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Posted: 7 years ago
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Vivaan : (full anger mode) bus Meera bahut ho gaya aur kitni baar mera trust todhogi.
Tightly clutching her shoulder tum to kabhi jhoot nai bolti thi na to phir itna bada jhoot . (Crying tone) tumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai . You broke me meera
Meera: (crying) Vivaa Vivaan me meri baat tu
Vivaan : throwing vase by his hand
Raising his voice , his eyes were red with anger and hurt
He never thought that Meera can ever do this
Mujhe humesha lagta tha tum jaise bhi ho magar kabhi kisi ko betray nai karogi magar tume jo kiya vo mein kabhi ni bhool sagta

Meera was just tired just tired due to crying just tired bcz of events her life was taking . What she did was bcz she wanted to save him . What mistake did she do .
Today again she dissappointed everyone , hurt everyone

Meera: ( tired voice) bus vivaan ab bus . Aab aur nai hota
Mein thak gai hoon ( crying inconsablly) mein mein sab ke bare mein socha sab koshish ki magar mera kya
Vivaan was now shocked hearing her plea somewhere hearing her a realisation started to dawn upon him
She shouted
Kyu koi ye nai sochta ki Meera kya chahti hai
She held his collar
Kyu meera sab ki hai magar meera ka koi nai
Mummy papa k liye kabaddi chodhi , tumahara liye sab kuch karne ki koshish ki,
Ab aur nai hota
Aaj time aa gaya hai papers sign karna ka
He was shocked and hurt that moment has finally come
Bcz he knew this time she will sign hearing her affirmation
She saw papers infront of her and finLly signed them . All their moments started appearing in front of eyes
Thank you mr vivaan kapoor apne mere pe itna bada ahssan kiya tha
Ye rishta kis kaam ka jo taras , jhoot pe bana ho hamari to rishta ki neev hi kamzoor thi toot gai
Tum azaad ho
Vivaan was finding it hard to believe that now meera will not be kapoor but dhingra
A lump gathered in his throat . He wanted to cry , a tear escaped his eyes
She turned and started moving towards her house
Vivaan was staring at her retrieving figure .
They both were recalling all the moments they spent
Today it all ended

Hi guys just thought of giving writing a try
I am not a good writer so sorry for mistakes
I may continue it if you all like
Feedback will be highly appreciated
Thank u
Plz tell me how is it

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its simply wonderful. šŸ‘
It felt whole scene being enacted before me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the angst and that's a scenario constant playing in my head like what would it be like when Meera actually ends up singing those papers.
Beautiful written peace :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Bahut hi khubsurat sir emotional hai yeh scene
Wish something like happens in this show
Pls continue this story as ff
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

Its simply wonderful.šŸ‘

It felt whole scene being enacted before me



Me too Anj.. its was beautifully written can you plss continue and tell us wat do u think will happen next 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u everyone
Glad u all liked it
Will try to update it šŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
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šŸ‘..ver nicely written..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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šŸ‘..very nicely written..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's been written so beautifully that I could actually imagine it happening! Please do continueee 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one dear!! Keep it up! Such a realistic portrayal of MeeVaan
Only one request: could you pls write the dialogues in English too? Sometimes it's difficult to understand what's going on

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