Manan after Musicana breakup ( CHAPTER 7 on page 4)10112/2017 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
I like this on point and all business Nandini
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
What happened to the end of Part 2, there is lack of connection between that and the beginning of part 3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Awesome part 3
incomplete part2
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
4. POLICE



ALIYA: Bhai, who did this...????
HARSHAD: Aliya, Nandini is responsible for my condition. Get her arrested and I need her behind the bars...
Listening this Manik fisted his hands in anger...
MANIK: Tch,tch,tch... Harshad... harshad... Harshad..woh... Aisa kyun karegi... Jaroor tumne hi kuch kiya hoga...
HARSHAD: Mein aisa kyun karoonga bhala...Are u out of your mind Manik...?? Aur tum uski itni side kyun me rahe ho...
CABIR: Woh isliye HARSHAD kyunki tumne koi kaam aajtak bharosa rakhne jaisa kiya hi nahi hai...
HARSHAD: Shutup CABIR, aur Nandini aisa kin sa kaam kiya bharosa rakhne wala...
MUKTI: Rehne do HARSHAD... Tumse toh lakh guna acchi hai...
ALIYA: Stop it all of you... Kya baccho ki tarha Lady rahe ho...??
HARSHAD: But ALIYA...
. ALIYA: Bhai don't worry I will file a case against her... Fab4 looked at Aliya disbelievingly. She was again trusting her brother. Cabir tried to say something, but before that Aliya took her bag and left from there.Fab4 gave an angry glare to Harshad and came out of the hospital but till then Aliya was gone...
They decided to go behind her...but couldn't find her. Then Mukti traced her number and her location was police station... When they reached over there but Aliya was already leaving with the police...so they followed her.
Dazzlers were sitting in their living room and chatting when the police entered with Fab5. Dazzlers stood up from their places.
POLICE: Aap mein se Nandini Khanna kon hai??? Unke khilaaf arrest warrant hai...
NANDINI: Mein noon Nandini ... Kisne ki hai complaint mere against...????
ALIYA: Mein ki hai Nandini...How dare you..!!!!! Tumne bhai ko aapne gundo se itna pitvaya ki abhi woh hospital mein hai...
Dazzlers laughed out loud whereas Nandini chuckled. Fab5 frowned at them.
NANDINI: Wait a second... Maine aisa kab kaha Kiusse apne gundo se pitvaya hai...
,ALIYA: Then...??
,NANDINI: Meine usse khud Mara hai...
,FAB5 : What...??
,Cabir Mukti and Manik couldn't control more and starts laughing loudly. Even Dhruv was smiling.
,POLICE: Aap ne aisa kyun kiya...??
,NANDINI: Kyun Ki woh mujh par jabardasti karna chahta tha...
,ALIYA: Bhai aisa kabhi nahi kar sakte...
,PERSON: Usne aisa kiya hai...
,All turned towards the voice. Manik and Nandini were shocked whereas others were confused on seeing the person.
,SO GUYS THIS IS IT FOR TODAY...
,GUESS KARO WHO IS THE PERSON...
,My other works are... 1. Manan together forever hamesha.
2. Manan our love will last forever.
3. Manan does it matters..?
4. Manan new female singer...?? Do have a look at it too...

ALSO GUYS CHAPTER 2 IS LIKE THAT ONLY... IT WILL BE TOLD AFTERWARDS.. SOO DON'T WORRY...
,LOVE YOU ALL...
,BYEE
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Nice update dear. Accha kiya Nandini ne hardshad ko maar k..cont soon. PM me if possible.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
I like how nandini beats him and not cry for someone's help
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

. 5. TRUTH


PERSON: Usne aisa kiya hai... Mere pass proof hai...
MANIK AND NANDINI: Dad..Papa.. Everyone looked at them surprised. Nandini ran up to him and hoped in his arms.. ( Guyss the person is none other than VIKRAM MALHOTRA... Manik's dad...)

VIKRAM: How are u my baccha...???

NANDINI: I am fine papa... I missed u so much...
And she started sobbing.

VIKRAM: Don't you dare cry... I don't like your tears... Now I am here na...
Saying this he took her in his embrace while everyone stood there shocked.

MANIK moved towards them and,

MANIK: Dad... Dad...

VIKRAM: Yes ... My son... How are you beta...?????

MANIK: I am fine dad... How are you...???

VIKRAM: I am good...,.. Now take care of my princess till then I will handle the police...


ABHIMANYU: Its okkk uncle... Nandu came here doll...
With that she went in Abhi's arms which enraged Manik, but he kept quiet...

VIKRAM: Inspector Jo bhi statement Harshad ne diya hai... Its false...

ALIYA: Uncle how can you say that...? She is the culprit... And why are u favouring her...????

VIKRAM: Enough Aliyaa... She is my princess and not a word against her... And I have the proof... Inspector, take this CCTV footage...

INSPECTOR: I will play it here only...
Cabir plays the video on the TV...


FLASHBACK...

Nandini was walking in the corridor of Space on the Musicana night... When someone pulled her inside a classroom. As soon as she saw the person her anger roses to its peak. The person was HARSHAD...

NANDINI: How dare you pull me and touch me. You are such a coward ... Stay away from me and my friends...

HARSHAD: How can you think that I can stay away from such a hot and sexy girl like you... I seriously think that I shouldn't have wasted my time on that Navya... But now that you are here I will not let you go soo easily...

Saying this he tried to touch her... But instead she pushed him and started to move towards the door... As she was about to open the door Harshad caught her hand and dragged her towards the bench...

HARSHAD: Don't you dare run from here... Waise bhi Sab khatam ho hi chuka hai... Aur agar tumne bhaag ke ki koshish ki toh mein yeh video sab ko dikha doonga...
He showed her the video. Nandini stood their shocked. He again pulled her towards himself, But after all she was Nandini... She kicked him on his personal part. Harshad fell down on the floor. Nandini beat him black and blue... Harshad became unconscious. Nandini then called the Abhimanyu and both admitted Harshad in hospital.

FLASHBACK ENDS...


Fab5 was not knowing how to react to this ...
The scene stopped on their shocked faces...

,HEY GUYS SO THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP TOO... DO TELL ME HOWZ IT...?

My other works are... 1. Manan together forever hamesha. 2. Manan our love will last forever. 3. Manan does it matters..?? 4. Manan new female singer...?? Do have a look at it too...


,LOVE YOU ALL... BYEE...
Edited by Sakshi1245 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
After such long update you post only a scene. I don't enjoy reading story like this.
Sorry but I will discontinue reading your story.
All the best for future updates and other works :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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. 6. NEW FRIENDS



Fab5 was shocked to know the truth. The first one to break the silence was Mukti...

MUKTI: How can Harshad be so cheap... Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ke yeh aisa niklega...!!!!! Aliya sat down on the floor and started crying. She was very much hurt because of Harshad's behaviour.

ALIYA: How can he do this..???? He is my brother na... Doesn't he feel any shame in doing such things...????
Before Fab4 could go and console her, Nandini moved towards her and took her in a hug... Fab4 were surprised by her behaviour, whereas Vikram and Dazzlers stood there proud of her...

NANDINI: You don't need to cry for a person who doesn't value you Aliya... It isn't your fault that he is like this...

ALIYA: No Nandini... Its my fault... I should have listened to you before taking Bhai's side... I am sorry..

NANDINI: Stop crying Aliya.. You should be happy that you came to know about his behavior do early... Forget all this dear... Mukti please tell her...

MUKTI: Haan Aliya... Listen we know how Harshad is, so forget all this okkk... Please for us... For Fab5... Guys...
In a second Aliya was taken in a hug by all four of them whereas Vikram and Dazzlers admired their bond.

ALIYA:I am so lucky to have you all in my life... Thank you ... FAB4: Shutup... All moved aside while laughing.
Vikram came forward and patted her head... Aliya moved towards Nandini and said...

ALIYA: Nandini... I know that we havent started on a good note... Also I have behaved so rudely with you... But I am seriously feeling guilty for it... Please forgive me...

NANDINI: Aliya... I am not at all angry with you... So its okkk... Sometimes destiny plays such games with us...

ALIYA: I always thought that I can only be friendly with Fab5... But I would love if you make me one of your friend ...
Aliya took her right hand forward... Everyone looked at her shocked...

NANDINI: But Aliya...

ALIYA: Please Nandini... I want our relation to be a better one and friendship is obviously a good start...

NANDINI: Ohhkk... So friends are we..!!!
Nandini hugged Aliya... Even Mukti came forward to join the hug with Navya and Tanya... Veer clicked a photo of the girls hug...

CABIR: Yaar guys itni sweetness se mujhe diabetes ho jaye gi...

GIRLS: Shutup Cabir...

CABIR: What...??????? Hato abhi... Yaar Nandini hum be kya paap kiya hai,humse bhi friendship karlo na...

NANDINI:Of course Cabir... Why not...??
Nandini hugged Cabir... Vikram sent the police to arrest Harshad once he gets fine...

Dazzlers and Fab5 became friends except our very own Manik and Nandini... They didn't even talk to each other... At one side Manik was feeling guilty of his behaviour... And other side Nandini was both angry and hurt by him



THAT'S IT FOR NOW GUYS...
SEE YOU TOMORROW WITH NEXT UPDATE...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Commenting for chapter 5 and 6

Mr. Malhotra came and Nandini addressed him as papa.. looking forward to the story behind their bond.
And Manik's shocked reaction to this addresss was nice :)
And how Mr. Malhotra scolded Alya for speaking ill about Nandini was lovely!

I am happy that Nandini was the first one to console Alya. Made me proud of her.
And now Alya and Nandini are friends.. well.. that's a good start to better their relation. :)

And Cabir!! He is always a cherry on the top! I just love him.

I am really looking forward to some adorable moments between Nandini and Mr. Malhotra, and Nandini and Cabir

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