Kya Hoga Shiv-Kunal Ka - Pa 2 Pg 3 - 01-14-09 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you so much!
Glad confusion is over.... 😳

Love,
Vaishali


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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
I'm happy and thrilled to know some peoples confusion are cleared... ... ... And here is the next part but hardly none scene between Shiv and Gauri, but for sure next part will have them.

Thank you in advance to my readers and for their lovely replies witch inspires me the most to write. 😛



Part Two

Bani lies on the bed and remember her good time with her brother Saksham, Gauri and Vrinda (Vrinda's character will be revealed through-out the story process).

Mr. Walia comes from behind and says "are you okay and why didn't you tell us about your birthday?"

Bani: Because when your own birthday brings tear in your eyes… its better to be unknown in front of this world.

Mr. Walia: Than why are you crying today on your birthday?

Bani: My tears have dried of long time ago, but the pain is still alive in my heart and no one can take his place in my life long as I live.

Mr. Walia: Than why did you marry me? Did I ask you to marry me but you're the one who took the place of your cousin beside me. Than why this cold behavior towards me…? I haven't force myself on you than why this cold hatred for me? Answer me?

Bani: Because I am a daughter who can not see her family members in trouble but I do not hate but respect you. But I can not give you the love of a wife because my heart belongs to someone else who I love.

Mr. Walia stares at Bani who leaves him shocked each time he asks her about her past. Bani also stands the opposite side of the wall and says to herself "I am sorry for behaving like this with you but I belong to someone else who gave up everything he loved thee years ago. I hope you will understand me once you find out about my past but my tears are today for my brother not him who I love".

Kunal notices his Mami crying outside her bedroom door, he walks toward her and asks her "Are you okay Mami? Did Mamaji say something to you?"

Bani touches Kunal's face and says "your Mama is a great human but my tears are for someone else who I love the most in this world" and leaves Kunal shocked.

Gauri sat in her room looking disappointed about not finding a job. It's been three months since she got fired from her pervious job because she slapped Shiv Kapoor for misbehaving with her cousin Simran. And now Gauri is struggling for a job. Her father is a heart patient and her mother is suffering from cancer. Gauri is hopeless in every way but hasn't given up hope.

Gauri finds a card lying on her dresser… she picks up the card and remembers how she bumped into Mahen Kapoor few weeks ago.

Gauri decides to meet Mahen Kapoor with some hope.

Shiv also came home, greeted his family with a pleasant tone afterwards heads into Kunal's room before getting dressed for the party witch is held in the honor of Mahen/Walia Group of industries success.

(Kunal's Room and Shiv's Room)

"Main aisa kyun hoon -4
Main aisa kyun hoon -3
Main jaisa hoon main waisa kyun hoon
Karna hai kya mujhko ye maine kab hai jaana
Lagta hai gaaunga zindagi bhar bas ye gaana
Hoga jaane mera ab kya"

Kunal gets confused in what to wear out of black plants with blue shirt or white shirt. Shiv points the blue shirt.

Kunal winks at him than leaves toward the bathroom

Shiv also goes into his room also goes through his closet and gets confused in what to wear with what type of perfume to spray.

"Oh€
Koyi toh bataaye mujhe
Oh€
Gadbad hai ye sab kya
Oh€
Koyi samjhaaye mujhe
Oh€
(Oh we ee aa owe ee oh
Oh we ee aa owe owe owe owe) -2
Main aisa kyun hoon -4
Main aisa kyun hoon -3
Main jaisa hoon main waisa kyun hoon"

Bani comes into Kunal and Shiv's room and help Shiv with his clothes along with Kunal in his remanding things… Both of them hug Bani than kisses her cheek.
Gauri gets dressed in a simple dressed covering her entire body. And leaves her house without telling anyone except for Simran who lives with them.

Gauri runs to catch the bus... Bani dressed in a simple white sari... walks down to the main hall where guests have arrived... everyone greets her on the way toward Kunal who smiles at his Mami.

Kunal winks at Shiv... Shiv takes the mike and makes a speech witch everyone had tears in their eyes some what.

Bani didn't know how to react... Gauri gets out of the bus and walks toward Mahen Kapoor's house... Kunal brings out the cake so his Mami can cut it.

Gauri keeps on walking toward the mansion, on the way someone came driving his car fast and splashed mud all over her dress.

Gauri gives him a dirty look afterwards continues walking toward the mansion... Kunal asked his Mami to cut the cake, but Bani stood there looking at the door like someone she knows is coming.

Shiv asked: Mami, what are you waiting for? Cut the cake?

Bani: Shiv, I'll be right back

Bani leaves toward her room, Kunal and Shiv looked confused like always, Bani opens her dresser and takes out an audio tape witch plays an important role in her life.

Gauri finally reaches the mansion but the guards stopped her because of her dressed.

Gauri: Please I have to meet Mahen Kapoor soon as possible

Security Guard: Sorry there is a private function going on and without invitation card no outsiders are welcomed.

Gauri: Please try to understand! I have to meet Mahen Kapoor badly.

Security Guard: I'm sorry no invitation or no appointment with Mahen Kapoor than I can not allow you to go inside during a private function.

Gauri's hopes came shattered in one "no", Gauri decides to leave the place when she hears...

"Jaaneman chupke chupke, saari duniya se chhupke
Tumne aisi baat kahi dil mera kho gaya"

Tears start coming out her eyes and breaks through the security guards into the mansion.

Kunal: Mami, like you told me I put on the audio tape. Few words came out afterwards it stopped now please cut the cake.

Bani nods her head but tears want to escape from her eyes but she acted strong even though it's hard for her.

Security guards come running after Gauri into the mansion... Gauri shouts Saksham's name out allowed after hearing his voice on the tape recorder.

Bani drops the knife in her hand... Mr. Walia notices Bani's reaction and covers his face with shame.

Bani's totally shocked to see Gauri standing in front of her... Gauri walks toward Bani... Bani also walks toward her with tears rolling down her eyes.

Shiv looked shock in seeing Gauri at his house...

Both girls are walking toward each other with tears coming down both of their eyes. Finally they reached one another Gauri opens her arms and Bani throws herself into her arms saying "even if I asked for something than I could have got it but your attends filled Saksham's place today"

Gauri wipes Bani's tear and says "even if I didn't come here than my blessings are always with you Chutki. Where ever Saksham is... he must be watching us with a smile"

Bani: Maybe your right, but finish the song witch is left unknown today for me.

Gauri: Chutki please! I can't sing anymore without my inspiration in life.

Bani: Fine! Don't sing for me and I want cut the cake because my birthday is incomplete without you or Saksham.

Gauri looked helpless toward the sky afterwards close her eyes and sings from her heart.

"Jaaneman, jaaneman, jaaneman, jaaneman
Jaaneman chupke chupke, saari duniya se chhupke
Tumne aisi baat kahi dil mera kho gaya"

Bani turns around with a smile on her face, but Shiv shocked as hell.

Summary of Part 2 - Gauri talks about how she lost her first job thanks to Shiv Kapoor. Also Bani shares her feelings with Mr. Walia sightly, Bani shares a strong relationship with Shiv and Kunal but mostly Kunal. Gauri decides to meet Mahen Kapoor who she bumped into the other day without knowing he is Shiv's father. Gauri comes to the party but Security guards won't let her in without a invataion card or appointed with Mahen Kapoor. Bani always cuts her cake after hearing her brother Saksham sing with Gauri. Bani brings out the audio tape where she recorder their voice together. Unfaithfully audio tape stops after Saksham's voice and Gauri thought it was her Saksham so she runs into the building and yells his name. Bani drops the knife because she was about to cut the cake, but after hearing Gauri's voice she could not forget her pain in seeing her after along time. Both of them embarance each other in their arms. Bani asks Gauri to sing but she says I can not sing anymore. But Bani's pain made her sing from her heart.

Love,
Vaishali


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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

fab part!!!!

amazing yaar!! vaishuu............cont sooon!!! x muah x reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
that was a really sweet update and very emotional at the end .....

Gauri and Saksham must have loved eachother loads 😭 😳

i hope she finds the same love in Shiv

and as for Bani, who did she love .... and what about Kunal has he got a girl in his life

personally i like Bani and Kunal together, but then again Kunal calls her Mami so that's not possible 😕

take care

yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

wowwwwwww a wonderfull ff yaar.loved the track.simply superb work.so again a relation is gonna start with hatred wowwwwwwwwwww so iam waiting that to read yaar.wonderfull work keep up the great work yaar👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
superbbbb i like it
saba
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! tht ws sooooooooooooooo niceee! well, atleast dey hv met n now dey no where dey r.con soon!!!!!👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
Concept is great.... Part One was sightly confusing but the summary you gave cleared the confusion....
Part two - happy that Bani and Gauri met....
Priya
Edited by EhsaasKiZindagi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

updt asap!!

x muah x reenoo

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