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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Super interesting teaser...
Manan confessed...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4!

Manik : Fine.. I will tell you everything. It all started 2 years ago.

[A/N : Guys from here flashback starts. I will Mention every time when it will be flashback and when it will be present. Enjoy reading.]

FLASHBACK!

It all started 2 years ago. I got posted in Manali for my next case with my best Officers Mukti Vardhan & Abhimanyu Thakkar. They were love birds. My best officers, my family, my everything. They are the one who were there with me in every mission. Mukti always used to fight with me and Abhimanyu. She was like a sister to me. She had nobody in her life except Abhi, me & my family. Abhi was my buddy, my Partner in crime.

We three of us left for Manali to trap famous classical singer Pt. Trilok Vhaurasiya, who in real was a gangster, involved in human trafficking, drugs and other illegal crimes. We three went there as police officers. Me as ACP and Mukti & Abhimanyu as my officers. Our goal was to trap him and to get him arrest in any case as because of him many families were losing their daughters and children, who lose their life and destroying their life in drugs. Many of them were involved in terrorist activities too.

I still remembered that day when we reached Manali in December. Whole atmosphere was a pure bliss. We reached early morning and went straight to our cottages to rest but how can I forget that my officers who were my friends as well were madly in love with each other, so I decided to leave them alone and to explore the place and try to get some information about that Pandit from locals, as we got the information from my source that Pandit was in Manali for his next big human trafficking case, and I wanted to catch him as soon as possible.

I was wandering the place at that time I heard the sound of kids playing. It was a school. I went there and what I saw there left me spell bounded. I saw a girl in white anarkali in her 20's I guess, playing with kids and singing a song with kids.

[A/N : Guys I just love this song. This song is my favorite from my childhood days so I thought to add it here. I know its little stupid but I liked it so..]

Lakdi ki kaathi kati pe ghoda
Ghode ki dum pe jo maara hathauda
Dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

[A frame of wood, a horse on the frame,
When the hammer striked on the horse's tail,
Ran, ran, the horse ran with its tail high]

Ghoda pahuncha chauk mein chauk mein tha naai
Ghodeji ki naai ne hazaamat jo banaai
Chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
Ghoda pahuncha chauk ...
Dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

[The horse reached the square, on the square there was a barber,
and when the barber started shaving the dear horse,
takbak takbak, takbak takbak (the sound of horse's hooves)
the horse reached the square, on the square there was a barber,
and when the barber started shaving the dear horse,
ran, ran, the horse ran with its tail high]

Ghoda tha ghamandi pahuncha sabji mandi
Sabji mandi baraf padi thi baraf mein lag gai thandi
Dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

[The horse was proud, reached the vegetable market,
in the market there was snow, in the snow it caught cold,
ran, ran, the horse ran with its tail high]

Ghoda apana tagada hai dekho kitani charabi hai
Chalata hai maharauli mein par ghoda apana arabi hai
Chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
Ghoda apana tagada hai ...
Baanh chhooda ke dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda...

[Our horse is strong, see how much fat it has,
It walks in Mehrauli (in Delhi), but our horse is an Arabic one,
It ran releasing its arm, with the tail high]

They finished their song and started to move back to their classes and I don't why but I felt that this girl can help us for our mission. I decided to go in school to meet her but at the same time I got call from my seniors to report to them so I left the place in hurry, but before leaving I took her picha in my mobile. There I informed Mukti & Abhimanyu about that girl.

Manik : Officer Mukti! Officer Abhimanyu! I have got a girl to trap that Pt. Trilok Chaurasiya. Mission TK begins now!

Mukti : But Manik what is the name of that girl who agreed to risk her life for this mission?

Abhi : what about her family? Have they agreed too?

Manik : Guys.. Guys.. I am just informing you that I found a girl but I don't know whether she will agree or not.

They both got confused by my statement, so I told them how I saw her and showed them her picha and after seeing her pic, Abhi got little tensed but I didn't saw that at that time and asked Mukti to go their and try to know about her, but Mukti was Mukti, so she opposed.

Mukti : Have you gone nuts manik? You will risk life of that girl for this mission. Manik you know na TK is so dangerous. He can do anything, he is not human, he is a monster and you want to spoil a girl life to whom you don't know. You just saw her once and decided that she will help us. Manik grow up. What are you thinking?

Abhi too supported her realising what she is saying is right.

Abhi : Manik I think she is right. What were you thinking and why are you thinking this? After seeing her that she will help us. I really don't know but I guess whatever you are doing, saying & thinking is wrong. Manik I agree we need some local for this mission but Manik think yaar, she is a girl and if you are forgetting then let me inform you TK is involved in human trafficking and what if he include this girl too in that. We can't take this risk Manik. I think you should change the plan.

I too got surprised after I realised what they were saying was true and what the heck I was thinking was totally base less. I mean I saw her once and felt that she will help us. How silly dough!!

Manik : I think guys I need rest. I am talking silly and thinking silly. Bye guys!

I left the place at very moment and left for my room. Here Mukti saw her pic once again and said, "Abhimanyu.. this girl is cute, simple. But I am not getting one thing why Manik said like this that she can help us!"

Abhi who was silent and was watching snow fall from glass window told her the most shocking truth of that girl, "Mukti.. I think I should tell you the truth."

Seeing Abhi tensed Mukti walked up to him and asked him, "What happened Abhi? What truth?"

Abhi while turning towards her and holding her through shoulder told him, "Mukti.. before I tell you everything promise me you will be calm and will listen to me calmly and will try to understand everything. You will not tell Manik anything. Promise?"

Mukti got confused by Abhi's statement and thought that why he is saying all this so suddenly. Seing Mukti not promising and thinking with frowns on her head, he pressed her shoulder a little and made her look at him and said, "Trust me Mukti. Please. Promise?"

Mukti tried to say something, "But Abhi.."

Abhi didn't let her complete and silences her keeping finger on her lips and asks her, "Please Jaan!"

Mukti after listening Jaan from his mouth decided to agree and says, "OK BABA.. I promise I will not tell anything to Manik and I will be calm."

After seeing Mukti agreed, Abhi smiles and again back face her and starts speaking.

Abhi : Mukti.. That girl..

xxx

To be continued..!! ;) :D

Hey there!

Guys here is the update. This part not finished yet. I am in hurry. Bye.

Enjoy the update!

Don't be a silent reader.

See ya!!

Edited by CinderellaGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: shaan...

Super interesting teaser...

Manan confessed...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...


Thank you @shann..!!
Already updated check!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Excellent update...
Manik is sharing his past wid Harshad...
Flashback sounds interesting...
Manik saw a girl...d girl is nandini ri8...
Wat truth abhimanyu wanna tell 2 Mukti???
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
interesting flashback...
nice story...
that girl may b Nandini...I think...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
interesting
please continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Nice update nd thanks for the pm
U left it on a cliff yar
Waiting eagerly
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Don't let me manik knows nandini before n he doesn't remember nandini because of some injury
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Nice update...
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Amazinh update... so manik indeed is shating his past with hardhad... can it get better...
N the past is so damn intresting..
N what i abhi going to say cant wait more to know that

Thank u for the amazing update
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)

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