MANAN- THE INNOCENT CRUSH(CHAPTER 1- Pg no.3)(2.10.2016) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
very nice story. interesting concept. continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
I just found your story and its so good keep it up. Want to read more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys...

I am back with the first chapter of my story, The Innocent Crush.

CHAPTER -1

Scene 1-

EXCEL COLLEGE OF MUSIC

Library -

There was a hustle bustle in the library as new stock of books had arrived .

The library was closed for the day to the college students.

Only the library staff was present.

The library head instructed the staff to have lunch and then come back in an hour and he himself went away to have his lunch.

All the staff one by one went away except a girl.

The girl was so engrossed in the arrangements that she didn't notice that everyone else had left.

While she was walking through the racks keeping the books in proper order, she heard a loud bang on the librarian's desk.

The girl peeked through the racks and found that someone was standing with his back facing her.

The girl then looked around and realised that none of the staff was present in the library.

Girl- Ye sab log kaha chale gaye.

Then she looked at her watch and said-

Lunch time hogaya?

Mujhe to pata hi nahi chala.

Ab sir nahi hai to mujhe hi attend karna padega is student ko.

Par library to students ke liye bandh hai aaj.

Fir ye yahan kyu aaya hai?

Hasn't he read the notice board outside?

Saying this she was about to go to the person to tell him about it but the stopped midway seeing the person's face.

The girl then hid herself behind the books rack and said to herself -

Oh My God Nandini... Ye to Manik hai.

A smile appeared on her face while taking Manik's name.

(The girl was none other than Nandini and the guy was Manik)

Manik - Hellooo... Anybody there...

Manik said to himself in full anger- Where the hell is everyone???

His voice resonated in the library as there was pin drop silence in the library.

Manik was upset over something.

It was clearly visible on his face that something was bothering him.

Nandini was observing each and every expression of Manik.

Nandini selfthought -

Manik itne gusse me kyu hai?

I hope sab theek ho?

Pehle to kabhi itna gusse me nahi Dekha Maine Manik ko.

(Nandini had a huge crush on Manik since Day 1)

Nandini was so lost in her thoughts that she accidentally dropped few books we which made a sound visible that reached Manik's ears.

Manik turned towards the source of sound and said- Who's there? Kaun hai Wahan pe?

Saying this he started walking towards Nandini's direction.

Nandini - Ayyappa... Manik to yahi aarahe hai. What if he sees me here. No. I can't come infront of him.

Nandini went and hid behind a cupboard.

Manik was about to reach that cupboard when someone kept his hand on Manik's shoulder and stopped him.


Done with another update.

I know it was too short.

But I hadn't updated This story for quite a long time so thought to write it.

Hope you guys like it.

Awaiting your response.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Daamnnn where you even? btw awesome chapter loved it. Awww nandu is so cute.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nandu have crush on manik.
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