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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

You are mine Part 13




Ayesha sits near Angad.
Angad's eyes are wet.
Ay:Don't worry Angad,Kripa will be alright.
A:I hope so.She is my life Ayesha.
Ayesha becomes dull.

Ayesha sees Zaib beating the wall with his hands.
A:Zaib,what are you doing?Are you mad?
Z:Yes,i'm mad.Because my Kripa is suffering now.
She is shocked:Your Kripa?
Z:Yes,she is only mine.But Angad snatched her from me.I never knew that my own friend Milind will try to finish Kripa.You know...i mad about Kripa.I had even thought to kill everyone who tries to take her away from me.
Ayesha is stunned.

Ayesha goes near Prachi.she is weeping.
A:Prachi!
She wipes her tears.
P:I'm sorry for suspecting you Ayesha.I never expected milind to do this.
A:Prachi...please listen to me carefully.I doubt whether Milind is not the real culprit.
She is shocked:What?
A:Yes.Now i doubt whether the real culprit is Zaib.
Prachi is shocked:do you know what you are saying?
A:Yes.Zaib is mad about Kripa.
P:Ya...i know that.
A:You knew it?
P:Yes.
A:He told me that he even thought of killing anyone who is with Kripa.I doubt whether...he did that.
P:But why should he kill Kripa?
A:Not Kripa.He must have tried to kill Angad.That day the juice was offered first to Angad.But Kripa only drank it.He wanted to kill Angad.But unfortunately Kripa only ate the poison which was meant for Angad.
Prachi is shocked:But Can Zaib be that bad to reach this extent?Killing his own brother?
A:Love can make him do anything.
MOTHERHOOD thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#32
God knows who the real culprit is?
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#33

You are mine Part 14





Zaib is caught by the Police and gets beaten heavily.Angad and Gauri come there.Gauri is crying seeing Zaib's condition.
G:Please don't be cruel to Zaib.
A:Please stop it.My brother won't try to kill me.
Z:No...i hate Angad.Because of him only Kripa avoided me.But i'm not that cruel to kill my own brother.
Angad and Gauri shed tears.
Pran:Now we can't release Zaib.Because we doubt whether Zaib is the culprit.
A:No..Zaib is not..
P:Maybe.But we can't release him unless the real culprit is found.

Angad and Gauri are at home.She cries.
A:Gauri...
G:My poor Zaib is accused of doing a crime which he has'nt done.His health is also bad because of the lashes.And....i have no place in his heart.That's why he always showed anger to me...
Angad feels sad for her.He does'nt know how to comfort her.

Prachi goes to the temple and prays.She sees Milind standing behind her and praying.She is surprised.
She thinks:Just now i prayed to God to forgive me for suspecting Milind.Milind is here when i opened my eyes.Surprise!
Milind opens his eyes and is surprised to see him.Milind goes out without saying anything.Prachi becomes sad.She goes out.She waits for an auto.
Milind goes near her:i will drop you.
She gets inside his car.
Milind is not talking.Prachi breaks the silence:Milind!I'm sorry...i suspected you.
M:It's ok.
P:Please tell me that you forgave me.
M:No sorry and thanks in Friendship.
She smiles.
P:I never knew that Zaib is that cruel to take one's life..that also his own brother's life.
M:Prachi...you are repeating your mistake.You are suspecting Zaib like you suspected me.Zaib is my best friend.I'm sure that he can't kill anyone.
P:Then who is the culprit?You still say that Ayesha is the culprit?
M:I don't know.I'm confused.

Angad watches rain.Flashback.
After the Valentine's day...they both travel in a car.It starts raining.
Angad stops the car.They both get out of the car and dance in the rain.Angad moves closer to Kripa.He looks at her deeply.Kripa becomes conscious.
K:Angad...we are not married till now.
Angad moves away:I'm sorry..i don't know why i'm always repeating the mistake.
Kripa laughs.Angad is shy.

Angad wipes his tears.

The policemen catch the guy who served drinks in the college.His name is Vinod.
Pran:Tell me..who gave you money to poison the juice?
V:I don't know anything.
Pran slaps him:Now you tell me.
V:Ok...i will....
P:Tell dammed.
V:Angad Khanna!
Pran is shocked.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
What................Angad tried to kill Kripa.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

You are mine Part 15


Pran:Why should Angad kill his own girlfriend?
Vinod:Because his real beloved Ayesha came back.
Pran is shocked:What?
V:Yes,Angad loves Ayesha madly.She is richer than the middle class girl Kripa.If he marries Ayesha he will get fortune.

Angad and Ayesha are taken to the station.
Angad is depressed:This is too much Sir.How could you think that i tried killing my own beloved?
P:We did'nt say that you tried killing your beloved.Because your beloved is Ayesha.Right?
Angad is shocked:What nonsense!
P:Ayesha had admitted that she loves you.
A:But i don't.
Ayesha feels upset.
Ay:Angad is telling the truth.He does'nt love me.He has loved only Kripa.Since the school days he has been with Kripa.
P:But we can't believe it.You both tried to kill Kripa.
Angad shouts:No..
Pran beats him.Ayesha is shocked.

Prachi tells Milind:What is happening Milind?Now all are doubting Angad.I don't think Angad will stand along with Ayesha for such a cruel act.
M:Even i don't think so.But who is the real culprit?

Pran visits Kripa's parents Suryaban and Gayatri.
P:I know that in this situation i am not supposed to desturb you both.But we have to do our job.Do you both think that Angad tried killing Kripa?
G:No.Because Angad and Kripa were best friends since school.Angad loves our daughter very much.
P:Your daughter Kripa?Is Kripa your daughter?
Gayatri is shocked:What are you asking Inspector?
P:We have clear evidence that Kripa is not the daughter of Mr.and Mrs.Suryaban.
Suryaban loses his control:No...she is our daughter.
P:No...she is not...
Gayatri cries loudly and faints.Suryaban keeps her on the sofa.
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
MOTHERHOOD thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#36
I am just confused.Everything is so confusing.Plz update hatred-the shade of love.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#37

You are mine Part 16





Pran:Sorry Mr.Suryaban..
S:It's ok.What you said is true.Kripa is not our real daughter.But for us she is more than a daughter.We adopted her when she was a baby.

A few days later...Angad and Ayesha get released.

Pran calls everyone to the station.
P:The real culprit is caught.
All are happy.
Angad:But who is he...?Who did this cruelty to her?
P;Angad...don't you know that Kripa is an adopted daughter?
All are shocked.
A:Yes.
P:Her real mom is no more. Her real dad had an affair with her real mother eventhough he was married.But later when she found that he is married,she broke up with him and delivered a baby.She gave the baby Kripa to an orphanage.Her real father wanted her back.But her foster parents were not willing to give her back.Kripa hated her real father who left her when she was a tiny baby.But when she realised that her dad repents a lot she forgives him.He gave most of his properties to her.His official wife is not alive. His daughter Maya who is a divorcee hated Kripa.After her dad's death,she realises that most of the properties are in Kripa's name.To get the property back,she tried killing Kripa.She entrusted Vinod to give the poisoned juice to Kripa.But Angad takes it simply.But Kripa herself drinks it.
Angad is shocked:I can't believe it.Because she never showed any kind of anger towards Kripa.Though she is a divorcee she did'nt stop applying sindoor.She was very traditional.
Milind:Do you know Maya?
A:Not only me..we all know her very well.She is none other than our lecturer Maya Ma'am.
They are shocked.
Police women bring Maya to the room.Angad and Zaib slap her.All are shocked.
Z:We know that slapping a teacher is a sin.But God will forgive us for slapping a bloody witch like you.

Gayatri rings up Angad:Angad...there is a happy news...Kripa is out of coma.
He is surprised:What?

They all go the hospital to see Kripa.Everyone hugs her.
Zaib tells Angad:Now i understand how deep your love for Kripa is.Your love helped her to come back to a normal life.
Angad and Kripa smile.

Angad and Kripa are alone in the room.Kripa looks upset.
A:Why are you so upset Kripa?
K:I was thinking about the twists in my life.So many tragic incidents.
He consoles her:But now all the problems are over.You have to be happy now.This is a new life.
Kripa smiles:Yes.

Milind extends his arm towards Prachi:Prachi...can i take you for a date?
She smiles:O sure.
Prachi wears a beautiful white dress for the date.Milind can't take his eyes off her.
P:Have you not seen me before?
He smiles:First time i'm seeing you like this.You look like a fairy.
She smiles.
They go to a restaurant.The whole hall is booked only for them.It is decorated with heart shaped balloons and red roses.
P:Wow!Beautiful!
They sit together.
M:Till now i addressed you as my friend.From this moment onwards i want you to be my girlfriend.I love you Prachi...
Prachi smiles and holds his hands:I love you too.
The song 'Tum bin...' is played.Milind and Prachi dance together.
MOTHERHOOD thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#38
What abouT Zaib and Gauri?
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#39

You are mine Part 17





Zaib sees Gauri polishing his shoes.
Z:How long will you do such things for me?Polishing my shoes...ironing my clothes....doing puja for me...
G:i will do that till the world ends for me.
Z:You are so sweet...i have always pained you.But you suffered silently without any complaint.Even sfter knowing that i don't love you,you continued doing things for me.
G:You don't love me Zaib.But i still love you.That's why.
Z:I did'nt try to see your love.I'm sorry Gauri.
He holds her arms.She is stunned.
Z:Give me a chance.I will love you more than you love me.I promise.You are mine.
She weeps.

Decorations are going on at home...
Angad is wondered.
A:Why is the house being decorated.
Z:I told them to arrange it.Tonight there is going to be a party here.I have invited all our friends.
Angad is surprised:Really?But why?
Z:It's a surprise.

Party....

Prachi has worn a shining white saree.Kripa has worn a decorated orange saree.Milind and Angad have fallen for them completely.Ayesha is draped in a beautiful saree.
Milind:Where is the party guy Zaib?Zaib who hated parties have arranged a party for us.Cool.
Suddenly Zaib comes downstairs with Gauri.Gauri has worn a beautiful black saree.
All are surprised.
Z:Friends...this party is to express our feelings towards you all.I and Gauri are seeing each other.
All are surprised.They pass a naughty smile.Gauri blushes.
The song 'Ali maula..' from 'Kurbaan' is played.Milind-Prachi,Angad-Kripa and Zaib-Gauri dance.

THE END
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
AAWWWWWWWWWWW! dat ws such a sweet story! a gr8 endin
i like da idea of includin da songs! i dont think it shuld hv finishd dat quikly!!😔 but gr8 endin n story ny wy!👍🏼⭐️😛👏

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