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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: niti06

Thanks for the pm crazu dear 😛
Chapy was as usual fab but buy but toda ahem ahem agaya manik control ni kar paya he did it with her dont know ab kya hoga meri princess nandhu chali gayi kaha chalo gayi pls come back dear 😭 dekho tumhare monster manik kitna sad he or ro raha he tumhare liye come na hold him console him he needs u dear come baby apne monster manik ke pas vapas ajao na 😭

Crazu princess nandhu ko lekar ajao na pls

I know everything good will end one day but I will miss my nandhu n monster manik
Come back n update soon dear luv u bohat Sara.

Koi nahi doll princess nandini will be in next chapter...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Waise toh I skipped THAT part but after reading the ending ...meko rona araha h baht baht jayada :(((((

Thanks...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

great update
manik couldn't control himself
but nandu is gone
and manik is cursing himself
waiting for next
cont soon

Thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta6767

Shocking update.
Manik sach me monster ban gya wo nandu ke sath aisa kaise ker skta hai 😡
Poor Nandini..

Thanks...😃 and manik emotion main bhatak gaya...😡..that's why...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Awesome update well done

Oh god maniks stupidity made nandini to leave him
Hope manik get nandini back n thanks for pm will miss this story do update the next part soon

Thanks...😃 and nandu will be back soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Ollee manik to control hi nhi kr paya .. awellee ... Ye kyaa ho gya. vaisee I luv that ahmmm ahmm 😳 But nandu to gussa ho gyi. nah baba.. kooi merii cute nandu ko vapis lao na 😭 Plsss I want manan back .. nandu vapiss aayegii.. ollee khatam hone vali h 😲 m gonna miss it so much. monster manik. princess nandu.. Luv u yr. Waiting for next update eagerly. Thanks for pm. Stay blessed. keep smiling.

Thanks dear...😃 even I will miss our PRINCESS NANDINI...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasniya09

Wow...
Unexpected dhamaka..
Just loved it...
Awww my nandu is gussa with my manik...
Ab kya hoga???

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Hot Hott update

Loved it

Thanks..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 15

It had been three days since she left. I was living like dead body..a zombie roaming in my empty mansion. I didn't had stepped out of mansion nor did tried to contact anyone. I was just pacing from my room to her room expecting to find her but no..stop day dreaming Manik Malhotra !


I was staring out of window blankly when I felt her tiny arms wrapped around me. Huh..another hallucination..yeah..I've been hallucinating her daily. I stood there still when she placed her head on my back

Nandu: Eww..Monster Manik..kitni gandi smell aa rahi hai tumse..you didn't had bath 🤢
I heard her complain and shrugged as she wasn't real I know

Nandu: Are mai tumse baat kar rahi hu !
she pinched me hard and this time I blinked my eyes..is she really here. I turned with jerk and saw her smiling at me 😃

Nandu: Tada! Monster Manik how I'm looking 😃

Nandini's Dress

She twinkled her eyes and that's when I glanced at her from head to toe..she was in normal jean shorts with black crop top and matching hat on her head. I blinked my eyes again and she poked me again.


Manik: " You left..tum toh mujhe chodkar chali gayi thi naa 😒
I asked lowly and she made a O face crossing her arns

Nandu: Mai gayi toh thi..par yeh makeover kai liye..Cabir kai saath..😊
She exclaimed while I raised my eyebrows

Manik: " And woh note 🤔
I asked and she scratched her head in confusion and then smiled pulling my cheeks

Nandu: Are stupid..I was upset kyuki..tumne I love you my princess Nandini bhi nahi bola..aur direct kissy kissy kissy everywhere..☺️.. You're so un romantic huh 🥱
She pouted while I hid my smile and she continued

Nandu: That's why I wanted to sue you and that never ever gonna live here means..Mai ab aur ush room mai nahi rehne wali..because ab mai tuhmare room mai rehne wali hu..even I know how to be naughty Monster Manik 😉
She smirked and finally I took a huge relief

Nandu: I thought after what we did..mai thoda sa makeover kar lu..you know now that I've realize you can't live without me and I can't live without you toh...😳😳😳
She blushed making me smile shortly

Manik: " Ohh..you scared the hell out of me
I mumbled and pulled her closer capturing her soft rosy lips. She giggled and tip toped while I smirked and kissed her hard 😛



Now the happy me..I was busy in my library when she came running and dragged me away with her to our room. She placed me infront of mirror and smiled widely 😃

Manik: " what's going on you're tiny head
I asked and she held my hand tight

Nandu: Time to go back..time to avenge my father..time to fight with Gobbles..with you
She mumbled and I made a horrible confused face

Manik: " What??? 😕😲
That's only I could utter and next what happened I didn't know. She pushed me inside along with her.

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Yeh kya...manik rellendle chala gaya...aab kya hoga...😲😲god plz save my manu...😳
Do hit LIKES and COMMENT 😃
And my silent readers...story k last kuch chapters hain...so response...warna...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
nandu is back
she is not angry on manik wow
but now manik is gone
waiting for next
cont soon

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