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alisha seth

@Apple_Rush

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: archu_asok
Awesome update. Well written. Nandini's pov was amazing. Dhruni's bond was superb. Manan's first meet was mindblowing. Interesting. Excited.. eager to read further. Continue soon. thanks for pm. Sry for late reply
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊

Thank you so much!!

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Arpita

@arpita_26

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Not read the update yet just wanted to first one to comment

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soothu

@soothu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

that was awesome...funny,,

nandu puked over him😆

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

REALLY AMAZING CHAPPY

nandu drunk

scolding manik

druv s reaction

again they met in the lift

manik taking her to 40 th floor

gal update soon

suspence s killing meee

😊

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ROOP0605

@ROOP0605

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

awsm

interesting

eagerly waiting for next part

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pdiyar193

@pdiyar193

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Thanks for the PM!!

Hmmm this story is very different!

Getting really interesting!

Nandini drunk was funny!

Love what she was talking to Dhruv!

Lol Manik annoyed and shouting!

She felt sick! Bless her!

Can't wait to read the next part!

Continue soon!!:)

Edited by pdiyar193 - 9 years ago

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Keeprak

@Keeprak

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Very interesting update. So dhruv is nandini's backup plan, poor boy. In the first interaction only nandini made quite an impression on manik. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for this wonderful update.

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Wow. .

Interesting

Manik is obsessed with nandini from now

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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priyanair04

@priyanair04

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Nandu is just impossible...oh god like seriously she ddnt get anyone to shout and puke on ..the great manik malhotra...and it was so cute of nandu like smiling sheepishly and telling dhruv I think he is my boss...and I told u koyi aur nahi n.a. sahi nandu wl definitely go to 40th floor but ddnt expect so jaldi...and manik malhotra has already decided nandu to b his...now waiting for 40th floor scene...

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Pari

@kyy_manan

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

This part was jus enough to drive me crazyyy!!!
I finally lost my patience as I yelled at her and the girl's eyes widened in shock as her words died away and she stared at me.

With her cherry lips parted slightly and her long wavy curls of hair dishevelled as it fell gracefully onto her cheeks. I stared into the warm, brown orbs of this girl as I tightened my grip on her wrists.

She just felt so perfect in my grasp. So, perfect, that I had to make sure it wasn't just my imagination by pulling her into my embrace, entrapping her tiny frame with my long arms as she came in contact with my broad chest. As the girl grasped, my shirt in attempts to push me away, all I could feel was her scent which drove me crazy.

It was precisely then, that I decided she was going to be MINE.

Loved it soo damn much

The story begins...

That decision that she was HIS

Dhruv likes nandini

I guess...

And Manik thinks him her boyfrnd

And already hates him!

Tysm fr pm

Lots of love