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CHAPTER 13
Nandu entered in manik's room. Manik keep his eyes closed and act that he is sleeping.Nandu came and sit beside him.Manik can feel her presence

Manik pov: aa gyi nandu... Now I will make her mine... But uski wish se..

Nandu caressed His hairs.As she caressed ..manik move and hug her waist tightly.Nandu became shocked(Manik is only acting that he is sleeping)

nandu : ye to sleep me bhi mujhe nhi chodte
But nandu still smiled and started ruffling his hairs

Manik pov:
She is melting.. Yhi to mera plan hai

Nandu make him sleep on pillow and started leaving but manik hold her hand.. In half closed eyes and some tears around his eyes.
manik: don't leave plz don't
Nandu saw his tears And plead.. So she sit again beside him.And manik again hug her waist
Manik : I am sorry
Nandu became shocked
Manik : I will never touch u against ur wish.. Plomise
Nandu became surprised listening his promise.She remain quiet and this time manik pulled her...Nandu gasped
Manik: tum bhi so jaoe.. U are also tired
Nandu : hmm
Manik hugged her.. And hide her in his broad chest
Both slept

In evening
Nandu woke up and get out of his grip.Nandu came out and sit on sofa
nandu: what will I do??? How can monster change in only one hour
Nandu : shayad he realised his mistake
Nandu went to kitchen and prepared coffee. She entered in manik's room but he is not there then she heard sound of manik's car.Nandu look from window that he is going

Nandu: ab kha Jaa rhe h ye
Nandu then get a message from him
Message : nandini,I am having some work.. Aane me late ho jaega.. Tum dinner ker Lena..don't wait for Me.. Sleep in YOUR ROOM
Nandu pov:
My room...wow!! Matlab ab no torture
She started dancing...

At night
Nandu ate dinner but still she is awake.Then at 2am
She heard sound of manik's car.He came with full drunk ( only acting .. He took only half glass drink... But he is in full conscious ).Driver left him on sofa .Manik lie down their and started acting to sleep.Nandu came outside and saw manik seeping half on sofa and half on floor

Nandu : dekho to shi kya halat bna li apni
Nandu came close to him
Nandu : he is drunk.. Smell aa rhi h
Nandu shakes his shoulder.Manik opened His eyes and started acting (in drunk voice)
Manik: ab tum yha bhi aa gyi... Har jgah dikhti ho... Chali jaoe plz.Jaise soha gyi tum bhi jaoe .. Me akela hi sahi hu..
Nandu: aap ye kya bol rhe h.. Uthiye room me chaliye
Manik: nhi jaana mujhe tumhare sath... U called me disgusted.. U slapped me.. U hate me.. And started crying
( fake cry friends... He is only acting )

Nandu : Jo kerna h kero.. I am going
Manik felt his plan flopping
Manik : nandu
Nandu turned
Manik : head ache ho rha h
Nandu heart melted seeing his tears
Nandu : chaliye get up ..I will give u medicine chaliye

She help manik to reach room .Manik stumble again and again
Nandu: try to walk straight
Manik : hmm

Both went in his room
Nandu : aap baithiye .. I will get medicine
Manik nodded
Nandu took medicine and gave him
Manik: nandini plz oil my hairs..my head is aching
Nandu : OK I am coming in a minute
Manik found opportunity and throw medicine

After 15 min
Nandu came with oil and found manik opening his shirt
Nandu pov: why he is opening shirt

Manik saw her face and realised her turmoil
Manik : nandu suffocation ho rha h.. Can u plz open that window
Nandu smiled and opened it

Manik : now give me oil and leave my room
Nandu: me kerdu oiling
Manik : n..onoo u plz goo.. I don't want to see ur face
Nandu felt bad
Nandu : Bas oiling ker du
Manik : I can take care myself.. And he stood up and try to took oil but intentionally act that he is falling
Nandu hold him by his bare shoulder. Due to closeness Nandu started breathing heavily
Manik : chodo mujhe
Nandu : dekh liya kitna take care ker sakte ho apni.. Now chup chap lie down . I will oil ur hair
Manik : no need
Nandu : aap Jaa rhe ho ya me forcefully kru
Manik: going
He lie down
Nandu sit beside him and started oiling his hairs
Nandu : are theek se nhi ho rha
Nandu took manik's head and keep on her lap..to oil his hair properly.. She massaged head
Manik pov: my plan is working.. She is too innocent ..she will Fall easily in my trap..

Nandu massaged his head
Manik kept his eyes closed
Nandu felt sleepy too
She took manik's head and placed it on pillow and about to go but manik is holding her hand tightly
Nandu: ab kya keru he is holding my hand in sleep .. Ager uthaya to fir unka headache hoga.. Yhi so jaati hu.. Morning me jaldi uthker chali jaungi

She lie beside him
Manik pov: plan works... Stupid yhi soo gyi... Now I can enhale her scent
He hugged her
Nandu pov: sleep me bhi chipak rha h monster
Manik pov: her smell is driving me crazy

Nandu hugged him back as she was feeling good
Nandu pov: nandu kya ho rha h tujhe?? Why are u hugging him?? Ye monster h... But his body is Sooo hott ..kya bol rhi h nandu , control urself ...
She touched his back.. And started shivering ..she even feeling wet.Manik hugged her more tightly.Nandu's face was touching his chest.Nandu can feel his hard Torso.Manik also enterwined their legs giving shiver in her whole body. Thus they slept in each other embarace
Edited by manancraze - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
whoa!! Nandini is seriouly falling in maniks trap!!!
poor nandu! she doesn't even know manik's trapping plan,
but manik's obsession towards nandini is a treat..and as u said at 1st of your story,,,I'm really hating maniks cheracter!! you writes so well
#LOVEDIt
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Posted: 8 years ago
Are yaar how can she believes that manik changed in an hour? How can she be so innocent yaar? And manik again and again doing same mistake . He just wants her to be close with him at any cost. Continue soon. Take care bye
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Posted: 8 years ago
AWESOME...Kya notanki hain yaar yeh manik.Main bhi usra rona sunke melt ho rahi thi,accha hua tumne yaad dila diya bar bar ke yeh acting kar raha hain.Poor nandini..Kya kya jhelna par raha hain bechari ko...Thori der ke liye bhool jati hun ke manik evil hain..Manan sleeping was So cute..Yeh manik hamesha usko kaske hug karta hain par nandini ne bhi hug kiya.Pyaar ho raha hain bacchi ko haa..Superb chapter..Update soon and thank you very very much for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing darling. ,... lovly update
Poor Nandu falling in his trap.. save urself baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww nandu is so innocent yr
..

ye manik na kitni easily trap kr rha h
nAndu ko.
or nandu easily trap bhi ho rhi h.
poor Baby.
she is feeling something manik k liye.
ohhh ...
mujhe nandu k liye
bura lg rha h 😭

manik na 😡

Waiting for next update eagerly.
thanks for pm.

Stay blessed.
Keep Smiling..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor Nandini she trapped in Manik's plan
When will Manik realize his mistake?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all the parts in one go...its an amazing story...maniks character is really different or should I say such a cheap creep...and nundu is really innocent...plz don't make her soo innocent...bcz in today's generation girls are not soo tortucher seh ne wali...plz make her little strong...
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Posted: 8 years ago

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