Maahi Ve FF #chapter 02 page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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guys ,
this is my 1st ff not only onMeevan but in my whole writing world.

chapter 1 as followed.

Maahi ve Meevan TS

it was a cold night when the winds where blowing fast. Meera was reading a novel. Suddenly she hears dolly shouting a calling meera. She goes near dolly and asks why is she shouting in night? Dolly gets irritated "Meera, sumair ko gundon ne kidnap kar liya hai. Agar hum unhe 50 lakh rupaye nahi diya toh who use jaan se mar dalenge. Meera asks' toh? Hum 50 lakh kahan se layenge? Sumair ke ghar walon ko hum bata dete hai . woh kuch kar lenge.' Dolly looks her face and then she replies'Meera putar tut oh meri kabaddi champion hai na ... tu Vivan ke saath ja kar use bacha le. Areh 50 lakh hi toh hain. Sumair ki ma ne mujhe bola hai ki main tujhe unke ghar bhej doon tohwoh tere haat 50 lakh rupaye un gundon tak bhej dengi.'meera thinks for a while after that she suddenly says thik hain mein jayungi'. She goes outside and sits in the car with vivan. toh tumhe akal aa hi gaya.' Said vivan smiling whirskly.' Mujhe toh akal pehlese hi tha,bas mein apni akal ka isthemal nahi karti this,Mr.Sadiyal Kapoor!ab chale kya?'meera aks vivan. Vivan drives the car . they reach sumair's house. Meera goes and asks sumair's mom'aunty pasen toh ready hain nah? Jitni jaldi hoo sake humein sumair ko wahan se chud wana hoga warna problem ho jaye gi'. Sumair's mom insultes meera and her mom'kahan ke paise? Kis liye paise? Meera sumair ko kuch nahi hua who toh apne kamre mein aram se soo raha hain tumhari tarah raat ko who ghum tah nahi hain.' Meera gets annoyed. Sumair's mom takes her to sumairs's room and shos her how sumair is sleeping. Just then sumair's mom looks vivan and starts commenting'oho, toh ab mein samjhi ki tumhe sirf kabaddi kehlna hi nahi gair mard ke saath ghoom nab hi acha lagta hain. Kyun hain meera?' meera tries to explain her'nahi aunty hume pata chala ki sumair ko gundoone kidnap kar liya hain. Is liye main aur vivan use dhundne ke liye aa gaye.' sab smajh ti hoon main, apni ma jaisi tum bhi gavaar ladki ho. Aurat ke naam par Kalank ho tum. Chi meera chi. Maine apne sapne mein bhi aisa nahi socha tha.' Meera pleads her' nahi ap jaisa samjh rahi hain waisa kuch bhi nahi hain. Apne toh khud mujhe kaha tha ki hum ap ke ghar se paise leke gundoon ko de ayane.' baas meera baas, aur tum Mr.Vivan Kapoor,socha tha kit um hot ladkiyon ke saath raat bitana pasand karte ho. Par yahan toh kuch aur hi hain. Socha tha kit um auron ki tarah nahi ho,par tum toh baki logon se bhi badtameez ho' she insults vivaan. Vivan gets irritated, he hold meers's hands and leaves their house

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start. Waiting for the next update.
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Nice start for what I could understand! I am waiting for the next one, Rose!
Just a request: Can you put English translations for the dialogues please? For us non-Hindi speakers please
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Nice start..
Continue soon..
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Intriguing one..
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NICE START AND CONTINOUE SOON..
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Amazing!!!
Loved it! Pls do continue soon!
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Maahi ve

Chapter 2:

They returned home back sadly . vivan was very angry on suman's behavior. Meera was finding some way of revealing all this to her family. They both saw dolly sleeping peacefully. They looked eachother and then they decided not to say anything. The next morning suman entered meera's house . she said that meera is not eligible to be anyone's wife. She broke their relation. Meera's whole family shook on this. Vivan was watching all these things with a teary eyes. He remembered how much happy meera's family was for this marriage. He left the place, went to his room. He blamed himself for all this drama .

V: yeh sab meri wajah se hua. I should have suggested meera to tell the truth...par maine.

M; (enters the room with a sad but smiling fAace). Vivan...kya hua ?tum udash ho?

V; quiet

M; vivan...maine tumse kuch pucha...

V; meera, yeh sab meri wajah se hua...mere liye tumhe aur tumhari family ko yeh sab sunna pada.

M; nahi vivan aisa kuch nahi hai. Tum toh meri madaat karna chaate the...

D; enters) . vivan tumhare papa ne flight ki tickets bheje hai.

V; thank with a sad but smiling fAace). Vivan...kya hua ?tum udash ho?

V; quiet

M; vivan...maine tumse kuch pucha...

V; meera, yeh sab meri wajah se hua...mere liye tumhe aur tumhari family ko yeh sab sunna pada.

M; nahi vivan aisa kuch nahi hai. Tum toh meri madaat karna chaate the...

D; enters) . vivan tumhare papa ne flight ki tickets bheje hai.

V; thank you .

M; flight?...

V; haan mujhe time nahi mila tickets book karne ke liye toh main dad se keh diya tha.

D; oh, acha...(leaves)

V; (looks at her sad face) meera...tum thik hona ?(he cupps her face)

M: vivan...please mat jao nah

V; nahi meera..meri wajah aj tumhare family ko itna suna pada. Aur main nahi chata ki meri wajah se phir se koi problem face karni pade.

M; vivan, jab tum mere saath hote ho toh mujhe acha lagta hai aur agar tum chale jaoge toh ...(thought)

Vivan was looking at her face with a smile. She took out his palms off her cheeks. She ran away sadly. Vivan was feeling uncomfortable without her. He ignored. He went near amaya and gave her the tickets. Amaya got shocked she asked why are they leaving so soon? Vivan says its not soon . dad has asked to come back London as sson as we can. And he doesn't want to take any risk.

The end..

Actually I can write only this much ...

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Beautiful Update..
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Nice continuation Rose!! keep it up!!

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