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Posted: 19 years ago
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Destined to be bound in the eternal bond forever, they walked together unaware , one in acceptance of all that was , one in denial.

She letting go of her all, drowning in glory of the essence of life, of blissful truth of her destiny, the man , destined to be her forever companion... she seeks him in all she believes, trusts him beyond her own, denies him never of the truth he is entitled to know, respects him for the man she is... and in him she seeks solace as the ghosts of the past threaten her, for her hope, her faith , her destiny , he is , she knows.

He , harboured a secret , of a deceitful attempt , unable to defy, play along he did, unwillingly, yet seek he did to set her free , for set that would , him free of an unwanted bond. A deceitful attempt, he wished never to be a part of , he bears it deep in his heart , a searing guilt tearing him apart , as her unwavering faith in his intentions , considered noble, like the mirror reflect the ghastly mask, that mocks and scorns him ....

Burdened by a painful guilt of mocking a bond of trust , he surrenders to the overwhelming power of guilt, notwithstanding, for perish his wishes not, drowning in his guilt and scornful truth he bears , that threatens to tear him apart , his soul ...

Helpless she is, he beleives, misused for deceitful intentions, scornful as it seems, he wishes to defy , for shall he no more , defy his own noble intentions and don no more shall he the mask of deceit...

Seek solace he does despite all, in her unwavering faith and affection for him, for like the summer rain does it soothe his burned and tortured being , that simmers like the baked earth in the cruel summer...

Tears shall be shed in agony , in pain, in guilt , for the tears shall wash away the ashes , the ruins... and emerge they shall their pure selves, bond together forever....

-Sareeta

For Shiv and Gauri based on the episode aired on 27th Nov 2006

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwww sweety,]... 😳 so true and wonderful execution of the feelings of shiv and gauri!awesome janu 👏 ( i hope u dont mind if i called u that) 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's brilliant, Sareeta.... 👏 👏 👏 You beautifully placed Shiv & Gauri's feelings in words...Wow!! It's too good..I'm just out of words...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u've summed up the episode so beautifully 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vcool

awwww sweety,]... 😳 so true and wonderful execution of the feelings of shiv and gauri!awesome janu 👏 ( i hope u dont mind if i called u that) 😳

Awww, thank you so much!!!! No I dont mind you calling me that... its awwright.. although I have a nickname.. Angel, so you can if you wanna..... 'Janu' sounds so sooo bollywood!! 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinita

Brilliantly said 👏 👏

Thank you soooo much Rinita! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: TiNa58

It's brilliant, Sareeta.... 👏 👏 👏 You beautifully placed Shiv & Gauri's feelings in words...Wow!! It's too good..I'm just out of words...

Awww, thanks Tina so much!!! Am glad you enjoyed it! You dont need to use extra words to describe your appreciation. I understand dear friend! I perfectly understand and its this appreciation that makes me wanna share my thoughts with y'all as well! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you so much!!!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivaviva

u've summed up the episode so beautifully 👏 👏

Thank you soooooooooo much Sindhu! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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she seeks solace as the ghosts of the past threaten her, for her hope, her faith , her destiny , he is , she knows.

You pen down so beautifully.I really liked the above line,which exactly shows the present state of gauri.

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