Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan...ff part 28(p.150)

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racho8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#91

wowwww...very nice

hope both of em figures it out soon...

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#92

ohhhhhhhhhhh haila that was mindblowing.. he was drunk - bad bad bad.. luved the way u described everything.. superb.. awwwwwwwwww cupid has done his job.. now its fo them to do d rest that was wow.. she was jealous of him dancin wit another grl and now she's worried about him.. 👏

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Shagufta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#93

awesome story cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏

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Charu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#94

superb!!!!! u write sooooooo good....publish a novel or something....u need tht kinda recognition
👏

hope u cont sooon

cya charz

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desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#95

lol😆😆

you guys are so sweet!! me and publish a novel? haila!! you guys made me famous in a moment! lol, thanks so much!! I really appreciate the comments! 🤗

Cheers,
dc

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bccool

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Posted: 18 years ago

#96

wow fantabulous am waitin for more ................

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kaira11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#97

hey eagerly waitin for the next part please continue soon

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Mauli

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Posted: 18 years ago

#98

amazing part!!! i loved it!! 😳

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Khushi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#99

hey DC

I've read some of your fan fics before and I have to

say without a doubt that your probably one of the best

writters on this forum. I feel like I'm reading a book

whenever I read one of your posts. You're a really good

writer. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Keep up the

amazing work. Good luck on school stuff!! I know how

feel, I'm going through the same thing!

*Khushi*

Edited by ugababe - 18 years ago