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for century
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whn i was thinking now u cant give me any surprise there u come with another mindblowing surprise

manik n navya speaking normally

sharing thr thoughts just like long time friends

navya saw manik s uneasines n she just went to him and enquired

manik never thought navya ll be doing this n navya never in her dreams thought manik ll talk to her normally and

i never thought these two ll share a screen space like this ...😆





For one, they had been kind enough to have come this far, just to support him, but more importantly, the only person before whom, he could fall on his knees and bare his soul, where he had no pride or shame, no reputation to live up to, no fear of rejection, was Nandini.

loved this line...



"Dekho Manik, hum tumhare dost to nahi hai, par jabse tum aur Nandini sath ho, humne sirf tumhare liye acha hi socha hai. Agar tumhe koi taqleef hai, tum hame bata sakte ho. Tumhari tabiyat subah se kuch theek nahi lag rahi hai."


There was a time, when she used to consider him the biggest monster on the face of earth, and used to dread him as much as an acrophobic (those who have fear of heights) is scared of heights, but eventually, with time and through Nandini, she saw another side of him, and the more she saw it, the more protective she felt towards him, almost like a younger sister. No one ever knew, not even Nandini, and no one had to because there are few things in life that are utterly and exclusively personal and this was one of her deeply personal thoughts.👏

Manik was in two minds, whether to speak or swallow his words. Had it been in college, he wouldn't have thought twice before shrugging her off with another lie. But then old Manik had seen much less of real life. He had been living in a bubble where friends were FRIENDS and no one else mattered👏

here comes her famous adrak wali chai 👏


Someone should have held her because she almost felt giddy, too dumbstruck to react. THE MANIK MALHOTRA was thanking NAVYA NAVELI in broad daylight?

😆

. The big O on her lips and her ready-to-pop-out eyes embarrassed him to no end. She wasn't clearly expecting a note of thanks from him, though she actually deserved much more than that. Did she still think of him as a monster? But then he couldn't blame her if she did. Hadn't he kicked Ranbir's ass for having brought her along.

😆

"Nahi ruko, I mean please ruko..and let me say this. I know I have been mean to you.""Mean would infact be an understatement. I have always looked down upon you...called you names like behenji and Madhubala...I have publicly humiliated you so many times, aur fir bhi tumne aaj wo kiya that I am not sure ki my own friends would have done. Thank you is a very small word Navya."

👏

"Wo sab to bachpana tha Manik, hum bhi koi kam nautanki the kya, museum mein rakhne layak item the."

👏


Manik couldn't agree more, She definitely was one unique piece. Why then? she still was. But beneath that entertaining exterior, she had a heart of gold and the resilience of iron. Not many women can stand by their choices, or build a life from debris and she had done it with grace and dignity. "But you know I didn't always mean it...kabhi kabhi to bas fun sake hi we used to tease you... Itna bhi bura nahi hun main."

😃

"Tum nahi bhi bolte to bhi hume pata hota ki tum utne bare rakshash ho nahi jitna dikhane ki koshish karte ho." She wasn't joking anymore. "Jo insaan itni shiddat se kisi se mohobbat kar sakta hai, wo kabhi bura ho hi nahi sakta, bas tumhe yeh baat samajhne mein thori si der ho gayi...hum to kabse jane baithe hai."

👏


Sometimes we wonder whether to laugh or to cry at the ironies of life. Here was this girl, who had always been at the receiving end of his nastiest pranks, and yet she said she always believed in his goodness. On the other end, were his friends whom he loved more than his life and yet they doubted his intentions time and again. While some people wait patiently for the winter to turn into spring & turn poison into medicine with the strength of their love, others, who are themselves, insecure, force innocent people into doing beastly things.

👏

👏

It was so unfair that he had to learn it this way. He had already made a hundred hearts bleed, before he could understand the worth of kindness. And how the village belle, the unnassuming Navya Naveli had taught him today.

When the last word ended, he had goosebumps all over, tears were trickling down his face and his legs were trembling. He looked to his side but Nandini wasn't there. Did he want to scream his lungs out or stand there in utter silence? He slumped down on the grass, covering his face with his palms. They were all rushing back to him, no more in hazy bursts of light, or in random order with unknown faces.. He could see...Actually see his own life unfold before his eyes.

😊

Knelt on the grass, he wrestled against time to relive three years in three minutes. Like a man on deathbed, who is suddenly told that he is cured of his disease and has a lifetime to live, Manik didn't know what to do anymore. So many different memories had suddenly come alive, that he couldn't figure out whether to cry for the suffering he had faced alone, or to dance with joy for having found Nandini back. He was completely flummoxed. This is why he had been feeling sick...because these memories, like undigested food, were struggling to come out of his system...

😊

He stayed there for a while till he was steady enough to get back on his feet. He had to see her right now. That s the only thing going on in his mind now. Nothing seemed more urgent at the moment...Neel...the physical distance between then...their fight...the practicality of life.. Nothing , noone... he just had to see her, right NOW! With an illogical fear that if he didn't make it in time, he would lose her again, he rushed inside to declare that he was flying back to Mumbai this very night.


👏

wish ...wish ...i had that lucky pen which javed akthar sahab uses so that i can write those heavenly sweet words to praise you ...

😉


love u dear







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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

whn i was thinking now u cant give me any surprise there u come with another mindblowing surprise

manik n navya speaking normally

sharing thr thoughts just like long time friends

navya saw manik s uneasines n she just went to him and enquired

manik never thought navya ll be doing this n navya never in her dreams thought manik ll talk to her normally and

i never thought these two ll share a screen space like this ...😆





For one, they had been kind enough to have come this far, just to support him, but more importantly, the only person before whom, he could fall on his knees and bare his soul, where he had no pride or shame, no reputation to live up to, no fear of rejection, was Nandini.

loved this line...



"Dekho Manik, hum tumhare dost to nahi hai, par jabse tum aur Nandini sath ho, humne sirf tumhare liye acha hi socha hai. Agar tumhe koi taqleef hai, tum hame bata sakte ho. Tumhari tabiyat subah se kuch theek nahi lag rahi hai."


There was a time, when she used to consider him the biggest monster on the face of earth, and used to dread him as much as an acrophobic (those who have fear of heights) is scared of heights, but eventually, with time and through Nandini, she saw another side of him, and the more she saw it, the more protective she felt towards him, almost like a younger sister. No one ever knew, not even Nandini, and no one had to because there are few things in life that are utterly and exclusively personal and this was one of her deeply personal thoughts.👏

Manik was in two minds, whether to speak or swallow his words. Had it been in college, he wouldn't have thought twice before shrugging her off with another lie. But then old Manik had seen much less of real life. He had been living in a bubble where friends were FRIENDS and no one else mattered👏

here comes her famous adrak wali chai 👏


Someone should have held her because she almost felt giddy, too dumbstruck to react. THE MANIK MALHOTRA was thanking NAVYA NAVELI in broad daylight?

😆

. The big O on her lips and her ready-to-pop-out eyes embarrassed him to no end. She wasn't clearly expecting a note of thanks from him, though she actually deserved much more than that. Did she still think of him as a monster? But then he couldn't blame her if she did. Hadn't he kicked Ranbir's ass for having brought her along.

😆

"Nahi ruko, I mean please ruko..and let me say this. I know I have been mean to you.""Mean would infact be an understatement. I have always looked down upon you...called you names like behenji and Madhubala...I have publicly humiliated you so many times, aur fir bhi tumne aaj wo kiya that I am not sure ki my own friends would have done. Thank you is a very small word Navya."

👏

"Wo sab to bachpana tha Manik, hum bhi koi kam nautanki the kya, museum mein rakhne layak item the."

👏


Manik couldn't agree more, She definitely was one unique piece. Why then? she still was. But beneath that entertaining exterior, she had a heart of gold and the resilience of iron. Not many women can stand by their choices, or build a life from debris and she had done it with grace and dignity. "But you know I didn't always mean it...kabhi kabhi to bas fun sake hi we used to tease you... Itna bhi bura nahi hun main."

😃

"Tum nahi bhi bolte to bhi hume pata hota ki tum utne bare rakshash ho nahi jitna dikhane ki koshish karte ho." She wasn't joking anymore. "Jo insaan itni shiddat se kisi se mohobbat kar sakta hai, wo kabhi bura ho hi nahi sakta, bas tumhe yeh baat samajhne mein thori si der ho gayi...hum to kabse jane baithe hai."

👏


Sometimes we wonder whether to laugh or to cry at the ironies of life. Here was this girl, who had always been at the receiving end of his nastiest pranks, and yet she said she always believed in his goodness. On the other end, were his friends whom he loved more than his life and yet they doubted his intentions time and again. While some people wait patiently for the winter to turn into spring & turn poison into medicine with the strength of their love, others, who are themselves, insecure, force innocent people into doing beastly things.

👏

👏

It was so unfair that he had to learn it this way. He had already made a hundred hearts bleed, before he could understand the worth of kindness. And how the village belle, the unnassuming Navya Naveli had taught him today.

When the last word ended, he had goosebumps all over, tears were trickling down his face and his legs were trembling. He looked to his side but Nandini wasn't there. Did he want to scream his lungs out or stand there in utter silence? He slumped down on the grass, covering his face with his palms. They were all rushing back to him, no more in hazy bursts of light, or in random order with unknown faces.. He could see...Actually see his own life unfold before his eyes.

😊

Knelt on the grass, he wrestled against time to relive three years in three minutes. Like a man on deathbed, who is suddenly told that he is cured of his disease and has a lifetime to live, Manik didn't know what to do anymore. So many different memories had suddenly come alive, that he couldn't figure out whether to cry for the suffering he had faced alone, or to dance with joy for having found Nandini back. He was completely flummoxed. This is why he had been feeling sick...because these memories, like undigested food, were struggling to come out of his system...

😊

He stayed there for a while till he was steady enough to get back on his feet. He had to see her right now. That s the only thing going on in his mind now. Nothing seemed more urgent at the moment...Neel...the physical distance between then...their fight...the practicality of life.. Nothing , noone... he just had to see her, right NOW! With an illogical fear that if he didn't make it in time, he would lose her again, he rushed inside to declare that he was flying back to Mumbai this very night.


👏

wish ...wish ...i had that lucky pen which javed akthar sahab uses so that i can write those heavenly sweet words to praise you ...

😉


love u dear







i love you too my love. U kind of wrote d whole update albeit in rainbow colours only u can do this..only u...
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<font size="3">Wao...Manik is flying back...that pumped me up...now finally we'll have MaNan...yayyy...I'm soo happy!!!!</font>

okhay...that was the impulsive me...you know..stupid sixteen..who hops around for the slightest of things...hehe

Okhay so now...back to normal...

Hi di...how are you..( you never answer.. but its understood that you are completely fine..).

Update was really beautiful...Navya's heart to heart talk with her rakshas..was cute..!! It wasn't much emotional but...really touching..!! MANIK GOT HIS MEMORY BACK...!! THIS IS WHAT THE PLOT DEMANDED RIGHT NOW..!! Now waiting to read his reaction...how would he confront his lady love...who is dying to hear those three little words...and here Manik is returning with the entire dictionary..!! Hehe..

And di..about that wattpad thing...yes there are readers who may feel low..I'm one of them..but you cant help it..thats more efficient and we admit the fact..!! As i said..I'm concerned with the story and thats progressing in an amazing way...



Keep up The good work...
lots of love...
Edited by Candlewick - 8 years ago
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Sorry sorry for commenting late dear. Read last two updates in one go. They are just awesome. You write so beautifully about nishant's inner turmoil and the situation he had gone through. And Manik's reacting to navya's help. The unknown feelings that are haunting manik since morning , finally he remembered his worst 3years past. Good going. Thanks for this lovely updates . And congratulations for your century. Take care bye
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update dear.I really liked navyas manik conversation. I still remembered that episode were navya was blaming so much about manik and nandini at last shut her up.one of fav scene in kyy.How well navya understood him today she can be good little sister to manik.So he get his memory completely. so now my boy want see his star as soon as possible. How brilliantly u r potraing every single emotions dear. hats off to u.
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You are a ⭐️. You made Navya really lovable 👍🏼. Manik got his full memory back, I hope 😊. Now he will understand Nandini's agony better . Hope he realises his father's machinations 😡 and takes precautions against him. Please don't drag Neel's end. Finish him now. Update soon. Take care. ❤️
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Originally posted by: ac2000

You are a ⭐️. You made Navya really lovable 👍🏼. Manik got his full memory back, I hope 😊. Now he will understand Nandini's agony better . Hope he realises his father's machinations 😡 and takes precautions against him. Please don't drag Neel's end. Finish him now. Update soon. Take care. ❤️


I am not dragging neels part dear, the story has a sequence of events that unfold at the right time. If i reorganize the sequence, the flow would b messed up. hv patience... things will unfold at the right time
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Originally posted by: Candlewick

<font size="3">Wao...Manik is flying back...that pumped me up...now finally we'll have MaNan...yayyy...I'm soo happy!!!!</font>

okhay...that was the impulsive me...you know..stupid sixteen..who hops around for the slightest of things...hehe

Okhay so now...back to normal...

Hi di...how are you..( you never answer.. but its understood that you are completely fine..).

Update was really beautiful...Navya's heart to heart talk with her rakshas..was cute..!! It wasn't much emotional but...really touching..!! MANIK GOT HIS MEMORY BACK...!! THIS IS WHAT THE PLOT DEMANDED RIGHT NOW..!! Now waiting to read his reaction...how would he confront his lady love...who is dying to hear those three little words...and here Manik is returning with the entire dictionary..!! Hehe..

And di..about that wattpad thing...yes there are readers who may feel low..I'm one of them..but you cant help it..thats more efficient and we admit the fact..!! As i said..I'm concerned with the story and thats progressing in an amazing way...



Keep up The good work...
lots of love...

I am sorry for never replying.. to u or to that question. the reason being I am not always fine.but i dont want to talk about that part, i dont want to rant about my low days.. but fact is i have plenty of them.. I guess thats how i am, i think more, i feel more and hence sometiesi slip into depression. Its not even a disease that u can pop a pill and get done with. Its chronic,,, its like ur shadow, u carry it everywhere.
But writing helos.. so do ur words... this is my pot of sunshine... tht drags me out of bed and makes me do something worthwhile.
is also cathartic, because when I undergo the lives of my characters, it helps me give a voice to my unspoken feelings. So much for myself, most of which might not make sense to u.

And abt the wattpad thing, dont feel low my dear. thats y i invited u all to join the party because i couldnt have put it up here. I am the same person, this is the same story and u r the same readers. whether its IF or Wattpad or FB, it doesnt really matter. Dont feel any less possessive of it than others..it is ur baby too. Because i wouldnt have come this far without u guys.. :)
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Originally posted by: Satya28

Sorry sorry for commenting late dear. Read last two updates in one go. They are just awesome. You write so beautifully about nishant's inner turmoil and the situation he had gone through. And Manik's reacting to navya's help. The unknown feelings that are haunting manik since morning , finally he remembered his worst 3years past. Good going. Thanks for this lovely updates . And congratulations for your century. Take care bye

Never say sorry for commenting late. I understand we all have a life outside IF. The fact that u care to come here and comment as often as u can means more than u wud know...

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