Manan OS Diary - 3. Jo Maangi Thi Dua (part -3)(pg no.3)(16.7.2016) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh Poor Nandini .. Manik died 😭 Ohh sad... Nandini is condition is so worst na [=D^] Ohhh Manik ki soul was there 😲 God N cabira was crying. Shit Yanraj se galtii ho gyii.. Ab kyaa hoga . would love to read.. Continue 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intresting concept and new too,
love it,
continue soon.
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pehele to main bohat rone lagi thi par dheree dhree I was laughing...😆.
Too good dear.
And do pm me next part...😛
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superb os
first it was so emotional😭
but then😕
and then😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update...
Manik died...
Yamraaj committed mistake by tkng manik's soul...
Totally luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Jo Maangi Thi Dua

Part-2

Hearing the name of Manik, Lord Krishna and Cabir looked at each other.

Lord Krishna -

Ye to bahut bada anarth hogaya.

Cabir -

Haan Prabhu. Aap sach keh rahe ho.

Aap hi koi upay bataiye Ab hum kya kare?

Lord Krishna thought for sometime and said -

Sabse Pehle Hume us vyakti se... Kya naam tha uska... Manik... Haan.

Usse maafi mangni chahiye Yamraaj ki is bhool ke liye.

Use hamare aage prastut kiya jaye.

Cabir bowed before Lord Krishna and went to fetch Manik.

He came back after sometime with Manik.


Manik was amazed to see the Heaven.

He was led by Cabiraa through the stairs which ended at the entrance of the Heaven.

The huge gate of Heaven opened and Cabira took Manik inside the abode of Lord Krishna.

As soon as Manik entered inside, a flash of white light hit his eyes.


As a result, Manik covered his eyes with his hand.

Manik got scared that he was brought here for punishment for the sins he had committed knowingly or unknowingly while he was alive.

Manik heard a voice which said -

Ghabrao mat. Andar aajao. Tumhe yahan saza dene ke liye nahi bulaya hai.

Manik couldn't believe how the voice was able to hear his mind talk.

He looked here and there but couldn't find anyone.

Manik looked at Cabir who was smiling.

Manik - Ye hum kaha pe hai.

Cabir - Tum Bhagwaan Krishna ke Singhasan ke samaksh khade hue ho.

Manik - But mujhe to yaha sirf roshni hi nazar aarahi hai.

Cabir - Wo is liye Kyunki Prabhu apne darshan har kisiko nahi dete.

Manik - Par Mujhe yahan pe kyu laya gaya hai.

Cabir - Wo to tumhe Prabhu hi batayenge.

Manik - God ji... Aap mujhe please bataiye ki mujhe yahan kyu bulaya hai.

Lord Krishna - Tumse kshama mangne ke liye.

Manik - Kshama???? Wo Kisliye????

Lord Krishna - Hum logo se bahut badi Bhool hogayi . Kisi aur ki jagah Yamraaj ne tumhare pran har liye galti se.

Manik looked at Yamraaj who appeared all of a sudden out of nowhere.

Manik -

Kya???? Iska Matlab mai Mara nahi.

Matlab mai zinda hoon... Matlab mai Nandini se alag nahi hua .

Mai Nandini se dobara mil paunga.

Lord Krishna -

Shaant hojao balak...

Aur tum jaisa soch rahe ho waisa Kuch nahi hone wala.

Haan maante hai ki humse galti Hui hai.

Iska Matlab ye nahi ki Hum tumhe wapas dharti pe bhej denge.

Haan Magar ek wada karte hai.

Tumhari koi bhi ek wish Puri karenge hum.

Manik -

But aise kaise hosakta hai. Yamraaj Ji ki galti ki saza mujhe aur Nandini ko kyu mil rahi hai.

Isme hamari kya galti hai.

Please God ji aap mujhe Nandini ke paas wapas bhej do.

Mujhe aur Kuch nahi chahiye.

Lord Krishna -

Aisa nahi hosakta Balak.

Tumhe dharti pe dobara nahi bheja jasakta.

Manik thought for sometime and then said -

Theek hai Agar aisa nahi hosakta to meri ek wish hai Jo apko Puri karni hogi.

Lord Krishna -

Haan bolo. Tumhari wish zarur Puri karenge hum.

Manik -

Mai Nandini ko aise nahi dekh sakta rote hue.

Wo widow ke roop me bilkul bhi achi nahi lagti.

To mai chahta hoon ki aap usey dobara suhagan bana do.

Everyone present there were shocked to hear this.

They couldn't believe that Manik who was shedding tears for Nandini sometime back was now ready to see Nandini married to someone else.

Lord Krishna -

Bas itni si baat.

To tumhari ye wish zarur Puri karenge hum log.

Ek mahine ke andar andar ye ladki suhagan banjayegi dobara.

Manik - Aur ladka meri pasand ka hoga Kyunki mai janta hoon Nandini ki pasand napasand ko.

Lord Krishna - Theek hai. Hum tumhari aatma ko dharti pe bhejenge Cabira ke sath taki tum ladka pasand kar sako Nandini ke liye.

Manik - Aur Agar aisa nahi hua to...

Lord Krishna - To hum tumhe dharti pe bhej denge.

Manik smiled inwardly on hearing this.

He had full confidence that Nandini would prefer to die rather than getting married to anyone else.

So he had a chance to return to Nandini.

Lord Krishna asked Cabira to take Manik back and ordered him to take special care of Manik.

Manik along with Cabir left from the Lord Krishna's abode.

Cabir returned to Lord Krishna.

Lord Krishna -

Hey Cabira...Hum ye zimmedari aap Par chodte hai. Aur Us Balak se sambhal kar rehna. Bahut hi chatur aur chalak hai wo.

Us ladki Nandini ke liye ek Acha sa ladka dhoondiye aur uski shaadi karwaiye ek mahine ke andar.

Cabir - Ji Prabhu. Hum abhi se is kaam me lag jate hai.

In the meantime at Manik's house-

Nandini was still sitting in a corner of her and Manik's room.

Nandini was sobbing when someone came to her room and said to Nandini that Manik's body has been cremated and went away.

Nandini heard this and started to cry.

She looked at the Lord Krishna's Murthy and said- Apne aisa kyu Kia mere saath. Mere life me Khushi nahi dekh sakte na aap. Isiliye apne meri sabse badi Khushi ko mujhse cheen liya.

Nandini collapsed on the floor due to continuous crying.

A lady in her late 40s came to Nandini's room and saw her unconscious on the floor.

She picked up and put her on the bed.

The lady Was none other than Nyonika Malhotra(Manik's mother).

Nyonika sat beside Nandini and kept caressing her hair.

Both the women were suffering due to the loss of the most important person of their lives.

But Nyonika decided to act strong infront of Nandini who was really delicate and needed support of Nyonika.

Nyonika loved Manik and Nandini equally. Since the time Nandini had married Manik, Nyonika has always supported Nandini in each and every aspect.

Coming back to Lord Krishna's abode -

It was now time for Manik and Cabir to come down to Dharti...

The prepations were made.

Manik was happy that finally he would see Nandini.

Lord Krishna cleared out to Manik that Manik can only see Nandini. He cannot talk to her or touch her.
If he tries to break any rule given by Lord Krishna, he would be immediately called back.

Manik agreed to all the conditions and finally Manik and Cabir set out to their journey from Heaven to Earth.

Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Should I continue the story or end it in the next chapter.

Give your comments.

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Awesome stories.., read and loved them
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Jo Maangi Thi Dua (Part-3)

Manik agreed to all the conditions and finally Manik and Cabir set out to their journey from Heaven to Earth.

Manik was amazed with the scenes he was seeing in the journey.

They passed through the clouds and aeroplanes were flying by.

Manik - Cabirji ye to bahut hi beautiful nazara hai. Yaha se to duniya bahut hi sundar lag rahi hai.

Cabir smiled hearing this.

Cabir - Haan wo to hai. Magar Jo cheez dur se sundar lagti ho zaruri nahi ki paas se bhi utni hi sundar ho.

Manik - Ye baat bilkul sahi kahi aapne. Dunia bahut hi buri hai. Yahan koi Kisi ki care nahi karta. Sab apni hi dhun me hote hai. Ache logo ki bahut zyada kami hai Yaha pe.

Cabir- Log ache ya bure nahi hote. Unhe halat Acha ya bura karne pe majboor karte hai.

Manik - Shayad aap sahi keh rahe ho.

Amidst all their talks they reached the Earth.

Now Manik and Cabir were standing outside Manik's house.

Manik was about to enter inside when Cabir stopped him and said - Ruko. Prabhu ne Jo bhi baatein batayi thi sab yaad hai na tumhe. Koi bhi galti ki koi gunjayash nahi hai. Agar bhol kar bhi tumne galti ki to Prabhu naraz hojayenge aur turant Hume upar bula lenge.

Manik - Haan Cabir Ji . Mujhe sab yaad hai. Ab chalein.

Cabir - Ruko.

Manik - Ab kya hua?

Cabir - Pehle Hume hamare vastr to badalne do.

Saying this Cabir snapped his fingers and his clothes changed suddenly.

Cabir was now dressed in normal clothes rather than the fully jewelled dress of Heaven.

Cabir - Ab theek hai. Chalo.

Manik's mouth opened wide seeing this.

He had never seen such magic before.

Cabir - Muh band karo apna aur Chalo hamare sath.

Both of them went inside the house.

Manik saw that his house was filled with silence unlike other days when there used to be a lot of hustle bustle.

He went straight to his room and found Nyonika consoling Nandini while Nandini was crying her heart out lying on the bed.

Manik's heart ached to see this.

He was about to go to Nyonika and Nandini when Cabir stopped him.

Cabir - Tumhe apna wada yaad hai na. Koi galti nahi. Humari pehli shart yahi hai ki tum kisise baat karne ki koshish nahi karoge.

Manik felt so helpless and he punched his fist on a nearby wall.

Both Cabir and Manik came out of the room and waited outside.

After sometime,Nyonika came out and saw Cabir looking around.

Nyonika - Excuse me. Aap kaun ho? Aur aap andar kaise aaye?

Cabir - Namaste . Mera naam Cabir hai. Mai apke Bete Manik ka dost hoon.

Nyonika - Oh. Baitho na Bete.

Cabir sat down on the Sofa.

Nyonika - Shayad tumhe pata nahi hai ki Manik...

Cabir - Mai janta hoon Aunty ki Manik ka accident hogaya. But wo kahi nahi gaya. Wo yahi Par hai.

Nyonika - Huh... Matlab????

Cabir corrected his mistake and said- Mera Matlab ki wo hamare dilo me zinda hai.

Nyonika - Oh... Wo to hai. Waise Beta tum yahan????

Cabir - Aunty wo actually mai Foreign me rehta hoon. Jab Manik waha pe aaya tha to we became good friends. Aur usne kaha tha ki jab bhi mai India aau to Uske ghar zarur aau ek baar. So isliye mai Kuch din ke liye aaya tha yahan Rehne Agar aap theek samjho to...

Nyonika - Acha... Agar Manik ne kaha tha to zarur ruko na . Mai tumhare rehne ka intezaam karti hoon.

Manik who was all this while just seeing Nyonika, turned to Cabir and said- Cabirji kya mai Maa ke pair choo sakta hoon .Bas ek baar.

Cabir couldn't refuse Manik's request.

Cabir - Aunty kya mai apke pair choo sakta hoon. Out of respect.

Saying this he came and bent in front of Nyonika.

And instead of himself touching her feet allowed Manik.

Nyonika - Jeete raho Beta.

Unknowingly she kept her hand over Manik's head.

Then she went to arrange for Cabir's accommodation in the guestroom.

Cabir looked at Manik who had tears in his eyes.

Cabir - Dost tum ro mat. Prabhu sab theek kardenge.

Manik let out a chuckle and said- Agar aapke Prabhu sab Kuch theek karte to ye situation hi nahi aati meri life me.

Cabir understood that Manik was taunting but he kept quiet as he knew that Manik is right and injustice had been done to Manik and his family due to Yamraaj's mistake.

Nyonika came back and said - Beta tumhara room ready hochuka hai. Tum jaake aaram karo. Mai tab tak tumhare liye khane ka intezaam karti hoon. Waise tum kya khaogi?

Cabir - Jo bhi aap pyar se bana kar khilao...

Nyonika smiled weakly and went away.

Cabir went to the room as instructed by Nyonika.

And Manik went to his room.

He saw that Nandini was sitting on the bed with his photo in her hand and she was complaining about Manik to his own photo.

Nandini self talk while crying-

Manik aap bahut bure ho. Aapne promise kiya tha ki aap Jaldi aaoge.
Itne din hogaye abhi tak kyu nahi aaye aap. Aap to apna promise kabhi nahi todte. Then where are you Manik. Please come back soon.

Manik heard all this and went near Nandini.

Manik - Nandini mai yahi hoon tumhare paas. Mai kahi nahi gaya. And Nandini please don't cry. Bahut jald sab theek hojayega. Hum fir se saath rahenge Pehle ki Tarah. Bas Kuch dino ki baat hai.

Nandini looked in the direction where Manik was sitting and felt his presence.

Nandini - MANIK...

She took his name.

Then said - Apko mere aanson pasand nahi hai na. To mai aaj ke baad kabhi nahi roungi.

Saying this she wiped her tears.

Then she got up and washed her face and went down.

Manik followed her.

Nandini went to the kitchen and helped Nyonika in preparing the lunch for Cabir.

Then Nyonika asked Nandini to go and invite Cabir for lunch.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like It.

Guys tell me seriously, are you all liking the story. Should I continue?

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