MANANFF: - Page 11

Originally posted by: syami

wow!!!! alisha
I loved it
thxz for Pm

so dhruvni are bff
and she somewhere feel
for him
ahh I love the way
u penned it
yet another beautiful
story
she was so lost in his eyes
I guess even manik noticed her
ahh so excited can't wait

Originally posted by: Pravallika69

Awww aliii baby jus super start yipeee jus wow n m
Jus loving the start too too too much baby... I think pehli baar hai teri story meh Dhruv hai haina see how deep i follow ur stories baby... Aab dhruv aye teri story meh Nandu ka bf bana uff tho yahi tha bf Manik was talking in prologue hmmm intresting jaise nandu was telling abt dhruv seems she does not love him but as he s only one she interact so no option but jab Manik ayega woh usse dekhegi b kaise haina...
N wohooo Harshad b hai n Navya b awww good but Harshad seems positive hmmm but pata nahi cant cum to conclusion but i hav full faith on u baby n i kw dis s gonna be one super journey again wid u... Looking forward very badly for story to proceed...
N here comes the greek god ufff his eyes its actually my fav part apart from his mole above his lips i love his eyes n the way u dedicated dis update for his eyes s jus beautiful n awesome n aab Manik ka POV ka waiting i kw in tat pakka he s gonna feel some spark abt Nandu when she was ogling... Hmmm baby aab wait nahi hotha jaldhi jaldhi story shuru karo warna wid questions m gonna make u also mad baby so pls ha keep writing soon

Thanks for PM
Lots of love
Pravallika

Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

Ah ah Alisha! This was so lovely!!

DhruNi.. Idk how much I craved for dhruni scenes😒. Love them so much! Cuteness overloaded scene was🤪😎

Pancakes.. Yaar u made me hungrier.. Bhook lagi hai😔. And nandu giving her grateful smile to her for pancakes.. Can understand this totally😆

40 floors! Top floor CEO ka hai.. Manik Malhotra... Nandu first sight pe hi started staring shamelessly😆and manik staring back with one eyebrow raised🤣

So nandu thinks she n dhruv might get married.. But layer when I read this harshad ka part I was like.. This one might be her boyfriend.. Later when CEO aaya toh I was sure.. This guy is the last boyfriend who'll last forever😳

Manik's eyes... Nandu is already so curious about his eyes.. Manik will go all ga-ga over her smile?!

This CEO guy is hadd se zyada hot😆

I'm lovin' it!

Update soon n thnx for the PM!

Originally posted by: LUCKYRICKLY

Haa!!! Manik hi hoga!!!
Aur koun hoga!!! Current poll jaisa lamba,,, and chocolate brown eyes 😆 😆
Parth ki fans mujhe jaroor pitegi 😆
Nandu and dhruve 😕 really
So eh dono first mulaakaat mai look look game khel rahi hai 😆
Thank you!! Aap ne barosa diya !! Jyada dark story nai hai eh
So mai happily enjoy kar Sakti hu

Originally posted by: kyy_manan

Uff thank god it wont be extreme dark

Dark is cool with me

First day of her at place

Dhruv isvher best frnd

Intrstng

Well I guess its Manik Malhotra as the CEO

Whom she was staring at

His eyes ^ ^

Loving it

Tysm fr pm

Lots of love

Originally posted by: jesse93

Its Manik, who else can it be?
Saare qualities sirf ussise match karte hain.

Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq

Superb start of story.
What a Tashan entry of ceo of company.
Thank God it's not too much dark.
But medium dark story always attracts more.
Next part soon plz.

Originally posted by: shoana

awesome start
so basically nandini and dhruv are best friends..which nandini thinks may turn into marriage soon😲
nandini's first day of job
she is working for manik
and she was drooling over him😆
they had eyelock in first meet itself😉
waiting to read further
how she stops herself from falling for him😉

btw i'm relaxed that this won't be extreme dark😃

thanks for pm dear
continue soon
take care

Originally posted by: adorableniti

awesome update..
the concept is very interesting..
dhruni.. so cute and reading about them after months feels so good..
manik.. ceo.. interesting..
thanks for the pm.. u r the one who regularly pms updates..
excited..

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

Awesome!! So dhruv n nandini are best friends n nandu sees her future husband in him,interesting... But little does she know that life is really unexpected n future unpredictable... First day at job n nandini openly ogling at the CEO 😉 😆 I never knew one cud b so smitten by someone's eyes 😳 Looking forward to explore more about this cold-hearted CEO,pls continue soon... Thanks for the pm 😊 😊