Manan OS Diary - 3. Jo Maangi Thi Dua (part -3)(pg no.3)(16.7.2016)

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RAJMAHAL -

Once upon a time there was a king named Raja SangaMitra .

He was a very just King.


All his subjects used to swear on his kindness.

He had two children - Yuvraj Rishab and Yuvrani Nandini.




Rishab was 5 years elder to Nandini.

Rishab was a very kind Prince just like his father.

And he was a very protective brother.

Nandini was always pampered by the duo.

Nandini had lost her mother at a very young age.

She was a shy, sweet and innocent girl.

Her father Raja Sangamitra didn't remarry after the death of his first wife as he didn't want his kids to suffer incase the new woman in their lives turns out to be evil.

But he never let the kids to feel the absence of their mother.

He gave both his children the live of mother and father.

They were one happy family.

Nandini was very delicate.

She was a trained singer.

Every morning, she used to do her music practice.

That's how the day of the Rajmahal would begin.


One day an Evil King Raja Vikram who ruled the neighbouring empire laid his eyes on Nandini while she was roaming in the garden.


He liked her beauty and her voice.

Raja Vikram made a vow to make her his.

He approached Raja SangaMitra and asked for Nandini's hand in marriage.

Raja SangaMitra was aware of the philandering ways of Raja Vikram.

He was a womaniser and an alcoholic.
So Raja SangaMitra straightforward rejected the proposal.

Raja Vikram felt very offended and insulted due to the rejected.

He left the Rajmahal and went to his kingdom.

But he couldn't forget the insult done by Raja Sangamitra.

He was determined to take revenge of the insult.

He plotted against Raja SangaMitra.

Raja Vikram attacked the Rajmahal in the darkness of the night.

He broke the pact between the two Kingdoms that they wouldn't attack each other.

Raja Vikram put Raja SangaMitra behind the bars and took control over the Kingdom.

Prince Rishab tried to protest but King Vikram beat him and threw him outside the Rajmahal.

Prince Rishab was helpless as he didn't have any support to attack the guards of King Vikram.

Prince Rishab tried everything to sneak into the Rajmahal to save Nandini but always got caught.

Nandini was kept in a desolated part of the Rajmahal.

Nobody knew the place where Nandini was kept. It was known only to King Vikram.

He used to visit Nandini everyday and tried to convince her to marry him.

But Nandini never allow him to come close to her and refused to marry him.

King Vikram used to get angry and beat Nandini with a hunter .

But Nandini's determination was so strong that despite the pain she suffered, never agreed to King Vikram's demands.

She had full confidence that one day her brother Prince Rishab would come to save her.

She was living with this single hope.

Like they say everyone has some weakness.

So did King Vikram ...

King Vikram had a small sister of Nandini's age .

He loved his sister to such an extent that he would sacrifice his life for her.

Princess ALIYA was the sister of King Vikram.



She was a very beautiful girl . Full of confidence. But she had a sweet and innocent side to her.

One day Princess ALIYA was to return to King Vikram as she had completed her studies in a gurukul for Royals.

Princess Aliya had met a prince of neighbouring Kingdom and fell in love with him.

The prince was none other than Yuvraj Manik.
He was the only son of Raja Yashvardhan Singh.


Manik was handsome, intelligent and a very sophisticated person.

Initially he didn't like Aliya but later due to her sweet nature decided not to break her heart and agreed to marry her.

King Vikram was very happy for Princess Aliya.

He met Yuvraj Manik and instantly liked him.

King Vikram fixed Aliya and Manik's marriage after consulting Manik's father.

Both of them were to be married in a couple of weeks.

King Vikram invited Yuvraj Manik to stay at his Rajmahal so that they can get to know more about each other.

Yuvraj Manik accepted the invitation.

He came to stay at the Rajmahal.

Though Yuvraj Manik himself lived in a Palace but he was impressed with the interiors of this Rajmahal.

King Vikram welcomed Yuvraj Manik in a grand way and threw a lavish party to the subjects of his Kingdom.

Prince Rishab also attended the party in disguise to save his sister.

But again got caught by the guards.

This time King Vikram decided to kill Prince Rishab.
He would have succeeded had Manik not interfered.

Manik saw that the guards of King Vikram were beating up a person.

Yuvraj Manik said to them that without any reason they shouldn't be attacking a person who is without a weapon.

King Vikram had to leave Prince Rishab as he couldn't disclose his secret before him.

Prince Rishab observed that Yuvraj Manik was not as bad as King Vikram.
So he decided to take Yuvraj Manik's help to free his sister Nandini.

One fine day when Manik was walking in the garden of the Rajmahal when he heard a beautiful voice of a girl singing.

Manik was really impressed with the voice.

He looked around everywhere but couldn't find the location from where that voice was coming.

Manik fell in love with that voice.

It had become Manik's routine that daily he used to come to the garden to listen to that voice.

And to his luck, Manik spotted a huge wall at the back of the Rajmahal.

He went near the wall and realized that the voice was coming from behind the wall.

Manik tried to climb the wall but it was too tall.

So he decided to talk to the owner of the voice from across the wall.

Manik - Umm... Maaf kijiye ga. Kya mai jaan sakta hu ki aap kaun ho.

Nandini immediately stopped singing on hearing a stranger's voice.

Nandini - Dekhiye aap Jo bhi ho. Yahan se chale jaiye.

Manik - Magar aap hai kaun aur is deewar ke peeche kya kar rahi ho.

Manik heard the sound of anklets behind the wall.

The sound decreased which indicated that the girl wearing the anklets had run away from there.

The next few days Manik tried to search for her but failed.

One day while Manik had gone out to visit the market, he was stopped by a person whose condition was worst than a beggar.

Manik asked - Kaun ho aap.

The person - Mai Yuvraj Rishab hu.

Aap Jo Rajmahal me reh rahe ho wo hamara hai. Raja Vikram ne dhoke se usey apne kabze me kar lia. Aur mere Pitaji aur behen ko bhi bandhi bana lia. Please aap unhe chudane me meri madad kijiye.

Manik - Theek hai mai aap ki madad karunga but Hume kaise pata chalega ki Raja Vikram ne in dono ko kaha chupane rakha hai.

Rishab- Pitaji ko to unhone Karavas me rakha hai bandhi banake aur meri behen ko pata nahi kaha rakha hoga.

Manik remembered that he had heard a girl sing behind the huge wall so he asked Rishab if his sister can sing.

Rishab answered in positive.

Manik told Rishab everything that he had heard a girl's voice from behind the wall.

They both made a plan to rescue Nandini.

Meanwhile the prepations of Manik and ALIYAs marriage were going on in full swing.

Taking the opportunity Manik sneaked Rishab into the Rajmahal.

Rishab went and rescued Raja SangaMitra and then went to the wall that Manik had mentioned.

Rishab called Nandini's name and she instantly recognised his voice.

She told him that the key to the door leading inside the wall was with Raja Vikram and that no one can reach the key without his permission.

Rishab went and told everything to Manik.

Manik decided to help Rishab in getting the key.

Manik somehow reached King Vikram's room and got the key hidden in a vase.

He was about to take the key outside when Raja Vikram pointed a gun at Manik.

Raja Vikram- Yuvraj Manik aap hamare behen ke hone wale pati hai. Aap ko ye sab Shoba nahi deta. Wo chabi Hume de dijiye chul chap.

Manik ignored him and Was about to walk away when Raja Vikram pulled the gun's trigger pointing it towards Manik.

But someone pushed Manik aside and took the bullet in her chest.

It was Princess Aliya who came in between to save her love Manik.

Aliya fell down and Manik came rushing to her and kept her head on his lap.

Manik- Ye apne kya kardiya Aliya.

Hamari jaan bachane ke liye apne apni jaan daav pe lagadi.

Aliya - Manik hum apse pyar karte hai. Jaan se bhi zyada pyar karte hai. Apke liye to aisi 100 zindagiya khurban kardenge hum.

Manik Hume kabhi mat bhool na. Humse zyada pyar apko shayad hi koi karega. Ab hamare Jane ka saman aagaya hai.

Manik - Aliya tumhe Kuch nahi hoga. Aisi baatein mat karo. Hum abhi vaid Ji ko bulate hain.

Aliya held Manik's hand and said-
Manik hamari akhri icha Puri kardijiye. Hum apki suhagan banke narna chahte hai. Hamari maang bhar dijiye.

Manik didn't want to reject ALIYAs last wish so he filled her hair parting with his blood by cutting his thumb with a knife.

Aliya cupped Manik's face and closed her eyes forever.

The world stopped for Raja Vikram.

He had shot his own sister.

In his madness he had destroyed his own world.

Now he didn't have any reason to live as his sister was dead.

He couldn't take it and shot himself with the same gun with which he had shot Aliya.

Manik Still wasvin a shock of ALIYAs death.

Rishab kept his hand on Manik's shoulder.

Manik got up and gave the keys to Rishab.

Rishab Went and freed Nandini.

Meanwhile Manik cremated Aliyah and Vikram with due respect.

Raja SangaMitra thanked Manik for Helping them in getting the Rajmahal and Nandini back.

Manik for the first time saw Nandini.

Both their eyes meet and they got lost in each other.

Manik had already begin to love her voice and on seeing her beauty he couldn't control himself looking at Nandini for a long time.

Few days passed by.

Manik father also came to visit the Rajmahal and both the Kings decided to get their children married.

And finally the day arrived for Manik and Nandini's marriage.

Nandini assured Manik that though they would be husband and wife but still she would never ever think of taking ALIYAs place in his heart.

Manik felt happy that though he didn't love Aliya but still she had a special place in his heart as she had sacrificed her life for Manik. And that Nandini was understanding enough to accept him with ALIYAS memories.

Both of them got married and Nandini went to Manik's Kingdom.

And Raja SangaMitra and Yuvraj Rishab got their Rajmahal back.

And all of them lived happily ever after.

Phewww...

Done with the OS.

This is my first Time that I have attempted a one shot story.

I hope you guys like it.

Please give your comments.

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Manan- So we meet again

A short story on how Manan meet at the exam centre and how Manik falls for her at first sight but couldn't approach her due to his shy nature.

What happens when they meet again after few years?


Will he be able to express his feelings?

Will Nandini notice him ?


Stay tuned to find out more.

Manik Malhotra - 19 year old MBA student of SPACE INSTITUTE. A complete nerd. Son of Suyash Malhotra , leading businessman of India and Nyonika Malhotra, trustee of EXCEL COLLEGE.Books are his only friends. Doesn't talk with anyone much especially girls except his darling sister Mukti Malhotra. Stays miles away from them.

Nandini Murthy- 18 year old MBA student of EXCEL COLLEGE. A complete opposite of Manik. Bold Stylish and a party animal. Not interested in studies and is pampered a lot by her father and mother.Only Daughter of Arvind Murthy one of the top businessmen of India and Abhilasha Murthy, a social worker. Has a cordial relation with the Malhotras .

Mukti Malhotra-18 year old tomboy. Loves her Manik bhai a lot . Studies Science in EXCEL COLLEGE. Good friend of Nandini.

Cabir Dhawan-19 year old fun loving guy. Friends with Mukti and Nandini. Studies in the same college as them.

Remaining character will be introduced in the story when needed.

A girl was sleeping peacefully in her room .

Her sleep was disturbed by the constant ringing of her phone.

The girl got irritated and lifted the call.

Girl- Hello... who the hell is this ?

The person on the other side of the phone - Nandu... tu abhi tak so rahi hai. Bhool gayi aaj hamara exam hai.

Nandini got up immediately with a jerk.

Nandini -

What ????

Exam !!!!!!

Oh God Mukti mai to bilkul hi bhool gayi thi.

(The girl who was sleeping was Nandini and the other girl was Mukti)

Mukti - Acha ab Jane de. Jaldi se ready hokar neeche aaja. Mai wait kar rahi hu.

Nandini - Ok abhi aayi. Give me 10 min.

Nandini got ready in no time and rushed down.


Nandini - Mukku.

Mukti turned back and saw Nandini.

Both of them sat in the car and drove to the examination centre.

Mukti -

Nandini what the hell is this?

How can you forget that today is your exam?

Nandini made an innocent face and said - Mukku wo main kal soha ki party me gayi thi. To isiliye bhool gayi.

Mukti - Tum bhi na Nandini kamal karti ho. Tum Janti ho na Soha kaisi hai fir bhi tum uski parties attend karti ho.

Nandini - Mukku comeon . Don't start it again. Pehle hi main tension me hu. Aur tum mujhe aur tension de rahi ho.

Mukti sighed and said- Ok fine.

They reached the examination centre.

Mukti- By the way kaunsa subject hai aaj tumhara.

Nandini - Oh shit!!!!!!!

Mukti - Kya hua?

Nandini - Mujhe to pata hi nahi aaj kaunsa subject hai.

Mukti - Congratulations... Tab toh ho gayi tum pass.

Nandini - Taunt mat karo. Aur batao mai kya karu.

In the meantime a guy came to Mukti and said- Mukti ye lo tumhara hall ticket. Tum ghar pe bhool gayi thi.


Mukti bit her tongue and said- Thanks Bhai. Jaldi me mai bhoolgayi.

The guy was Manik, Mukti's brother.

Manik - Ok. But Next time be careful.

Mukti - Ok Bhai.

Manik looked at Nandini and was mesmerised by her beauty.

Nandini too looked at Manik but ignored him as he was not a guy of her type.

Manik wore spectacles and applied oil in his hair which gave his hair a sticky look.

Nandini just like other girls ignored him due to his looks.

Mukti - Bhai apki help chahiye.

Manik - Haan bolo...

Mukti - Ye meri friend hai Nandini. She didn't prepare for the exam.
Toh please aap uski help kardoge please. You both have the same paper today.

Manik - You mean to say that I have to help her in cheating.

Mukti - Haan Bhai please... warna wo fail hojayegi.

Manik looked at Nandini.

Mukti - Nandini bol na ...

Nandini made an innocent face and said- Haan please help kardijiye na. Apka ye favour mai kabhi nahi bhoolungi.

Manik melted seeing Nandini's innocent face.

Manik - Ok.

Nandini - Thank u thank u so much.

Saying this she went inside the examination hall.

Manik smiled seeing her excitement and followed her after wishing good luck to Mukti.

In the examination hall-

Fortunately for Nandini, her seat was exactly behind Manik.

Manik showed her the entire paper.

Nandini copied it checking from time to time if the invigilator was seeing her.

The examination finished and Nandini heaved a sigh of relief.

She went outside the examination hall and waited for Manik.

Manik came out after five minutes.

Nandini - Thanks so much aapne meri help ki. Agar aj aap nahi hote toh pata nahi mai kya karti.

Manik - It's Ok. You don't have to thank me.

In the meantime, Cabir came to Nandini and asked - Hey Nanz how was your paper. Saare questions ache se answer kiye na.

Nandini - Haan Cabir. The paper was just awesome.

(Cabir was Nandini's friend)

All thanks to Manik who helped me in the exam.

Mukti also came by then and heard that Nandini had written the paper very well with Manik's help.

Mukti - Thanks Bhai. You are the best.

Cabir - To Nanz chale...

Nandini - Haan Chalo...

Saying this she went with Cabir and Manik went with Mukti.

Manik turned and saw Nandini walking away with Cabir.

Nandini too looked back and found Manik already looking at her.

She smiled at him and went away.

Days past by and it was now the time for the results of the examination.

Nandini was very nervous as she didn't want to fail in the examination.

She checked the results online and jumped in joy as she had got 98% in the exam.

She thought to thank Manik personally.

Nandini called Mukti and asked for Manik's number.

Mukti said that Manik had left for London to complete his further studies.

Nandini felt bad that she couldn't thank Manik properly.

Years passed by and Nandini slowly started to forget about Manik.

Nandini joined her father's business.

She was doing very well in the business.

Meanwhile in London -

Manik had completed his studies and was returning to India after 3 years.

He didn't forget Nandini even for a second.

Manik was happy that finally he will get to see Nandini after so many years.

He was not the same boring Manik anymore.

The nerd with sticky hair and thick glasses was transformed into a hot handsome and sexy guy.


Girls were ready to die for his one look.

But Manik had only one girl in his mind and heart - Nandini.

Since the Time he had seen Nandini at the examination centre, there wasn't a single day when he didn't think about her.

Finally he was going to meet her. The love of his life NANDINI MURTHY.

Everyone in the Malhotra house knew about Manik's love for Nandini .

Manik's parents had secretly fixed Manik and Nandini's wedding and wanted to give them a surprise on Manik's return from London.

Finally the day arrived when Manik came back to India.

Murthy Mansion -

Nandini's Mom came to Nandini's room to wake her up.

Nandini - Mom please let me sleep.

N.M.- Nandu uth jaa Beta. Aaj teri engagement hai.

Nandini got up with a jerk.

Nandini - Engagement????

N.M.- Haan Beta.

Nandini - But Mom itni jaldi kya hai. Mujhe abhi apna career banana hai.

N.M.- Mai kaunsa tumhari shadi karwa rahi hoon. Bas engagement abhi karlena aur shaadi baad me karlena.

Nandini - But Mom aise achanak...

N.M.- Achanak nahi Beta mai saalo se soch rahe the hum log. Ladka bahut Acha hai. Tum humpar trust karti ho na.

Nandini nodded her head in a yes.

N.M.- Toh bas bharosa rakho humpe. Hum kabhi tumhara bura nahi chahenge. Ab jao jaldi se ready hojao.

Nandini went to freshen up and got ready in a dress selected by her mother.


Nandini came down and saw the Malhotras sitting in the hall.

Nandini to her mother - Mom ye Mukti ke Mom Dad yahan...

N.M.- Haan Beta inhi ke bete se tumhari engagement fix ki hai humne.

Nandini - Matlab Manik se...

N.M.- Haan.

Nandini - No Mom mujhe nahi karni ye engagement.

N.M- Beta ek baar mil to Lo usse.

Nandini - Mom milna kya hai. Mujhe MANIK se nahi karni engagement.

Manik came inside and heard their convo.

Manik - But mujhe to tumse engagement karni hai.

Nandini turned to see who was the person who was disturbing their conversation.

Nandini - Tum kaun ho aur yaha kya kar rahe ho.

Nandini's mother left both of them alone.

Manik - Waise Nandini mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni beautiful hogayi ho.

Nandini - Listen tum Jo bhi ho. Just leave.

Manik - Aise kaise hosakta hai ki mai tumse bina engagement kiye yaha se chala jau.

Nandini - What???? Meri engagement to Manik ke sath hone wali hai.

Manik - Haan to Manik ke sath hi to ho rahi hai tumhari engagement.

Nandini - Iska MATLAB...

Manik - Matlab ke mai hi Manik hu.

Nandini got happy seeing Manik's changed Avatar.


Nandini - Manik... Tum kitna badal gaye ho. Maine to tumhe bilkul bhi nahi pehchana.

Manik smiled seeing Nandini's excitement.

Nandini - Maine tumhe results ke din phone Kia tha to thank you. But tum London chale gaye .

Manik - To Ab thanks kardo.

Nandini - Thank y...

Manik - Ruko ye kya kar rahi ho.

Nandini - Thanks bol rahi hu.

Manik - Mujhe aisa thanks nahi chahiye.

Nandini - To fir Kaise thanks karu.

Manik while coming close to her- you have to thank me in my style.

Nandini - Matlab.

Manik came dangerously close to Nandini and said- Matlab aise...

He was about to claim her lips when Mukti entered and immediately turned to the other side and said- Bhai Nandini tum log ye sab darwaza band karke karsakte the na.

Nandini blushed hearing this.

She was about to run away from there when Manik held her hand and pulled her towards him.

He hugged Nandini from back and said- Mukti Ab hum to yeh sab open me karsakte hai coz we are getting engaged and very soon will be married.

Mukti - Hawww... Bhai ... isse Pehle ki atmosphere aur hot hojaye mai jaati hu. Aur ap dono jaldi neeche aajana. Sab wait kar rahe hai.

Manik - Ruko Mukti hum bhi aate hai.

All three of them went down.

They exchanged rings with the blessings of elders.

And got married after a year.


Done...

This was a short and simple love story of MANAN.

Hope you guys like it.

Please give your comments.



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SUCH A SWEET OS...
MANIK IS A NERD LIKE SERIOUSLY...

GLASSES AND OIL IN HAIRS? 😆😆...MANIK KO AISE IMAGINE KARKE HASI NAHI RUK RAHI MERI...

MANIK TO EKDAM CHANGE HO KAR AYA HAI LONDON SE,,,,,,

LOVED IT


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Lovely cute os dear,
well done.
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Read both d stories in a go...
& must say both r just amazing...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon wid more such stories...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Both os r nice...love it...😳
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Nice os...
Something diff...
Waiting for next..
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wow...nice os.

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Jo Maangi Thi Dua-

A girl was sitting in front of dead body of her husband.

She didn't have any expression on her face.

She was simply staring at her husband's face.

The girl couldn't believe that she had actually lost her husband.

(Author's p.o.v- It had been just a month since they had married.

It was a love cum arranged marriage.

The guy saw the girl at a friends wedding and instantly fell in love with her.

The girl was shy type . Even she liked the guy, but was scared of her family who would kill her if they come to know of her attraction towards the guy)

Coming back to the story,

The relatives of the girl and her husband were shedding tears on the boy's death.

Some of the ladies broke the bangles of the girl and cleared her sindoor as it was a custom followed .

The girl was now a widow who according to the customs had no right to wear any colourful objects or dresses.

The girl just sat like a statue and allowed the ladies to do whatever they want.

One of the lady tried to remove the pendant which the girl was wearing.

It is then that the girl came back to her senses and held the pendant tightly.

Girl- No. Please use mat nikalo. Ye Manik ki last nishani hai mere paas.

Lady- But Nandini Beta tum ye nahi pehen sakti.

(Yes the girl was none other than Nandini Malhotra and her husband who died was Manik Malhotra)


Nandini - Mai nahi doongi ye locket. Manik ne kaha tha ki ise kabhi mat utarna. Wo naraaz ho jayenge agar mai ise nikalungi toh.

Lady- Magar Manik jaa chuka hai. Wo lautke nahi aane wala.

Nandini - Aap sab log jhoot bol rahe ho. Manik ne aaj subah hi phone pe mujhse promise kiya tha ki wo jaldi aayenge. Aur wo apna promise kabhi nahi todte. Mujhe pata hai wo zaroor aayenge.

Lady- Tum Pagal hogayi ho. Dekho idhar wo mar chuka hai. Nahi aane wala wo wapis .

Saying this the lady again tried to remove the locket.

But Nandini got up and ran away from there so that no one would be able to touch the locket.

Nandini went to her room and closed the door.

She sat down resting her head to the door.

She was happy a couple of hours back because Manik was returning to her After a week. He had gone to attend a meeting in a different city and was coming back when he met with an accident.

Nandini took the locket in her hands and said- Mai Janti hoon Manik aap zarur aaoge . Mai aapka wait karoongi. Please jaldi wapas aajao.

She closed her eyes and tears started flowing from her eyes.

All this was observed by two pairs of eyes.

Someone was watching her from a far distance from the heaven.

One person was Manik who was crying seeing Nandini's condition.


He couldn't tolerate even a single drop of tear in Nandini's eyes when he was alive. But now he was helpless. He couldn't do anything for her.

Every tear of Nandini felt like a thousand knives piercing his heart .

The other pair of eyes which observed the misery of the two soulmates were of none other than GOD.

Yes even God couldn't see the poor souls misery.


Unable to tolerate the tears of both Manik and Nandini, God summoned his P.A.
(Strange isn't it. Even God has a P.A.)

God's P.A. came and asked - Hey Prabhu aapne mujhe Yaad kiya...

God- Haan Cabira. Hume aapse Kuch zaruri vartalap(discussion) karna tha.

(Yes God's P.A. was none other than our very own Cabir. Funny na)

Cabira- Kahiya na Prabhu . Kis vishay(topic) pe aapko humse vartalap karni hai.

God showed Cabira two scenes of Manik and Nandini crying for each other.




Then God asked Cabira-

Hey Cabira... Kahi humse Kuch galti to nahi hogayi is ladke ke praan leke. Humse indono ka dukh Dekha nahi jaaraha.

Cabir also started crying seeing Manik and Nandini.

Cabir - Hey Prabhu mujhe to rona aagaya inke aanson dekh kar. But hum Ab kya karsakte hai. Jo kismat me likha tha wahi hoga na. In dono ka sath shayad yahi tak ka tha.

Their conversation was disturbed by chitragupt who came running to Lord Krishna and said - Hey Prabhu Humse ek bahut badi Bhool hogayi.

Lord Krishna - Kya baat hai chitragupt aap itne chintit kyu lag rahe ho. Kya bhool hogayi aapse.

Chitragupt - Hey Prabhu Hume kshama kardijiye. Humne galat insan ke pran har liye. Ab Yamraaj bahut sharminda hai. Wo apke samaksh nahi aasakte. Isliye unhone mujhe bheja hai aapko ye baat batane ke liye.

Both Lord Krishna and Cabir got shocked hearing this.

Lord Krishna got up immediately from his Singhasan and said-

Kya itni badi bhool kaise hogayi aaplogo se.

Aap log jante hai na ki hum aisi galti afford nahi karsakte.

Jaiye Jake Yamraaj ko hamare saamne leke aaiye.

Hume unse vartalap karni hai.

Chitragupt left from there and brought Yamraaj along with him.



At first Yamraaj was not ready to come due to fear of Lord Krishna but later gave in to Chitragupts insistence.

Yamraaj stood in front of Lord Krishna with his head lowered.

Lord Krishna -

Hey Yamraaj Hume aapse ye umeed nahi thi.

Aapse itni badi bhool kaise hogayi.

Aisa chalta raha to logo ka hum Par se vishwas udh jayega.

Waise aapne Kiske pran har liye galti se?

Yamraaj who was silent all this while said- Prabhu us vyakti(person) ka naam Manik Malhotra hai.

Hearing the name both Lord Krishna and Cabir looked at each other.

Done with an update.

I initially decided to make this as a one shot. But then thought to take opinion of you guys.

Sorry if I have hurt the sentiments of readers by portraying God's discussion.

If anyone has any problems please feel free to tell me.

If you guys don't like it I will stop it here itself.

There are a lot of funny incidents to happen in the coming chapters.

It will have more 2-3 chapters. Based on the response of the readers I may increase or decrease it.

So guys give your opinion regarding this.

Waiting for your comments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one...
And it's like the movie life Ho toh aise...
Waiting for part b..
Update soon...

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