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Gauri is walking in the garden.... in the night..... thinking about Shiv.... she has been checking the time on her watch from time to time.... its already 10:30 and everyone were off to bed .... after dinner.... she was waiting for him.....

She had called him an hour ago.... and he had said.... he would be a little late... and not to wait for him....

As cool breeze hit the flowers and bushes and left a sweet scent in the air.... She took a deep breath and gave out a sigh..... and kept walking around slowly..... just to pass her time.....

She suddenly felt someone..... hold her..... close her mouth with one hand and with the other hand on her waist just lift her and took her to the tree a few steps away ...... and put her on the ground..... and left her....

All this had happened in a fraction of a minute.... Gauri turned half in anxiety and half in horror.... to find Shiv..... smiling at her..... and was walking on to her...... as she walked back hitting the tree......

She slowly said.... " Shiv....." and gave a smile.... deepening her dimples....

A soft breeze had blow by and Gauri's hair flew up in the air.... ..

Looking at her.... angelic look.... with her wavy hair.... moving smoothly to the breeze... made Shiv
skip a beat..... he moved his one hand..... slowly on to her face.... and put the few small tendrils... blocking his view.... and then touching her soft skin... made him.... take a deep breath....

It felt magical.... every time he touched her... something in him.... gave a satisfaction..... of completeness...... Till he sees her.... he is restless.... once he sees her he is more restless......
but as soon as he touches her..... its like.... the wave has finally reached the land and can now rest in peace.....

Gauri knew Shiv's touch...... and she could tell with every touch.... there was a feeling..... but the thing she didnot know ..... was.... With every touch.... she would quiver..... her feet would feel numb like standing for a long time in cold water..... her hands would shiver...... her breath would get stuck in her throat.....

There was something magical about his touch...... and his voice...... and his expressive eyes...... that exhibited.... authoritativeness.... and possessiveness..... that mischief..... She could see every emotion.......

Gauri closed her eyes...... taking a deep breath..... as Shiv moved his finger seductively along the length of her cheekbone..... to below her lips..... and then lifted her face a little to tilt her face up ...... he knew the effect he had on her..... but he wondered..... whether gauri knew the effect she had on him....???

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He had walked in and found ramu kaka opening the door.... and not finding Gauri.... he was disappointed..... he had immediately asked the question to ramu kaka who had told him she was in the garden behind the house...... he had given his briefcase, cellphone and his jacket to ramu kaka and had removed his tie..... and unbuttoned his handcuffs and rolled them up..... and opened two buttons of his shirt..... and walked into the balcony..... and one look at her and his heart..... took a deep sigh.... as a simle formed on his lips...... standing near the balcony door looking at her..... walking slowly.... aimlessly....around..... the garden..... with cool breeze moving her wavy hair..... like a rhythm..... of music..... and the slow music of her bangles clicking.... moving on her hands..... as she tried to put the strands in place.....the dim light of the balcony..... did not do justice..... to his sight..... of her.... he could not wait any longer..... he had walked briskly..... to take her in his arms..... and off the ground.....
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Seeing her lips quiver...... his smile widened..... with a smirk...... He just pulled her towards him..... holding her waist .... and Gauri sighed..... with heaving chest...... and closed her eyes...... not being able to take his eyes piercing through her...... and then shiv.... made her lean back on the truck of the tree........ and slowly placed his lips on hers.... to savor her......

after few minutes...... he had left her.... as she started to struggle for air...... and had smiled at her.... lowered eyes.... trying to catch her breath...... and sighed in satisfaction...... as she tried to wipe her lips with her thumb..... feeling shy to look at him...... He had just pulled her into a hug..... and she laid her head on his chest....... now her hands.... firmly wrapping around him...... and she tilting her head..... to burry her face in his shirt....... and Shiv hugged her back..... as both took a deepbreath .... and a smile of satisfaction playing on their lips.....

Gauri slowly.... lifted her face from his shirt..... and loosening the grip...... brought her hands on his chest..... and pulled on his shirt near his chest a little with her both hands making Shiv bend on to her a little..... as if asking him.... to continue...... to this Shiv looked at her and she was still not lifting her eyes.... to look at him..... he moved his hands on her soft... delicate waist.... and then on the edge took a hold of her waist...... in his hands...... when gauri..... lifted her eyes..... as she understood her anxiety was equally matched..... She looked in Shiv's eyes.... which had that mischief.... of waking up a "sher"........ as he smiled with that smirk..... asking for her permission..... with a questioning looks.......????





Let me know How you all like it....... Do leave your comments......

Bunny.






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Posted: 15 years ago
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you know what i actually really loved it!! it was awesome..it was so true to your style of writing it had you written all over it.
i could totally imagine the bit where shiv looks over the balcony atgauri..that has to be my frav bit! i could kind of picture the expression on his face and the detail...😆
you know i really love this idea of sketched peices just random bits.. i was actually thinking of opening a thread under the name of moments so i could post random sketches like this, hey maybe we should both have a go at it together..???
anyways ...loved it :)
thanks for that..👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww! WOW! This was sweet... do u mind me asking u 2 continue?? ☺️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg i finally read something of shiv and gauri. this was sweet and beautiful. though jus a tat bit naughty and demanding. this was the relationship of SG when i stopped watching KAA. this little part conveys what they are to each other in every sense. it was a very well written part. u were jus awsome...i hope to read more parts like this soon
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

you know what i actually really loved it!! it was awesome..it was so true to your style of writing it had you written all over it. 😳 Now you are making me blush..... Thankyou.....
i could totally imagine the bit where shiv looks over the balcony atgauri..that has to be my frav bit! i could kind of picture the expression on his face and the detail...😆 Thankyou again..... Yeh I was imagining it when I started writing it..... I actually didnot think of it when i started the part.... but it just came along while i was writing..... So, I added it...... I was imagining Iqbal Khan.....😳😉.....with folded shirt on hands..... with 2 buttons open ..... a relaxed but authoritative look..... 😳.... I am becoming shameless.....
you know i really love this idea of sketched peices just random bits.. i was actually thinking of opening a thread under the name of moments so i could post random sketches like this, hey maybe we should both have a go at it together..??? I was thinking of that too..... We should start one.... so that we can post random moments like these..... when we feel like writing..... I would love to write them in one post...... and title .... "Moments" looks fabulous...... You start and I will join you..... 👍🏼
anyways ...loved it :) to tell you.... I didnot plan this..... it just came to my head.... and I started writing it..... I just felt like I should post this one......I didnot even check for spelling mistakes..... or checking the draft..... Thankyou, that you liked it.....
thanks for that..👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -_AfridiMalik_-

awww! WOW! This was sweet... do u mind me asking u 2 continue?? ☺️




Thankyou, for loving it....... Not at all..... I will continue...... but you can only read it.... if you are older than 18years of age..... because..... "Sher" is now awake..... So you can only expect what he will do to our Gauri.....😉............

If you are ready for it.....I will write it....


😳

Bunny.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey veryy nice i just love SG 😊 pleazzzzz continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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finally u updated thnxx dear n plz update soon n this update is ..... ahhhh lovelyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hah! none of us is too little Bunny! ☺️ ermm... listen... do mention bt as a note tht this is 18+ 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bunny_fun




...... he knew the effect he had on her..... but he wondered..... whether gauri knew the effect she had on him....???

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..... She looked in Shiv's eyes.... which had that mischief.... of waking up a "sher"........ as he smiled with that smirk..... asking for her permission..... with a questioning looks.......????


i rlly liked it alot! especially dese 2 parts! sooo touching!!con soon!👏👏😃

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