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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update it nandini saw manik n manik has something which he is hiding from nandu so dose aryaman
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CHAPTER 9

Friends, this seven letter word is often used to describe a group of people who make you waste your precious time on silly tours resulting in a comlex situation where you are expected to get done with your already pending work(supposed to be done in the time wasted) and the new set of mentally and exhausting work in half a day. To add on these people always find a way out to ditch you in the hour of need, ALWAYS!!! I now strongly believe that the defination of friends should be changed to the one i just made up in my mind. Well thanks to my so called helpful friends who made me waste my holiday, making me completely ignorant of the fact that i had a history assignment to submit the next day. And the worse part, none of them had history-PERFECT. So now i was expected to complete the pending work with this new assignment of giving a full research of the history of Dhanaulti after Irish brothers came here. Frustration was just a word for me till today, until i got to know that these stupid people had absolutely no idea what happened after the founders of their school came here, and you know what the best part is, when all of them miraculously get involved in some really important family matter all of a sudden and you are left alone to go out and know the history. So here was standing right in front of the town library to get my research.

This was certainly not my day. The electricity in the library conveniently bid us good bye when i desperately needed it and i had no choice but to go out and study. I got my books issued and went out near the park and settled down under a tree to go through the history. Mom always said that everything happens for a reason, but frankly the only reason that fate right now had to get me into this mess was to piss me off. The library books no great help either but was good enough for the research and to save me tomorrow. Tired of reading i found the thought of visiting the places where the Irish brothers started off with fascinating. It was hardly half an hour walk and i reached a small church there which was said to be started off by the Irish brothers. there was a stone milestone there which had IRISH BROTHERS engraved on it. I was reading it and was taking in the beauty of the place when a husky voice made my heart skip a beat as always. I had goosebumps all over and i knew who was it. "Trying to get to know the history of the founders of your school?" I composed myself and confidently turned around to answer," I suppose its your school too Manik, isnt it?" He smirked and replied," So the lamb knows how to answer, impressive." To say he was looking good would be a lie because he was looking sinfully attractive, leaning against the tree trunk. " Got something interesting to know?" He came near me and snatched the book from my hand. "Yeah that they did a lot of charity, opened schools, our being one of them and still maintaining the prestige, and not to forget this church, which unfortunately has lost its essence, nobody visits it anymore." He looked straight into my eyes and said," Thats what the book says, what did you find out?" I twitched my eyebrows, apparently he was right, i said what was written and not what i found out. I looked here and there to hide my embarrassment, he sensed it and replied," Follow me." And without any other word he started walking into the dense forest and i followed him just like he asked me. It seemed so weird, technically this was the first time we were talking and still it seemed so ok, i mean i never opened with anybody so quick, i still felt awkward around Aryaman and all sometimes, but with him this was not the case. "It would be helpful if you could walk a bit faster, we dont have forever, need to be back by the evening otherwise the wild animals might just feast on you" I quickened my speed and reached beside him," And what 'bout you, wont they feast on you!" He smirked and looked at me," You love to argue for no reason, dont you" He was mocking me on my face but unlike other days when i would start a full fledged war, it was different with him, i had a much important question to ask from him," How did you know where was i, and what work i was doing? Were you following me?" He kept quiet for sometime and then answered," I wasnt following you, nor was i aware of your whereabouts. I visit that church often and finding you reading the milestone with so much interest and carrying those books made it a really obvious guess." Well his answer seemed acceptable.

It had been a few minutes since we had been walking and soon we stood outside an old house, like a really really old house. It was pretty lear that nobody inhabited that house now and that house was abandoned since long. " Not many people know this but the Irish Brothers inhabited this place during the final years of their lives. They were four of them who used to live in that church but when under mysterious circumstances the youngest of them died and the eldest attacked and inured brutally, they shifted to this place secretly. None of the civilians were informed of this and then one day this building caught fire and the three of them were burnt to death." I looked at him shocked, he was looking straight at the house, but his eyes, they were absolutely clear, defiant...never wavering. Without giving me a view, he went inside and i followed him. He went up the stairs and continued to speak," It is said the eldest one was attacked by an unknown creature, a cold one. His behavior changed as the time passed. It is said he lost his senses and some even believe that he murdered one of his brothers, and in guilt he lit his house in fire, killing himself and the younger one along." We reached an open area on the roof, it was the attic. He sat near the open window which was shapeless now and i took the seat beside him. "People dont visit that church anymore, it is believed that fifteen days after the house burnt, the Holy Water got corrupted of a foul smell. Locals believed that it was the anguish of the soul of the living younger brother who had to let go of his life with no fault at all. People who had a more scientific attitude started to look out for clues. It was finally found up in the terrace the decaying body of the youngest brother who died under mysterious circumstances." Manik ended his story and looked at me. I was lost in the story and did not get to know when it had started to rain. But it was more difficult to understand how Manik knew so muh, he just 17, like Aryaman and others, when not even the teachers were of aware of this, how was he? " How do you know so much?" "You see my family has been living here since generations, my great grand father was the caretaker of this house and that church, he served them till their last breath, this story is like a family tradition passed down to each one of us." " Who killed the youngest brother, what was that creature? and what was this cold one thing, was it a vampire." I was dead serious when i asked it but Manik laughed at it like a lunatic," A vampire! seriously? haha..well no, nobody knows, some say it was just a myth. The body marks say that it was done by an animal, people probably made the rest of it, you know the kind of mentality people had at that time, mixing everything with the supernatural." I bought his explanation, it seemed logical. I was quietly sitting there when my phone rang, it was Mukti." Hey Mukti, what happened...wait what, you must be kidding me...whats does i going on a date with Aryaman on Ball has to do with we going to Mussoorie for shopping...ohh yes of course, why dont we do one thing then, we will go to Mussooorie, then from Mussoorie to Dehradun and then we will take a flight to Delhi and shop there too haina...What do you mean by its a good idea, i was just joking, we are not going to Delhi for shoppoing, no ways...Mukti why are you doing this to me...Fine i will be ready but believe me i am not going to forgive you for this." I disconnected the call in frustation and found Manik sketching again." So you going to the Ball with that creepy boyfriend of yours?" I glared at him and replied," He is not my boyfriend and nor is he creepy." " Already so possessive and claim not be his girlfriend, smart!!" Well to be honest his statement made me smile, he wasnt as bad as Abhimanue said he was." Why are you both enemies?"" Its because that freak of yours believes he owns a brain which frankly he doesnt,and everytime we make him aware of this he freaks out." He didnt look up at me, and was still doing his work," I am serious Manik, tell me..." He looked up at me this time," Ask him, he will tell you, now dont eat my head." " I did but they said you are dangerous.." Manik made a weird face and replied," Ohh God, lava boy just loves to make up things, too imaginative to be in a school, ask him and his gang to join Drama school, they are wasting their imaginative skills on worthless things." His reply made it all clear, he wasnt going to spill any beans, i loooked at his sketches," You sketch!" he looked up at me and said," And you think too much". I knew he ws trying to mock me, but it wastrue somewhere, i think too much. Turning my attention back to the serene view i rested on my hands, and i didnt realise when one of my fingers touched his, spark, a spark went through my body, i had never felt like this with anyone, it was magical. I looked into his eyes and surprisingly he did the same and w got lost in each other. I saw the whole world in his eyes, and i swear we would have never broken that eyelock had a wolf's cry not disturbed us. I looked down to hide my blush where he looked everywhere but me, and then suddenly my eyes fell on what he was sketching and my eyes popped out when i saw my portrait sketched perfectly. I looked up at him with shocked eyes, he took some time to understand why i gave that look, and as soon as he did, he hid his notebook. It felt good, he liked me probably. "Its getting late, i think we should leave." He said and i nodded, we got up and came downstairs but every step and his every breath made me feel butterflies in my stomach. "I can go now, thank you for all the information, its really gonna help me alot" Manik just nodded to my staement, but his eyes they were full of passion and intensity. I saw his lips move and then stop suddenly, he wanted to say something, but what, ignoring that i passed him a smile and turned around to leave." Nandini..", there was hurry in his voice and before i could analyse anything i felt him grab my hand and me around and he smashed his lips against mine.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Coming back to forum nw seems a gud decision..
Man ur story is awesome.. u r keeping it full of suspense n intriguing..
Ol characters r shady n discreet..
Read ol chaps in one go..
Loved it..
Do continue.. N plz make chaps lil longer..
Awesome job
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nandini getting mre info about irish brothers from manik



manik n nandini got some connection really ...

why the wolf cried that time

n they kissed ...


waiting for nandini s reaction ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Tammy18

Coming back to forum nw seems a gud decision..

Man ur story is awesome.. u r keeping it full of suspense n intriguing..
Ol characters r shady n discreet..
Read ol chaps in one go..
Loved it..
Do continue.. N plz make chaps lil longer..
Awesome job



Thank you so much dear
It means alot to me
I am glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Awesome update loved it so manik loves nandini n she also does love him n manik n nandini both are vampires for sure n aryaman is a bas***d right now
Awesome update loved it continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
manik knows so much about the irish brothers
he drew a sketch of nandu wow
when they touched they felt a spark
r they soulmates?
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice very interesting story dear


Please continue. ..


Thanks for sharing this.

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just loving the story very much !! Lots of suspense.. waiting for the upcoming chapters... update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 10

He grabbed my hand and turned me around,the next thing I knew, he had slammed his lips to mine and nearly knocked all wind from my lungs. I hardly had a moment to react before he pressed his tongue to the seam of my lips and delved inside my mouth. My arms reached up and tangled around his thick, strong neck. In an instant I had pulled away and arched up into his broad chest, moaning in the contact of body heat against my own, before I drew back into his lips. It was a small kiss but a passionate one. We broke apart and I hesitantly looked up at him. The swirls of emotion I saw there made me gasp. Lust and desire. However, before I could ponder about it further, he yanked me to him and again covered my mouth with his in a hungry kiss. As our lips crushed together, I felt like i was walking on air. It was magic, the way his lips connected with mine. His mouth was so warm, the caress of his lips softer than I could have imagined and I opened my mouth with a low moan.He pushed me to the nearby wall and blocked me between his arms. I was loosing my breath and was trying to break apart but Manik was in no mood to do that, he further pushed himself into me, putting all his weight on me. Then pulling back he unexpectedly drifted his hand to my hip. It settled there and pulled me closer. We were panting heavily, for the first time i was speechless, i wasnt aware what to say and how to react. Manik brought his fingers close to my face, and then with his index finger pulled my face towards his and captured my already wet and red lips again. It was a soft kiss this time and then he broke apart. My forehead as resting on his, we were lost in each others warmth when suddenly Manik opened his eyes, and finally realising what had happened released me from his tight hold. I wasnt prepared for this and my eyes shot open when this happened, and then reality struck me-What just happened? It was a difficult moment, he wasnt looking at me and i was feeling hell awkward. Suddenly he passed me a look and walked away, without any word, just left.

The walk back to my home was quite long, all through the way back my mind was busy thinking about what just happened, what we shared and why he did that. We had never even talked to each other earlier and then suddenly today we kissed, and what kissed we bloody chewed each others lips. It was disturbing, especially for me. Here i had accepted to be Aryaman's date for the Ball and it had only been one day when i actually ate his enemies lips out. I was feeling guilty now, and confused. If Aryaman was whom i liked, if Aryaman was my crush then why did i let Manik do what he did, why didnt i break apart and why the hell did i enjoy that. What was Manik to me. I heard a wolf's cry and it reminded me of Manik again. There was something wrong with this place and Manik in particular. The way he told me that story, it was clear that it just wasnt a story to him, it was much more than that. Manik- who was he? I was busy in my thoughts when i realised that it was already late and that Bahadur bhaiya must have been worried, and the wolf's cry was no help either, this place did inhabit dangerous animals and i dont know vampire or not but a wild animal would surely kill me if didnt reach home fast.

It was quite late when i reached home and Bahadur bhaiya had already left. I reached my room and went inside my washroom to freshen up. I washed my face but every time i closed my eyes, that look of desire on Manik's face clouded my mind. Frustrated i looked up in the mirror and saw my reflection there. My lips had turned red; i slowly brought my fingers near them and touched them. I closed my eyes when a sensation of pleasure ran through my fingers, i could feel myself shiver. Slowly i opened my eyes and looked at my lips, how Manik had kissed them, i could still feel his lips on mine, that feeling was just not leaving me. His touch was like addiction to me now, i was longing to be touched again, to be kissed again. Ans then in an instance i realised what was i doing, acting like a typical teenager. Embarrassed i brought my hands down in a giffy and looked away, but that blush was not leaving my cheeks, washing my face again i reached my room and started to complete my history project, i was going to rock it tomorrow, thanks to Manik.

I reached school in a hurry, i was more than excited today. I really wanted to see Raghav sir's face when i would tell him stuff that he himself wasnt aware of. And not to forget, i really wanted to see Manik, i knew he would avoid me but just a single touch from him would be just enough to control my raging hormones. I reached my class and thankfully the first class was of history. " I hope you have done your work Nandini." I smiled at Raghav sir and nodded my head in excitement." Very well, what are we waiting for then. Come up and enlighten your classmates about the History of Irish Brothers." I stood up on my place and taking in a deep breath started off," Irish Brothers came to the town of Dhanaulti in the year 1885. India was under British rule at that time. People were surviving under difficult circumstances. Initially the main objective of the Irish Brothers was to propagate Christianity, but when they came across the conditions that people at that were surviving in they decided to open up different institutions in order to enlighten the people, and of course for the sake of charity. Sir Paul church was one such institution, which unfortunately lays ruined toady. In 1889 they built this school, St Georges Academy to provide western education to the peopel. Known to be one of the best schools, it still carry's that aura and prestige with its name. 1891 came up as a dark year when the Irish Brother suddenly got disappeared. No one knows what happened." Raghav sir seemed happy to know that i had done my work properly, but the students as expected were bored, they had been studying about this since kindergarten. Raghav sir was going to clap for me when i continued," Many of you must be aware of this for sure, but something that you are'nt aware of is what happened after this." The very mention of this made everyone attentive, but Raghav sir twitched his brows." The Sir Paul church situated in the outskirts of the town is were they lived, but when under mysterious circumstances the youngest of the four died, and the eldest brutally injured, they had no choice but to shift, secretly.They inhabited the house which caught fire suddenly on one evening ,on the old market road. It is believed that the eldest was attacked by some mysterious creature and he soon lost his senses and murdered one of his brothers. Guilt is the most painful emotion, and that is what happened with the eldest. He out of the guilt of murdering his younger brother set the house on fire, forgetting that he had one more brother who was void of any sin. The innocent younger brother burnt to death. 15 days after all this the Holy Water of the church was said to be contaminated of a foul smell. Local said it was because of the anguish the younger brother but the educated one's refused to believe this. It was later found, that the tank whih had the Holy Water contained the decaying body of the youngest one. Since then no one visits that church. But what caught my eye was the creature who killed the youngest. It is said to be unknown, a cold one, maybe a vampire. But medical science says that the marks on the body are of a deadly animal, a bear may and that the locals made the rest of it, but if he really was killed by an animal, how did his body reach the water tank? This is a mystery, maybe one which can never be solved." I finished my speech and everyone in the class showered me with thunders of claps, but Raghav sir seemed angry!" Who told you that Nandini?" His voice was dry, void of any love but full of rage. I got scared for a moment. The class got silent and i was mute." I ASKED WHO TOLD YOU THIS!!" He yelled at me. I had never seen him so angry, " I..I read it in a book, i got tht book from the town library." I lied conveniently. " Really!! this is strange, i have read every book in the library but none of them had this information.. ...Who told you this." I was sweating now, i rubbed my fingers together, something i always did when i was nervous,bracing myself i said." I visited the church yesterday, some man was there, he seemed old, he told me all this." I again lied, i dont know why but i really didnt want to get Manik into this. Raghav sir kept staring at me, he was burning in rage and i knew he was aware that i was lying. He would have probably ripped my head off had the period bell not rung. He gave me a glare and without a word left the class. Everyone started to mutter to themselves, i knew they were talking about me. It frankly didnt bother me, what did bother me was the look on Raghav Sir. I knew he was already aware of this story and his reaction made it clear that this was an important information. The question was- why was this story so important? I didnt have to use much of my mind to realise that Raghav sir probably figured it out who told me this, or at least he had a clue about that. I was sure about one thing, they were hiding something from the civilians, everyone i knew did, and whatever they were hiding had something to do with me.
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago

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