MaNan FS: Jo Bachay Hain Sang Samait Lo! Chap2/Pg9/2nd-Nov - Page 5

Ohh myy godd...

Super se upar...!
Very very emotional... Such a swthrt parisha is... Luv her...
Nd yeah.. I really liked d name Parisha..
Unique nd cute!
Feel bad for nandini nd lit much dispointed by manik.. He should'nt hv leaved her..
Bt koi nai..
Pta h they will be together in end no matter what..!
I cried while reading ur story..
Keep it up..!
Stay blessed!
Be happy!
Thank you!
Take care!

sach me bahot rula diya yaar

tumne bahot rulaya

that little girl who was suffering in her own and she was malnutritioned..oh god holy child..i m really teary..why world has to be so cruel with that lil dol?

then manik ki care for her and their moments..sooo cuttest

lil doll got possessive for her father..how badly she was missing this love and tender care!!!!!!!!

poor manan...they were victim of unexpressed love..damn q karte hai log aisa..q nahi bol dete agar pyaar karte hai to? ek baar bolne me kya harj hai?

u r amazing Mawara..ur writing jst affect us soo much..totally rock on story

i m waiting for next chapter

plz update fast

emotional update
nandini suffered so much in her life
parisha baby is so adorable
poor baby was so hurt
hate that nyonika
pari got possessive of manik
loved it
poor manan
both loved each other
only if manik came back early
loved it
cont soon

Awesome update
So great
So emotional
Bht bht bht bht bht acha h
Too cute manik n pari
Last scenes are awesome
Please continue asap

Oh God what should I say. its too hell emotional. yesh I'm too crying yr 😭 I just don't know how to express my feelings towards this story. its different yet so emotional .. Manik he just love nandu so so much.. oh god ... n parisha. that angel. uskii halat dekhkr I feel so so bad. that I feel like crying n crying. but at last rona aa gya.. Poor baby. she suffered so so much.. 😭 But the way manik treated parisha. aww that was way to beautiful ... She is cute baby muahhh... Their scenes were magical . literally like really ... Nyonika seriously how can she behave like that wid nandu n that innocent baby. how can it be happen yr. she doesn't have a heart kya. huhhh.. nandini kyu chilla rahi h baby ko.. but kbhi kbhi situations aisi aa jatii h ... But Manik is all behaving like a protected father. aww so nice na ... Usne baby ko kitna pretty doll jaisa bna diyaa. itnaa kuch dilaya. aww so sweet na. hahha. u know I actually laughed inone scene when parisha was trying to stay away mukti from manik. that was super cute... kitna beautiful tha vo scene. Shit nandini kitna kuch bear krtii aayi but its never too late. now manik is here for them.. he will support them.. Parisha was so happieee na playing wid toys.. khana khakee .. or manik bhi ek sweet responsible father ki tarah uska kitna dhayan rkh raha h. I just loved it. nandu n parisha their scene is so cuteee. they really love each other. Finally nandini let out. she did cry.. but she suffered so much.. I just knew it nandini bhi pyar krtii hogi manik se.. poor souls kbhi bol nhi paye ek dusre se. now its time for them to talk. N actually very eager to read next update. It touched my heart. believe me. Waiting. Update soon ... Thanks Yr for it.. Stay blessed

Just awsm...u r my fvrite writer and ur stories r so lovable I cnt stop myself to read..update pls

Loved Pari a lot di
Continue soon

Awesome concept
Different story line

Too much emotional
I cry while reading whole chappy

Parisha sach a cute kid
Feel bad for her
I hope manik use thik karde mins dr ke pass le jake
And nyonika sach a cruel women
Nyonika ko ghr se bahar fekna chahiye

I feel sad for nandu also how much bad happen with her
Nandu suffer so much
The pain of seeing her daughter suffering too much
Apne beti ko ase dekha its not easy

That was an amazing update...I have cried throughout...how do u manage to write so beautifully...m eagerly waiting for the next update...gr8 wrk👏