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Satya28

@Satya28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Amazing update dear. Loved this update. Both manik and Nandini are right at their point. Manik don't want to drag nandu in this matter. On the other hand because of all things happening around her, nandini is reacting like that and the fear of losing him again. She just wants a glimpse of manik for assurance at that time. No matter how deeply they love each other, these small arguments and fights bring them more closer. Beautiful and wonderful update. Thanks for the update. Take care and keep smiling. Bye

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payal94

@payal94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#512

Awesome update

I hope sab thik ho

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Candlewick

@Candlewick

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Posted: 8 years ago

#513

Don't know...why this story is becoming my drug...I'm growing addictive to it ..day by day...

With due respect to every writer of this forum...I admit that MaNan and their bond is best portrayed in '"Ky2S3..!!!

I had to..admit..the final messages by both of them...just showed the maturity of their relation...!!!

And now just one...request...keep giving MaNan moments...even in the next updates..., You are the most active writer..I must say...that shows your emotional contact with this ff..!!

Just hope Manik doesn't meet his dad in Delhi...poor boy..already had so much..!! About Nandini..she was justified to some extent..anyone will freak out...after all we have expectations from the one we love the most...that's the chain of reliance...!!!

Please finish this Mission "
"kill Neel"...ASAP...and also that drama of Ams...don't know why...I never liked her even in the series...!! I can't stand souls for whom..perspective is beyond emotions...!!

Anyways...keep up the good job...update soon...I love you...and your story even more...

Lots of love...

Edited by Candlewick - 8 years ago

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monstermanik

@monstermanik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#514

chap 95

awesome update...

nandini is scared ki manik's dad will ruin their relationship once agn n thats y she dnt want manik to call him n give his status being back to nandini...

poor girl tried everything by distracting him in a lame fight ...bt no use...
bt neel's call made him to stop ...

that idiot is planning marriage n all...
bt he forgot now manik is there to protect nandu frm all d evils...

Edited by monstermanik - 8 years ago

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monstermanik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#515

chap 96

amazing update...

i m loving this ranbir manik bond...
manik found a new frnd on whom he can rely like cabir...
even i m confused y did amms got ready for this marriage thing...
is she also being blackmailed by neel or she is blind enough nt to recognise real face behind sweet mask...
just like abt pandit...
i hope she dnt repeat her mistake agn ...

mukti n alia bond was lovely...
mukti had been too mature coz of past experiences...
so true saying...life is very short so live it enjoy it instead of sulking around abt d things u dnt have..
i loved that part..it was heart touching n beautifully penned down...

lastly navya rocked d update...lol...
hilarious it was to see her taming manik right there n once there was a time where she avoided him even for simply crossing his path...
such a drastic transition in her character too...

Edited by monstermanik - 8 years ago

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monstermanik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#516

chap 97

Heart wrenching update...
it was sooo painful ...

nandini is hell scared abt neel amms n marriage thing n now all of a sudden she gets to know that manik is leaving for delhi in 10 min...
cnt blame her for insecurity..3yrs of pain will take lot more years to heal completely...
though she is happy abt being together once agn after 3 yrs ...
she cnt forget all d agonising pain she went through in a flash of a moment...
time to time those terrible memories will haunt her agn to d point where she will loose her sanity n say some words she wudnt have ever said hurting her love...
bt well that is all abt life n human emotions...

manik is also facing tough time having memory loss ,accident injuries ,getting to knw abt neel ,encounter with chahchi , anticipating amms reaction seeing him agn...
n now nandini's words hit him hard...
n that bounced back to nandini in d same way of words...
no trust no relationship...

both r shattered at d same time n no1 is thinking straight...
one wud have to keep calm n explode later...
otherwise things will go way worse than this...
lets c what u hv in store for manan...

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#517

roh...this was amazing awesome
fab
can't get enough of it
loveeeddd it...you are pro at penning emotions flawlessly👏👏👏👏⭐️

it happens sometimes that we can't understand the person we love the most
and we hurt the people we love the most
we never mean to say those words...but sometimes our anger, helplessness is released in form of words
but we never mean it...it always happens with me :(
i don't know how to calm myself...so i just blurt whatever comes and later regret.😔.same happened with that poor girl

but i know this small small nok jhoks are also necessary to build a strong relation
and manan are habituated to it😉
hope this time too they get back together as early as possible😛

Edited by shoana - 8 years ago

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beautifulchaos

@beautifulchaos

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Posted: 8 years ago

#518

I don't know from where to start and how ...

It has been a while since I had last read your ff and today, as I marathoned through 40 odd chapters from where I had left last time, I could not stop myself from writing these words to you...

It will not be possible for me to write a review of each chapter but believe me when I say that each of them is a mini treasure trove.. I gobbled them up,devoured them completely, relished them with ecstasy and shall forever cherish them with awe...

But I won't say that it is due to fabulous characterization, because :

"When writing a novel a writer should create living people; people, not characters. A character is a caricature."

"Ernest Hemingway

The depth with which you have delved into the psyches of Alya, Mukti, Ranbeer, even Navya (and I'm sure we will get insights into Dhruv's mindset soon too) is commendable...They are not props but living, breathing, and flawed human beings... the ones who I can relate with either in one situation or another, those who would behave like myself under a certain circumstance,,, the ones who have their own stories alongside that of Manan... You made me cry with Alya's confession.. You made me want to hug Mukti for her maturity.No story that I have read thus far have explored the depth of these characters so profoundly. They are as integral to the story as Manan are..

Thus your writing has one rare and not very often seen element to it : A SOUL...

Hats off to you..

Take care and keep writing...

P.S : Real life sucks. I have projects' deadlines knocking on my door,group assignments lined up, exams nearing like a hurricane travelling at a speed of 1000 miles per hour and a backlog that cannot be dilly-dallied anymore. So, I apologise in advance for disappearing till next time. But I shall always look forward to this story.

This story is your baby but I am already harboring motherly feelings for it... I do not know when is the next chapter exactly due or what would it look like once it sees the light of the day (or darkness of night even), but I already love it...

God Bless...

Till next time... Au revoir'

Edited by bitasta - 8 years ago

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vaanii078

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Posted: 8 years ago

#519

God Beautiful update dear.I loved this emotional update I always believe that such situations make manan more stronger.I can't express how much I loved this update.Both are living for each other.Both can't stay away from each other. Manan is luv.waiting waiting waiting for the next update. Thank u much for this update. Take care.