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Posted: 19 years ago
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In silent whispers,
Speak to you...
She shall..

Like the summer breeze,
Soothe the restless heart..
She shall...

Through the dark,
Lead you to dawn,
She shall...

Song of the soul ,
Sing for you..
She shall...

Walk beside you,
Forever ,
She shall...

Let go of you,
Shall she never,
For your...
Guardian Angel
She is...

To eternity ..
Stand by you..
She shall...

A divine gift,
A unseen blessing...
She is , to you...

Fight the dark mask,
Battle the demons,
You shall,
For your strength,
She shall be...

Lone, shall you..
Never stand...
For with you ...
She stands...

A divine blessing ,
An eternal companion,
She shall remain...
To you... the guardian angel..

For Angels never die....

-Sareeta

- Penned on basis of Gauri being SHiv's Gaurdian angel, and that she shall not die...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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dam goodddddddddddd yep she wil nevr die 😃 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sareeta,
😭 This was brilliant...I know you wrote this for Gauri and Shiv...

But when I was reading it reminded me of Daddy...Well touchwood mom and dad are fine..

But its something I always feel that my dad is my superman..I just need to talk to him about my problems and he will make it ok for me...anything and absolutely anything..and if for some reason he cant...i just know he is there like my guardian angel..

Brilliant !!!!! 👏
you are just awesome 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yapp, Gauri is Shiv guardian angel and angels never die, well said, dii. 👏

How do write such fantastic poem so quick...?? It most be God's gift to you 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sareeta it really touches the heart..

a guardian angel she is for shiv ..loved this end part..
"Lone, shall you..
Never stand...
For with you ...
She stands...

A divine blessing ,
An eternal companion,
She shall remain...
To you... the guardian angel..

For Angels never die"....

so well penned down sareeta .. 👏 👏

awesome ,fantastic and very touching.

really appreciated and enjoy reading it... 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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U R GR8 SAREETA...ONCE AGAIN I AM LEFT SPEECHLESS....!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sareeta i am tired of praising u. but i will bez the poem is just soooooooooooooooooooooo.. touchy. where from u get the ideas. u donot seem to take much time to work them out. just awesome. superb, wonderful,emotional.oh and now i should stop. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurii__

dam goodddddddddddd yep she wil nevr die 😃 👏

THank you soooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Di,

Omg... you leave me breathless yet again...

👏👏

~wow~....

You honestly possess some magic, as everytime I read your work, I'm lost in a jungle of emotions...

So powerfully intense, so real... I can almost feel it...

Your passage most righteously reflects the reality of KAA... Gauri will never die, Shiv's extreme love for her will save her, and she will never die for him... After all, what is Shiv without Gauri and visa versa?

Fight the dark mask,
Battle the demons,
You shall,
For your strength,
She shall be...

Love it... Love it to the core... She will be his strength... the pillar of support, the shield against the threatening waves... the comfort in every step of this journey, whether the feet fall upon thorns, or pedals of roses....

Thank you so much for sharing your brilliance once again!! And please continue to do so!

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: hamsee

Sareeta,
😭 This was brilliant...I know you wrote this for Gauri and Shiv...

But when I was reading it reminded me of Daddy...Well touchwood mom and dad are fine..

But its something I always feel that my dad is my superman..I just need to talk to him about my problems and he will make it ok for me...anything and absolutely anything..and if for some reason he cant...i just know he is there like my guardian angel..

Brilliant !!!!! 👏
you are just awesome 🤗

Awww, Hamsee, that was so sweet of you to share your thoughts!!! I was reminded of my 5th class schoool teacher who told me about guardian angels to me , for the first ever time and I believe it even now, can never let go of the thought!!

So glad you could relate to the post so deeeply!!! Thank you yaar!! 😊

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