manan ss- chote ungli pe nachaegi tujhe-A SUPERNATURAL STORY(cha2-pg7) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadhusmitaMm

its not rich or poor... ek side mein simple humans hain aur dusre side mein the people with super natural powers...


yaaa...exactly as madhu said...so dheere dheere as the story progresses u eill get to know the reason behind it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...itss quite interesting story. actually I really like the way u introduced it. its sounds interesting .. wow.. Amazing. Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wow update...
Manbir were nice...
Nandu is a full on chatter box...
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Tnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
awesome start
nandu is crazy but cute
loved the bond of manbir
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome update...
Loved it
Too nice to just be the first chp
Nandu is fascinated by vampires.. He he.. So am I

The story looks so interesting..
Thank u for the pm
Looking frwd for the next update

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
HaaaHhhaaa
Amazing
Best story combo ever
Fun with supernatural stuff combo
Omggg

Do pm me next part pretty plzzz

All the best for ur story

Vidhi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wgrn will you post this story
Do pm me yaad se
Will be waiting
Really loved this nandu yeah
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey lovies whats up...?! kaise ho aap sab ...i know i know...you all must be ready angry at me as i promised an update yesterday but didnt give ...sorry yaar but this internet connection i tell you...ok so here is the second chapter of CUPNT ...YES AFTER A VERY LONG TIME...do enjoy and comment to let me know your vies...from tommorow my exams are starting so wish me luck...any ways wont waste your time anymore here we go...

happy reading...!!

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#1574words approx.


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A bright flair approaching us with velocity of light...suddenly a sudden jerk is felt I fell a lady screaming my name ...I can't see her face but that voice...that voice is just so familiar...it feels that I have known her all my life...but suddenly all I fell is water water...water everywhere...I gosh I ...I can't...cant breath...I feel the hold of the lady suddenly releasing me from her grip...and then...a bright light enough to blind me ...then the next thing I know is...



Mukti-nandu...! Nandu what happened..?nandini wake up...?

Navya- nandu...tu theek hai..?nandini...

I hear some faint voices...I guess I know...them...but then...

Nandini- kya hua...aaa...tsunami aagayi...!!!Edward Cullen mujhe bachalo...!!!!

I woke a jerk screaming...as a whole jug of cold water was on my face...!!and as I open my eyes I see both the idiots sitting in front of me with worried faces and navya maharani holding a jug and I immediately got to know the whole situation here...

Mukti- sara clg uth gaya hai lekin nandini maharani abhi tak soh rahe hai...aur sote sote bhi uss Edward ka naam...kabhi toh usse chod de...

Nandini- han toh tera kya jata hai...woh tera pati thodi na hai...

Mukti- sun(sitting beside nandini on her bed) tune phir se wahi sapna dekha na ...

Immediately my smile vanished.

Nandini-haa...haan...(looking down)

Navya- pata nahi tujhe aise sapne kuin ate hai jiske bare mein tu kuch janti hi nahi...

Nandini-pata nahi aisa kuin lagata hai ki mujhme kuch toh aisa hai Jo mein nahi janti...and yeh sab chezein mere past se connected hai...

Mukti- chal thik hai...abhi chaal nahana nahi hai kya...gandi ladki...waise bhi aaj half day hoga kuinki aaj Mr. Smith abscent hai so...

Nandini- acha hai wo pakau teacher aaj nahi aya...haash...

When an excellent idea (according to me ;)) struck my mind...

Nandini- guys...!! I exclaimed...

Both in unison -what...??!(shocked due to my sudden scream)

Nandini- lets watch vampire diaries ...!!

Mukti and navya - shutup...

Making me put my hands on my ears to protect my sensitive ear drums...

Mukti- nandini ji...aapne kitni baar vampire diaries dekhi hai zara ginke batayengi... (sarcastically)

Nandini- jyada nahi kuch 30-35 times...

I said after deeply counting on my fingers for a few minutes.

Navya- yeh tujhe jyada kuch lagta hai (looking at me as if I am some alien from another planet)...u know I can't read even the most interesting book up to this many times...

Nandini- han toh! after all this is the prominence of nandini murthy ... (rising my imaginary collar)

Navya- ooh god lets lust leave it hum toh baba is ladki se jeet nahi sakte ...she is impossible... cholo guy's warna clg ke liye late hogayenge...

Meanwhile on the other side of the college...

Manik is walking ahead with his gym bag in his hand hanging it from his shoulder while wiping off the sweat formed due to his workout session just now with the end of a blue towel with mm initials on it craved in it in a royal font, which is around his neck...when cabir comes running after him...

Cabir-bhai wait for me ...(panting heavily)

Manik-Cabir stop acting like a kid and walk fast...

Cabir- aare bhai kya walk fast...aab aap thehere chalte phirte Eiffel tower with yeee lambe lambe legs ...(Manik glares at him)kya sach hi toh bol raha hun ...aap toh easily distance cover karloge...what about me...ab kya chote se bache ki jaan loge...(doing his all time famous nautanki)

Manik- oooh wow...so amazing...it's the first time ki meine ek 21 years ka chalta phirta bacha dekha... (sarcastically)

Cabir-he he he...oo bhai ab mein itna bhi khaas nahi... (rubbing the back of his hair with his hand giving a shy smile)

Manik stops and gives a light smack on his head...

Manik- Abe idiot yaha teri tareef nahi horahi samjha...

Cabir- waise bhai...

Manik - hmm... (sipping his drink from his sipper)

(ps: me-you know what it is samajhdar ko ishara hi kafi hota hai...and I know our readers are very smart...what do u say madhu..?

Madhu- of course they are (winks))

Cabir- mujhe bhi batao na vampire's ke history ke bare mein ...woh kya hai na I am such a cute sa new vampire here...I am a fresher so I don't know anything about the history... vampire huin isiliye ...aur waise bhi aap toh star vampire ho...you are the apple of every one's eyes...most importantly you are my senior so aap se better kaun hoga who can explain me...besides you are a royalty...noble blood and all...

Manik- hogaya maska lagake... (sarcastically) and by the way tu toh aise bol raaha hai jaise tujhe toh mom ne garbage se uthaya tha nai...did you forget even you are a royalty...stupid... (again giving his a smack on his head)

Cabir-oooww...bhai lagta hai... (whining like a baby)

Manik- Cabir stop cribbing like a little girl...vampires don't crib like a baby...

At that moment they were walking past the great wall which divides the college into two...which can also be said as border... (: P) and according to nandini it was the great wall off st.vladimires academy...when...

Meanwhile on the human side of the college...

Three of them were walking together to attend the classes for the day ...talking and laughing and cracking jokes all through the way...

Nandini- arre guys seriously you should have seen that scene when Stefan rushes towards that intruder in full speed to save Elena from that intruder vampire...gosh...

Mukti- god doll...now who the hell is this Stefan...

Instantly nandini stood up on the nearby bench and exclaimed loudly ...

Nandini- what...! u don't know who is Stefan...Stefan Salvatore..!!

Mukti gave an I don't know look...

Navya- god muku...u forgot ...he is the vamp guy from the vampire diaries...

Mukti makes an ooo face...

Nandini-see...!!everyone knows him...

Navya- no nandu...not everyone...its only because you said about him almost 40 times today in a single hour...

Both navya and mukti burst out laughing giving a hi fi to each other...

Nandini- really..?I did..?(confused being an innocent soul)

Both in unison- yes...! now can we go the class...?

And they all started walking towards the class when in the way the wall came which divides the college into two...in order to get to class they had to pass by the wall ...and they were walking when suddenly...

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tuning...

pre a cori mahara...

aaure sani sanara...

The screen divides into two...

bg music-

reana twena aahara...

aaure eera aanehta...

Nandini just stops in front off the wall on the other side Manik too froze on his place it's like their legs won't work...they were stuck by gum or something...

bg music-

Ancient timers reachin on

ever turning like the sun

secrets hidden shine to me..

voiced remind i may see...

nandini looked at the wall and on the other hand Manik too looked at the wall...Both were continuously gazing at the wall like there is something ...something which was holding them back...they felt attracted ...just like a magnet is attracted towards his opposite pole in the same way they felt attracted towards the wall...no one knew what was or who was on the other side of the wall but something was definitely there which was pulling them ...

bg music-

Time has come to start again..

wash cleaned by the falling rain...

gold and silver star i see..

wash your magic over me..

prea qurie..prea qurie

prea qurie yaa...(2x)

tuning...

That pull was growing stronger second after second...it was as if their mind had stopped functioning...for that moment the world had stopped, the wind had stopped flowing, the water was still, everything around them was bizarre ...what they could only think or feel was the growing urge to break the wall and touch the thing behind the wall...

bg music-

Shadow figures in the light...

say that to know is too far..

raise the bell and close your sea..

show your mystery to me...

prea qurie..prea qurie

prea qurie yaa...(2x)

Without knowing what they were doing both of them started taking steps towards the wall...unknown off their surroundings...and they both together slowly rose their hands to touch the wall...

bg music-

And behind the darken dot

lies are treasure shining gold...

slowly the distances between their hand and the wall started decreasing ...

bg music-

well i'll ,i'll by here in the deep..

way to wait my phromency

prea qurie..prea qurie

prea qurie yaa...(2x)

pre a cori mahara...

aaure sani sanara...

reana twena aahara...

aaure eera aanehta...

and with each passing second the magnetic feeling between their hands started increasing which was now separated by the wall...just when both their hands were about to touch the wall...

Cabir- bhai...kya hua abhi toh aap mujhe bol rahe the bi walk fast and now you are standing over hear facing a wall god knows doing what...

On the other side...

Navya- nandu yaar chal tu yahan kya kar rahi hai...class ka time ho raha hai...

Nandini comes out off her la la land...

Nandini- hmm..?

Navya- ab hmm kya hmm...! chalo... (and pulls nandini with her)

On the other side-

Cabir- kya hua kuch bologe ya aise hi buth bane khade rahoge...chalo na bhai...

Manik-hand hand chal... (distracted)

And both nandini and Manik leave in the opposite directions...



Edited by abhilashaS - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Awesome..
Looks interesting
Happy new year
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
wow...just the update...kab se type kar diya tha...lekin yeh ladki update nahi de rahi thi...and our chat...awesome...

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