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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
luvvvly
continue soon!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
I had posted 9th & 1oth parts earlier.


Part-11...Gauri smiles. Shiv becomes happy &
smiles.suddenly the rape scene cums into her mind.her
eyes fill up with tears.S becomes dull:gauri..
G cries & runs.Tears cum from S's eyes..
S turns back.suddenly sum1 pours red color water.S turns
back.He cud see the smiling G.S becomes happy. G:I
luv u shiv S hugs G.
but suddenly she vanishes.S becomes sad when he realizes
that it was a dream.his eyes rose.
G goes home crying.There she was surprised 2 see
ipshita talking 2 gayatri. G:ipshita! G hugs her.
I:what happened gauri?
Ga:is everything alright?
G:mama,I was 4getting my past.a special person brought
back the cheers of my life.
Ga:who is he? G:shiv.
I:what did shiv do 2 u?what made u cry?
G:shiv did sumthing 2 me.that made me cry
I-Ga r shocked. Ga:what did he do 2 u?
G:he proposed 2 me.
I-Ga r shocked. Ga:how is he?
G:he's a very nice guy. Ga:do u luv him?
G:yes.i luv him a lot,even more than myself.but how can
I accept him?I'm spoilt.
Ga weeps. I:no,that was'nt ur fault.then how can u tell
that u r spoilt.Aunty,I think if they both luv each
other,we've 2 conduct their wedding.
Ga:yes.its gauri's luck that a boy has come who luvs her
very much.
G:but mama,how can I tell shiv about my past?
Ga:don't tell G:what? Ga:that was'nt ur fault.so whats
the need of telling him?
G:no,that's cheating I:its not cheating.bcoz the
thing that has happened in ur life is not ur fault.so
gauri..don't make angad upset.he'll b waiting 4 ur
reply.holi is the correct occasion 2 open ur heart.tell
him that u luv him very much.
G:what? Ga:yes.ur mama is telling.go.go gauri.
Ga raises her voice. G runs.All r busy playing with
colors.G searches 4 S.Finally G sees S sitting alone
at a corner with dim eyes.
G:shivvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv! S turns back. G runs 2 him.tears fall
from her eyes.Her palm contained red color.she pours it
on his face.S smiles.they look at each other's
eyes.song:aankhon mein{ishq vishq}
Ipshitai goes back. Shashank:where did u go?
I:I went 2 see gauri
S:what?still now u both r in
contact?
I:ya. S:u no what she did 2 me.she cheated on me.so
she mite cheat u also.so stop this frienship.
I:impossible.gauri is my best friend & I'll b there
always with her.
S becomes angry:ipshita!still u r ..?
I:gauri did'nt cheat on u.u dunno why gauri did'nt marry
u.but I no that.bcoz she did'nt want 2 cheat on u.
S is stunned.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
just fabulous. 😉 😛 but thanxxxxxxxxx a lot for the 8th part. 😳 ur soooooooooooo sweet 😳 plssssssssssss cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
nice..now wat will happen...........i think gauri shud tell shiv bout her past.........n then if he doesnt accept her.......its not luv........i hope shashank doesnt create any more prob........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Part-12...Ipshita tells everything.I weeps:that's why
gauri…she was sacrificing u 4 me.
Shashank cud'nt believe:no! I:this is the truth
shashank.i'm always gr8ful 2 her 4 giving me the most
precious gift.that's u shashank.no1 else wud've given
such a lovly gift.
S:oh!what did I do 2 gauri?u cud've told b4.now its too
late.
S weeps. I:do u feel like going back 2 gauri?
S feels sad about I's fear. S:don't worry ipshita.i no
I'm a husband now.but let me apologize gauri
I:yes.u
must.
I:after we all forced,gauri has agreed 2 marry a person
who loves her very much.
S is shocked.
Gayatri opens the door.That was shashank.G was
surprised:shashank!cum inside.
S:aunty,I came 2 see gauri.
G becomes dull. S:I just want 2 tell her sorry.i won't
hurt her anymore.
They turn back.Gauri was standing there with stunned
expressions.
S:I'm sorry gauri.i hurt u so much.
Gau:its ok shashank.look after ipshita. S:sure.wish u a
happy married life.he'sa luck guy 2 get u.
Gau:thanx shashank.

Months passed.Shiv-Gauri get married.!st nite. S:I'm
lucky 2 get u.i doubt whether I deserve u?
G's face becomes dull.G thinks:Shiv trusts &
respects me so much.if he cums 2 no the truth…
S:what r u thinking?
G:I doubt whether I deserve a gud husband like u.
S smiles:cum on gauri.we both deserve each other,bcoz we
r made 4 each other.
G smiles.S looks into G's eyes deeply.
He hugs her.Suddenly rape scene cums into
her mind.she gets scared.G moves away from S.
S:what happened gauri?
G was sweating:nothing.
G lies
down. S becomes sad & tries 2 walk out. G feels
sad.G:shiv!
S turns back. G smiles:r u leaving me alone?cum near me.
S smiles.He goes near her. G hugs S.
Light is put off.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
REALY GREAT!!! but i think before gauri and shiv do the "ahen" she should tell him...srry, jus felt it would be more romantic when shiv finds out and holds gauri near her and tells her "i dont care, i luv u and that wasnt even ur fault" sumthin like that...srry again but i think it would be even better if ther was more romance...otherwise, REALLY GREAT!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Part-13....Shiv-gauri go 2 singapore 4 honeymoon.They see diff
places & enjoy.
They share romantic moments.song:chote…{ishq vishq}
They cum back.shiv runs home.He was surprised 2 see
naina there:choti ma..
N smiles:how r u shiv beta?
S:I'm fine.but I'm sad that u did'nt attend my wedding
N:what 2 do?it was an imp tour 2 states.i still hunger 2
do new things in medicine.
S:did u gain in that?
N:ofcourse.ok,ur mom told about ur wife.she was ur
collegemate.her name…I 4got.where is ur wife?
Gauri cums in. G & naina r shocked 2 see each other.

S:this is my choti ma Dr.naina.
G was shocked:choti ma?
G was shattered.
S:this is my wife.her name is…
N:if I'm right Gauri Sharma..?
S:yes.so u cud remember.how did u like my wife?
N:I can say 'yes' not 2 make u upset.but since I don't
want 2 see u heart broken I've 2 tell the truth that I
did'nt like ur wife.
G becomes sad.Unexpectedly S laughs:choti ma is joking.
G gets confused.
N:I'm not joking.i'm serious.how can I like this
cheater?
S:choti ma?
N:this girl is cheating u.don't trust her.this girl had
cum 2 my hospital.she was pregnant.she had miscarriage.
S & others r shocked. N:how can I b happy about u
marrying a spoilt girl who was'nt a virgin?becoming
pregnant b4 marriage..however modern,I don't agree this.

S stares at G.G gets tensed. S goes near G. G:shiv..
S:is it true?or choti ma is misunderstanding?

WILL GAURI TELL THE TRUTH?WHAT'S SHIV'L B REACTION?



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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
damnnn this is just 2 harshhhhh.....poor gauri...wasnt even her fault....

keep up the good work...

continue soon...
jiya imdad thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
that was a wikid suspense 😃
can't wait to read her answer
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Part-14...Gauri cries:its true.
All r shocked. Shiv:what?I don't believe this.tell gauri
that its choti ma's misunderstanding.
G cries.G's silence makes S upset.S tries 2 go.G holds
his hand:shiv..listen 2 me.i did'nt do anything wrong.
Naina:then how did u become pregnant?who is that
person?tell us now.
S goes out.G:shiv…plz listen 2 me.
S does'nt listen 2 G.he goes.
S thinks:how cud gauri cheat on me?I expected an
innocent sweet girl as my wife.i saw that in gauri.but…
S cries:Gauriiiiiiiiiii
Song:Tharapt….{hum dil de chuke sanam}
He goes 2 a bar & drinks a lot.

Shiv's mom Damini weeps:how cud u cheat on us.my poor
son.what did he do 2 u?he just luvd u blindly.that was
his fault.
Naina:tell where ur lover is?r u still having contact
with him?
G stares at N. N:I'm talking about ur dead baby's dad.
G:believe me.i dunno anything about him.
N:where does he stay?
G:I dunno.i don't know who he is.
N:what nonsense?
G:plz listen 2 me.
Damini:tel what u want 2 say.
G tells everything.N:nice story.what do u think its
believable?
G:plz belive me.this is what happened.
G falls on D's leg:mama,plz beliv me.do u think I'm that
sort of a girl?
D-N feel pity. D:u go 2 ur room.
G goes with tears. D:I think gauri is innocent.her
words…her tears r not fake.
N:even I feel so.

G,N,D,S's dad Dileep wait 4 shiv.S did'nt cum.Shiv
cums in the late nite.
G weeps:shiv!
S goes 2 his room.G goes near him:shiv,why did u drink
so much.
S goes unconscious:gauri,why did u do this 2 me?go..
G cries.G phones ipshita. I:gauri,how r u?
G cries. I:what happened gauri?
G tells everything.Ip weeps:don't worry gauri.everything
wil b alright.

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