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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

REALLY AMAZING CHAPPY


nandu drunk

scolding manik


druv s reaction


again they met in the lift
manik taking her to 40 th floor


gal update soon

suspence s killing meee


😊





Hope to b back soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priyanair04

Nandu is just impossible...oh god like seriously she ddnt get anyone to shout and puke on ..the great manik malhotra...and it was so cute of nandu like smiling sheepishly and telling dhruv I think he is my boss...and I told u koyi aur nahi n.a. sahi nandu wl definitely go to 40th floor but ddnt expect so jaldi...and manik malhotra has already decided nandu to b his...now waiting for 40th floor scene...


She had to
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kyy_manan

This part was jus enough to drive me crazyyy!!!
I finally lost my patience as I yelled at her and the girl's eyes widened in shock as her words died away and she stared at me.

With her cherry lips parted slightly and her long wavy curls of hair dishevelled as it fell gracefully onto her cheeks. I stared into the warm, brown orbs of this girl as I tightened my grip on her wrists.

She just felt so perfect in my grasp. So, perfect, that I had to make sure it wasn't just my imagination by pulling her into my embrace, entrapping her tiny frame with my long arms as she came in contact with my broad chest. As the girl grasped, my shirt in attempts to push me away, all I could feel was her scent which drove me crazy.

It was precisely then, that I decided she was going to be MINE.

Loved it soo damn much
The story begins...
That decision that she was HIS

Dhruv likes nandini
I guess...
And Manik thinks him her boyfrnd
And already hates him!

Tysm fr pm
Lots of love



Thank u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princeraj1425

Really awesome chappy...
Loved it...
Their second encounter that too with nandu in drunk state... Lol... That was fun..

Seems like dhruv likes Nandini... But ab kya kre Mr malhotra ka dil aa gya h nandu pe to...

Let's see what he is going to do with her...
Eagerly waiting for the nxt one...

And yes I must tell u all ur stories are just awesome with such a different concepts.. U write every story so beautifully... Such An amazing writer with a great imagination skills...

Stay blessed...



Hahaha! !! Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Ohh...I really liked it ...That was just quite interesting ...Dhruv was back up plan of nandu..Nandu is spellbound by manik..Manik thinks dhruv is her bf..he already hates him...Manik is obsessed with her ..So that will be more amazing ..Manik ka character is quite nyc..waiting for next update. .Thanks for pm..Stay blessed ..Keep Smiling ..



He is mysterious and dark
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189

Im liking it so far but jusr hope that its not too dark!
Like violence n stuff ?



No it won't
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KYYian

wonderful

what a manan meet... drunken nandini n angry manik...perfect ...and nandu puked on manik...hilarious

but manik ki bhi Kamaal hai...he thought dhruv as nandus bf still he wants Nandu to be his...this is called as dark manik...possessive n passionate manik...

I loved his pov

what manik gonna do wid nandini?

suspense is killing me

update asap plz



Hahaha different shades of Manik
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Amazing update.. Nandu me toh mind blowing first impression bna liya hai... But knowing it to be a dark ff.. Things might might not turn out all good for now..

Extremely excited to read more
Thank u for the pm and this amazing update

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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well lets see
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Alisha

THKS for the PM..

WOOAAA !!!!! AUPERB UPDATE...

SRSLY !!!!! NANDINI DRINKS all that stuff...HARD DRINKS ????

Hehehe ...DHRUV WAS HAVING SUCH A DIFFICULT TIME HANDLING NANDU...
AFTER ALL BESTEST OF BEST DRIENDS R THERE FOR EACH OTHER...

OOOAAA!!!! GOOD MANIK WAS THERE TOO...
WOW!!!!! MANIK DID RECOGNIZE HER...

IF HE DOESNT HAVE A GF THEN IT DOESNT MEAN OTHER LOVE BIRDS CANT BE COZY N ALL


CRAP !!!!!! MANIK ALREADY. PROMISED HIMSELF NANDINI WILLBE HIS...

WHAT !!!!! MANIK TOOK HER ON HIS FLOOR...SHIT...
NANDINI WAS A LITTLE SCARED...ME TOO.

CONT SOON



The story begins now
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syami

wow!!!!
its super amazing
I loved
tq for pm

haha drunk nandu
is always full of surprise
seriously she fought
for no reason and puked on him
ewww

but he didn't say anything???
hmmm
so curious to Noe
wots in maniks head
he took her to his cabin



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