.when u do ur 1st stage
performance,inform me,i'll be there,sure evif i'm
busy.bcoz u r special 2 me. with luv Veer."
G was so
happy that she jumps with joy. Ipcumes:why r u so
excited?
G:ipshita,veer replied.god heard my prayer.
I:really? G:ya..
Gauri looks into the leeter.
"Gauri,this is my new poem.this i'm sending it 4 u.no1
has read it b4.u r the 1st 1 2 read it."
G sings
Veer's poem:pehla nasha.....
At the same time Shiv was
singing it at home.

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

great update 👏 👏
r u bringing in Anupum as shiv's brother 😉 😛

that would be cute!! (anupam or vivan.. they are both nice so w/e)😳😊

awsume part 😳
besides,i m not sure but i think shiv is veer n he is deliberately writing poems with the name of veer 😃
m i rite 😕
continue soon 👏

im confused is shiv veer 😕 nice and interesting ff 👏 👏 👏

Gud one ,please continue sooooon

please continue 😊 😊

Part-6...Gauri goes 2 shiv's house.he has'nt reached
there till now.G was simply roaming about.
Vivan:gauri,u want 2 read any magazine?1 is there on
my desk.u take & read it.let me go out.
V goes
out. G goes 2 his room & takes the magazine. A cover
falls down from the magazine.she takes it & opens it.she
was wondered:its the letter i sent 4 Veer.how did it cum
here? that means Veer is a pen name.its inside vivan's
magazine?that means Veer is prithvi?wow!Veer is near me.
G becomes very happy.she stands at the verandah 4
V.but S only cumes.
S:hi gauri
G was not
so happy 2 say hi 2 him as she was expecting vivan.
S:sorry,i was late.
G was moving after the music
class got over. then cumes V.her face becomes
sweet like a blossomed flower. S notices it.he
smiles.
V:gauri,u r going back?
G:ya...
V:ok
bye..
G:bye..
V turns back & starts walking.
G:vivan...
V turns back:yes seening shiv,she
becomes conscious. G:nothing.
V smiles & goes
away. while G was going,S calls from behind.
S:u
wanted 2 say sumthing 2 vivan?
G was stunned.
S:that i understood.was i an obstacle?
G:no. S:i no
that i was.ok,a circumstance will cum 2 open ur heart.
G:what r u telling?
S had a naughty smile. G
gets shy.
G:i'm going..On the way G thinks:Veer has
special affection 4 me.thats why he has kept my lettewr
with him.shud i tell vivan that i'm the 1 who sent
that letter?no...let the time cum.then i'll say.
G
smiles. G goes hugs ipshita. G:ipshita,2day i'm so
happy.i saw veer.
I:what? G:ya. I:did u talk 2 him?
G smiles. I:is he handsom? G:very handsome.
V tells S:shiv bayya,i'd taken ur magazine 2
read. V givs it back. S takes it & keeps it in
his cupboard.
V:i heard u singing a romantic poem.pehla
nasha....
S:its my new poem.
V:what inspired u 2 write
it?u've written pehla nasha...
S:1st time i'm in nasha.
V:what? S:yes bhai.my luv inspired me 2 write this.
V:oh bhayya..u r in luv? who is ur luv? WHO IS SHIV"S
LUV?

its very very beautiful, the way you write it was just moving like a picture in my eyes .thanx for the update

very nice update 😊 😃 😉
4 sure gauri is his love 😳 😳 😳
but does he knows that its the same gauri whom he teaches music 😕
continue soon 👏

wow ur ff ia amasing!! 👏
plz cont soon!! 😊