Ishq vishk-ff 4 Shiv-Gauri - Page 7

Originally posted by: askthind

i think maybe shiv did, maybe he was very angry for some reason and he was drinkin alot so he did that...unbeliebable but who knows...GREAT STORY!! if i were gauri, i would DEFINITELY forgive him, i mean hes jus too hott to stay mad at

true lol

Part-17...Shiv:I was a spoilt brat.i've gone began
girls.but I'd never crossed my limit.but that day I was
alone & was drunk.i lost my control.I got inside ur room
without even knowing who the person is. In that spirit,I
raped u.
Gauri was shocked:no!
S weeps:I'm sorry gauri.i only shattered ur dreams.i
only destroyed ur life.u were pregnant with my baby.its
our baby who died.
G is stunned. S:i'm sorry.wil u 4giv me?
G is silent. S:gauri..
G screams:no!u devil!u r the cheater.u r a wolf in a
lamb's skin.why did u do this 2 me?tell dammed.
S's tears flow down.he was quite shocked 2 see G's new
face.
S:wil u 4giv me gauri?plz…
G shouts:shut up.no girl can 4giv a person who raped
her.
G moves 2wards the sea waves.
S:where r u going gauri?
G:I want 2 die.how can I tolerate the truth that the
person whom I loved the most is the person who raped me?
G walks 2 the water. S:gauriiiiiiiiiii
S runs 2 her & holds her hand. G:leave me
S:no. S pulls her back. S:why shud an innocent
person like u die?the person who shud die is myself.
S walks backward 2 the water.
G is shocked.G:noooooo!
G runs 2wards S & falls on his chest:plz don't punish
urself like this shiv.i cannot tolerate sumthing bad
happening 2 u.
S:why?still u care 4 me?don't u remember what I did 2
u?I'm bad.
G:yes,still I luv u.u r not bad shiv.eventho u
shattered my dreams,u colored my black & white dreams
again.u loved me like anything.that's more than enuf 4
me 2 4giv u.
S was surprised:gauri?
G:I luv u shiv.
G smiles with tears. S-G hug each other her tightly.
THE END




GUYS,PLZ WRITE THE CRITICAL APPRECIATION OF THIS STORY IN 1 small PARAGRAPH.WHAT U LIKED IN THIS STORY,UR FAV SCENES WHICH TOUCHED UR HEART,HOW U FELT IMAGINING IQBAL-PALLAVI AS MY CHARACTERS ETC

The story of ur fanfic was very touching n close to heart ❤️ ; although it was completely different from the real serial but it was a pleasure 😳 reading ur ff;it was very emotional n @ times it made me cry 😭 .The best thing about ur ff was that it was realistic n u gave it a new original start rather than continuing it from any point of the serial.My fav part was when shiv confessed that he was the one who spoilt gauri's life n he was being true to her.This was the most touhing scene i could ver imagine 😭 .When i was imagining ur ff it felt like i was going through a completely different story which had nothing to do with the serial.the characters of iqbal n pallavi were absolutely oblivious to the characters of the serial n that is what attracted me to read ur ff which potrayed them differently. 😊

this was a vv good end
i lykd evrything abt ur story!!!!!!!!!
i cannot criticize it ay all!!!!!!
i luvvvv the last part!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

u ended it😭i luved this ff sooooooooooo much😭 how can shiv do that??????????????????????????????????????🤢but watever it was a lovely ff👏👏. actually i liked all the parts. 😉one part used to cum i use to eagerly wait for the next part😃

sooooooooo this is over. .and plsssssssssss write sum more ff"s😳

and update veerzaara😆😆

it got over butttttttttt it was really superb
best of luck 4 veerzaara 👏