MANANFF: - Page 19

Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

To be honest
I really don't like dark story

But as i love ur stories
SOoo wanna giv it a try

Till now im enjoying

N hopefully bohot dark na ho
Plzzz
Cant bear it
😊

Keep writing
N i really hate dhruv in person
Can u show some scenes in which Dhruv ki chop ho plzzz

He he

Love u loads

Vidhi

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

Wow awesome!! Nandini was so cute n fiercely took his class 😆 Mr.monster was speechless for a second n shocked 😆 She pucked on him,lol...Manik is attracted to this cute little girl,interesting 😉 Wat does he plans to do now, waiting eagerly for next part... Thanks for the pm 😊 😊

Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

Completely mindblowing chappy!!!👏

DhruNi.. Love them much!! That was seriously adorable.. Any sane guy whose future wife is drooling over a stranger😆

Aryamann is her manik's step bro.. Why is he taking the credits to himself?🤔

Manik can't digest cheesy couple.. Toh hugging n getting lost in nandu isn't cheesy?! Aww Malhotra phase gya murthy mein.. Jeez! Manik getting lost in nandu.. Nandu carefree.. Dhruv awkwardness ka mountain leke khada tha.. Nandu asking him will he treat his girlfriend in the same way.. Prologue.. Oh oh! This is interesting!

Nandu puked over manik!!🤣

Manik hugged her hoping it to be not his imagination.. Aww that was cute of Mr. Malhotra!

Abhi nandu phase gyi.. Manik is highly unpredictable!

Loved it totally!!

You're an amazing writer Alisha!!

Lots of love!

Originally posted by: Cooki

It's damn interesting story dear..
It was wonderful update..
Manik can't digest cheesiness!!
Haha...
DhruNi moments were adorable...
Aryaman is manik's step brother..
What is the deal between them!??
Nandini murthy so happened to involve in a verbal fight with her boss!!
& her boss just so happened to decide that she's going to be his!!
Nandini was so nervous!
& she just happened to bump into his boss!!
What will happen next!?
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Wow!! Awesum stry dear...
Lvd it so much .u r really an awesum writer..
Vry sry dear 4 late commenting...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Cumin 2 update it ws really suprb...
Hahaha.. Nandu s unblivble... Manik se panga...
Really surprisin dat manik noticed her...
Upar se nandylu s gonna wrkin under manik..
Prologue seems so scary..lagtha he more r there 2 c..
Both prts really rckd... Dhruvni r so close 2 each othr...
Navya aur harshad ka bhi entry ho gya...
Ab bachi he muklya n cabir...waitin 4 their entries dear..
D way u r pennin d stry ws so AWsum...
Really hpy 2 c a dark stry from u yaar.. All ur 4 stories r best in evry ways.
Lvd ur bw stry also vry much...wanna enjoy more...
Lukin 4 wrd 4 ur updates do continue dear...
Waitin 4 nxt update...

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

this was good...

nandu turned out to be the same girl which manik saw at street of couple... n she in her drunk state scolded him...hehee

n she puked on him ...lolzzz

so now what will manik do as it seems like manik has something strong attraction towards nandu...

Originally posted by: shoana

thanks for pm dear
sorry for late comment
update was superb...
drunk nandini is always amazing
manik thought that dhruv and nandini are couple😔
but manik got attracted towards her...😕
nandini was so cute
when she was having silly fight with manik😆
she even puked on him🤣..now manik won't leave her😉
she almost lost her breath when she remembered about last night
why did manik took her to his floor..oh..silly me..time for payback😳
manik already decided to make her his
now what he is going to do😲

can't wait for next update
continue soon dear
take care

Originally posted by: Pravallika69

Omg Nandu drunk hahahahah drunk Nandu s always fun n sweettt n most probably the cutest... Awww alliii the new set of story line s all set to rock m jus glad tat dis turning out go b soo nice n intrstng starting se...
Hahahha Manik actually rmbrd Nandu as his staring employee hehehe jus wow n lovely... U kw best part was Nandu fighting wid Manik for his phone hahahah tooo good dis s...
Damn nandu dhruv se pyaar nahi karthi he s like her option as dhruv tc of her too much... Hope she luv Manik soon n Manik ne tho decide kar liya she s his sooo he will not leave her...
Aab usne 40th floor peh le gaya aab kya karega usse my god so curious now cant wait for next part update soon...
Hope he behave politely wid her rather than ordering her to love him... Dark story na thoda daar lag raha hai... But i kw tuh jo b likhegi thr vl definetly b a reason n now pakka that vl b best...
Jus waiting for nect part update soon

Thanks for PM
Lots of love
Pravallika

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

The prologue left me thinking! It seems interesting! What was going on?

And about the 2 chapters they were awsum! Loved them!

Well written and interesting! MaNan are just superb😳

After Nandini drunk night really eager to know what's gonna happen on 40th floor😉

Do update soon!