#9MaNan FF: Dheere Dheere Chapter 40/Pg118/28th-January-17

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Shreyakusum

@Kusum_s

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#541

Interesting update... Waiting to know mohit khurana's side's story... And also want to know wat's between jack and twinkle...

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Ash1117

@Ash1117

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#542

Waiting for d update from sooo long bt finally got it...
Awesomee mindblowing upadate...
Hehe abeer ne to manik ke roamnce ke waat he laga dale kaha make out karne ka plan tha aur kaha abeer ke wajase couch pai sona pada hehe poor soul...
Par jo manik ko chayie vo lekar rehta hai agar night ko make out nahi keya to subha kar liye hehe aur uske baad nandu ke daat bhi kha li...
Ye jack aur twinkle ke bich chal kya raha hai do dey like each other bt i think twinkle k apast thoda dark hai isliye vo jack ke paas janese dar rahe hai...
Aab tiger ke dad bhi aa gaye pata nahi aab kya naya tamasha hone wale hai...
Waiting fir nxt update...

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MananPani07

@MananPani07

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#543

Super adorable part

Manan are so cute nandu is a drug for manik

Awww abeer ne manan ka romantic moment kharab kar diya

Manik bilkul baby ki tarah behave kar rh th

Manan moments are awsme

They are the cutest couple

Manik kitna tease kar rh th abeer ko

That jerk Jack ne abeer ko bheja manan ke pass

Gosh he loves to irritate manan

Agar ladke wale ni aate na toh pkka wo maar khata manik se

Sab bilkul aise behave kar rh th jaise sach mai ek dusre ko ni jante hai

And manik hayyeee wo toh nandu ko dekh dekh kar hi khush ho rh th

Oh my gosh jack ke ques are so funny

Jack aur twinkle ke beech mai kuch chal rh hai

Twinkle is hiding something

Nandu kitna strong bnne rh th apne dad ke samne

And uske dad itne sad kyu th

Nandu ke dad ki bhi kya koi sad story hai

Very curious to knw

I love this story alot

Waiting for the next part

Love u di

Thanks for posting

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#544

Superb update...

Manan romance is beautiful...

Abeer n jack team up n disturb manik romance...

Jack is too funny...his question was so irritating...

Jack n twinkle something is cooking...

Nandini father is come ...n she wanted to talk to him...

Can't get what is nandini father character ...good or bad...

Roka ceremony is awsum...

Loved d update...

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siyaaaali

@siyaaaali

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#545

beautiful update...nandu toh like chotusaa baby ...shadi ki step by step rasam love it...

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#546

Great work mawara
Awesomely wrote great effort
I loved it
So cute everything
So hot manan scenes
Eagerly to abt jack n twinkle side story
N Nandu father story
Update asap
Waiting
Awesome

Great
Superb
Amazing
Awesome
Fantastic
Good
Nice

Everything is ur ur update

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#547

Wow wat a brilliant update
Manik and his gussa awww dat was really cute
Manan nd der hot make out session...

Nadu tigers dad entry dats shocking
Bichari nandu

Plzzz update new and beautiful part soon

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Hello dear...

After a long time...

Update was amazing and awesome Mawara...

Evil jack...because of him Manan romance got spoiled ...

poor manik ...

Manik and his punishment... hayee it was so romantic ...

Their moments were beautiful...

Then Rishta mangne ki rasam...

jack's question... 😆😆 it was damn hilarious...

too good...

something is cooking between jack and twinkle...

but it feels like she 's hiding something... matlb kuch tou hai...

Then Nandini 's father came...

Now let see what will happen next...

Well done dear...

continue soon...

keep smiling...

Stay bless..

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

Well! When writer's block knocks your door hard and almost eat you up! Reader's can't expect me to write my best! Wesay bhi har update best ni ho skta na! But I will try to make it up!
Thanks for reading though! At least I updated yayee! Crap he sahi! That's an achievement!

it wasn't crap yaar, but last updates were way better...

And about writer's block.. I can totally empathise, going through the same phase right now..

Don't worry it will pass, always does.