Shiv+Gauri Completed-Happy Ending-pg 24 - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
awesome hunnii..!!

please do continue and make the parts a little longer!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
wow!!! tht was awesome guyz 👏 👏 👏 ....i just caught up!....n i luved it 😳 😃 ...so now shiv found out the whole truth...hmmm...i wonder wat his reaction wud b....n how he wud react to gauri now.....gr8 works guyz 👏 ...continue soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: KHJL

wow!!! tht was awesome guyz 👏 👏 👏 ....i just caught up!....n i luved it 😳 😃 ...so now shiv found out the whole truth...hmmm...i wonder wat his reaction wud b....n how he wud react to gauri now.....gr8 works guyz 👏 ...continue soon!

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i don't even know how he will react let me think then i will cont!😉😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
finally he found outttt...

awsomeee 👏

continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
i read ur whole ff today..suoerb...cant wait 4 de next pat cont soonnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 14
Shiv is really madd today..He is goingg crazy.
Shiv: Noo dad.. U can't do thiss..
He can't take it anymore. He goes to the bar. There he drinkss sooo muchh that he can't even manage to stand up. Every time he tries to stand he falls. After a while or so this woman comes.
Woman: Driver. Jaldi aao. Take him to the car.
The driver takes him to the car. He makes Shiv lie on the back seat. And the women sits in the car as well.
Driver: Madam kahan jaana hai?
Woman: To the kapoor's house.
When they reach the kapoor house the woman tells the driver to take him inside.
Inside the house.
Every one is worried. When they see a driver bringing shiv with him and how shiv is drink they all get shocked.Nikhila runs upto the driver.
Nikhila: Kya hoa iisse?
Driver: I was in the bar(pub) and he was totally drunk. He tried to get up but every time he fell so i brought him here. Every one was soo worried abt shiv they didnt care abt asking how the driver got their address and how the driver knew where to go.
Nikhila: Mahen aap shiv ko isske room men ley key jaeen. Gauri plz tum bhi.
Gauri: jee.
Mahen takes shiv to his room. When mahen is gone gauri is sitting beside shiv wondering some stuff when shiv says(in a drunk condition) Dad can't do this to mee.. and he blabbers out the truth. Gauri is dead shocked when she hears this..
Gauri: How did Shiv find out? 😕

*Who was the woman? How did she know abt the Kapoor's?
* What is shiv's reaction gonna be to his dad AND Gauri?

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
PLease continue soon! It's to good!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
awesome too good fabulous i love it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
continue👏 soon plz 👏
Edited by pooh_bear - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
cont soon....w8g 4 gauri reactionnn

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