Love at First Sight/part 18-Love you

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ppl say love is just lust.
But I think love is the most beautiful feeling in the world.
I am Gauri and I don't know the meaning of love yet but I do know it's not lust!

Love is noting more than lust.
I've never experienced love and never will.
Shiv Kapoor will never fall in love.

part 1- pg. 1
part 2- pg. 3
part 3- pg. 4
part 4- pg. 6
part 5- pg. 9
part 6- pg. 13
part 7- pg. 15
part 8- pg. 18
part 9- pg. 21
part 10- pg. 23
part 11- pg. 26
part 12- pg. 27
part 13- pg. 30
part 14- pg. 31
part 15- pg. 33
part 16- pg. 35
part 17- pg. 36
part 18- pg. 37
part 19- coming soon....

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
wow it sounds really interesting 👏 👏
can't wait to read the first part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gauri: Shy, independent, cares about others before herself, believes in love and thinks it is an amazing feeling. Very traditional. Goes to college in Mumbai.

Shiv: Popular, flurt, cares about his popularity, realations are nothing to him, doesn't believe in love. Modern and social. Goes to college in Mumbai.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's the first day of college and Gauri is sitting alone with a book in her hands. she feels a tap on her shoulder and turns to see her best friend anupam. she continues reading and anupam sits down..

a-what are you doing?
g-reading
a-i see that but why?
g-its a love story and i really want to know what happens in the end
a (snatches the book)-ok well read it later.. your coming with me! (drags gauris hand)

anupam takes gauri to a group of ppl. gauri feels uncomfortable.

g(whispers to anupam)-tum mujhe kahan le aye?
a(whispers back)-dont worry.. theyre my friends...
g-ok..
a-this is gauri and gauri this is vivan, kaya, aaliyah, kripa, and prithvi.
all-hi gauri
g(shy but manages a smile)-hi

soon its time to go in... gauri goes to her first class and is the only one there. soon everyone starts coming. no one sits by gauri. gauri doesnt mind. the teacher takes atendence. when she calls shiv. a muscular guy walks in panting.

s-im sry maam... my dad.. he had to go to the hospital adn he wanted to talk to me... he told me that if he dies to keep my family safe. (lying)
teacher(crying)-awww.. itz ok shiv.. your excused... go have a seat.
s-yes maam

shiv grins and looks around and sees a seat next to a gauri (he doesnt know her though). he sits there.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow plz continue it sounds interesting
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i was busy thats why itz short..
thanks! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

i was busy thats why itz short..
thanks! 😳 😳 😳

It was not too short.

Now your not busy.right???

So plzzzz cont...

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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
nice fanfic.very gud starting.
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great startin! i'm luving shiv's character already....he sounds the type of guy to corner gauri into an empty classroom. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzz continue
uur ff is vv good 👏

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