MaNan TS: Main Jeena Teeray Naal! LastChap/Pg28/11th-June

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#161

omg suchi what a chapter

loved it

awesome i have no words tp say anything

i just engrossed in the story

loved so much

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Hey MAWARA HI...

OMG !!!!! EK AUR SHORT STORY... GIRL ITNA AATA KAHA SE HAI DIMAAG MAIN...?????

AND TELL ME HOW TO WE KNOW THAT U HAVE STARTED A NEW ONE ...

SEE ONLY WHEN I GOT UR PM CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS ONE ...

THEN HOW WILL I COMMENT GIVE MY VIEWS TO IT...

READERS PLZ TELL ME HOW TO STALK THE WRITERS...I'M VERY BAD IN DOING SO...

OKK MAWARA...

SUPERB STORY...

AMAZING... MANIK HAS SO MUCH PAITENTS DEALING WITH HIS NEWLY WEDDED WIFE...

AARE MANIK USSE BINA MILE BINA BAAT KIYE SHADI KE LEYE KESSE MAAN GAYA ?????

JUST SEEING A PIC OF THE GIRL ONE CANNOT DECIDE HIS FUTURE...

NANDINI ITNI SEHMI SEHMI LAG RAHI THI APNI SHADI KE SAMAY...

GOSH !!!!! ITS SO DIFFICULT TO LEAVE UR BAACHPAN KA GHAR N MOVE WITH A STRANGER IN HIS HOUSE...

PROMISE HE MADE TO HER WAS SWEET...

ATLEAST SHE AGREED N WENT WITH HIM ...

FIRST NIGHT WENT COOL...

HE REALLY HAS TO TAKE IT VERY SLOW TO GAIN HER TRUST N MAKE HER COMFORTABLE...

MANIK WAS DOING THE BEST HE CAN...

WOW 3 WEEKS HOGAYE MANAN KI SHADI KO...AUR NANDU DHEERE DHEERE MANIK KE PASS AARHAE THI...SHE WANTED TO BELIEVE HE IS A GOOD PERSON N WILL NOT HURT HER..

POOR SOUL SHE MIGHT HAVE SEEN THE WORST NIGHTMARES BETWEEN HER PARENTS...

AND SO SHE IS LIKE THAT...

OHH !!!! HOO !!!! NANDINI GOT SCARED BREAKING THE CUP AACAH HUA MANIK AAGAYA AUR USNE NANDU KO CALM KIYA...

HOPE HE GETS HIS ANSWERS FROM RISHAB...

Next update will be next week only ?????

IM WAITING FOR DHEERE DHEERE...

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manancavyAA

@manancavyAA

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

every time u write a TS i just cant wait to read the next part...reallyy girl u r just awesome. plzz continue soon cant wait to read the next part

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MussuKhan

@MussuKhan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

awww what a lovely chapter...
ohh I forgot to ask how was ur exams?
now coming to chapter I love d way she holded his hand...so blissful n dis polite n sweet like choco piee manik is treat to watch. ...he is really very sweet n gentleman. ...dat forehead kiss was awesome. ...love it to d core
looking forward to see what's coming next:D
...

when I need escape from studies I start reading ur stories. ...they r my peace of mind :)
love u always :3
keep writing n make others happy :))

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Aashi

@Love_ashi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

amazing...

worried about nandu...

update soon...

lots of love,

Akanksha

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RitikaKirti

@RitikaKirti

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Awesome yaar too good. I loved the chapter.

Continue soon waiting eagerly. 😊

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

awesome update
manan had an arrange marriage...
loved this manik...usually girls will make compromises...but here manik compromised with his feelings...he didn;t wanted nandini to feel uncomfortable
he did soo much for her
surely nandini had some bad past that's why she is unable to trust men
but manik is winning her with TLC😊
loved the way manik ate kheer made by her😛
he is perfect and an ideal husband any girl would wish for
i'm fida on his tlc,..😛

can't wait for next update

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naziasiddiqui

@naziasiddiqui

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Awsmmm

superbbb

amazinggg

mindblowinggg

excellent

fabbb

nice update

loved it very much

Cont soon

Waiting

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shweta...

@shweta...

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Oh this was awesome
I m loving this story
Post the next part soon
And when are u going to update dheere dheere waiting for that too

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591994

@591994

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Superb update dear...loved it so so much...woww...so caring manik n nandu...she is so innocent n fragile...b their bonding...u r showing it too well...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

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