MaNan SS-A Delicate Love Story POSTED TILL P31,REMAINING PARTS DELETED - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Awesome sedhe I love you awesome like really no hi no hello directly I love u manik baba will get it from nandini for sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
It's awesome update dear..
Cabir is the best!
He is the friend worth to die for...
The manik malhotra is scared and nervous..
That's something!
Manan were lost in each other..
He directly confessed!
Oh my god!
What will happen next!??
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Amazinggg update
Manik ilu bol diya itni jldi...manik ko bhi dar lgta hai hehehe...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Omg that was an amazing update
The update was so much fun to read
Thanks for the pm
Cabira u simply rocks
Hahahahaha the great manik malhotra is scared of a girl thaT to his lady love hahahaha
Awww manik is so cute
Cabir ko Cupid ke work ke leave detective mein bhi hona chahiye
Maza agaya
Hahaha loved the way manik was asking question to cabir what to do ,how to do ,when to do ? Hahaha just loved it
Cabira tujhsi great ho mukti ki bike ki tyre puncture karwa di hahahaha
Awww manik phirse latoo ho Gaya nandu ko dekh ke but now cabira is there is to get manik out of his lala land
Awww so sweet manik helped nandu to cross the street
But manik ne nandu ko naam se Bulawa
And what Pehle mulakat mein I love u hahahaha manik baba ka train jet train mein chali gayi
Ab kya hoga nandu ka reaction eagerly waiting to know
Pls pls pls update jaldi
Waiting for the update
Thanks for the pm
Keep smiling
With lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Part-5

Cabir almost fainted hearing Manik and Nandini's eyes popped out with shock for what she has listened.

Nan-What..?? She asked in shock.

Manik too took a moment to register what he had said.

"Chal beta Manik...agar bol hi diya toh...ab darna kya..!!" He thought to himself.

Nan-What did u just say..??

Ma-I said I Love U...

Nan-Are u kidding me...??

Ma-No..no...I'm damn serious...I really love you...Love at first sight...He said proudly.

Nan-Excuse Me...aap jaanthe kya ho mere baare mein..??

Ma-Naam:Nandini Murthy.Nick name:Nandu by your entire family,Chutki by your only loving brother Harshad Murthy.Your family is too traditional,strict and typical I must say.Address:1-23,Bharath Nagar,Navi Mumbai,Ph.No:8888...22.You are doing fashion designing,final year.Your best friends are Mukthi,Aliya,Navya.U guys are too close that u will share everything.Ab jaa kar yeh bhi bologi unko(He smiled).Ur favorite actor Shahid Kapoor,actress Vidya Balan.And haa,U guys will bunk college and watch movie every fortnight.Fav color Black,fav ice cream strawberry.Ab tak, u got 16 proposals in this college and u rejected everyone.Only 2 issues out of those 16 went to ur brother and he bashed them very badly.He loves u a lot.And tum apni family ko bahut respect karthe ho.U will do everything only for their respect.I love that.

He came to halt with a shocked and stunned Nandini in front of his eyes.

Nan-Perfume aur lipstick brand nahi patha..?? She asked in shock.

Ma-wo...nahi..bhool gaya...kal bathau..?? He asked sheepishly.

Nan-Are you spying on me..??

He smiled and said "Spy...Spy is a big word yaar...wo...jis se hum pyaar karthe hai na,uske baare mein automatically patha chaltha hai...but in ur case I purposefully wanted to know..."

Nandini gave a disgusting look at him and turned to leave.Manik immediately ran and stood in front of her.

Ma-Kuch kahogi nahi..??He asked slowly.

Nan-Listen..aap ko mere baare mein sab kuch patha hai..but I don't know anything about u..not even ur name..

Ma-Manik...Manik Malhotra...

Nan-uff..dhekiye...

Ma-wait wait...itna respect...plz..don't...'tum' keh sakthe ho..

Irritated Nandini-suniye Manik jii..

Ma-Manik jiii...(He gave a weird look interrupting her again).Manik is enough.

Nan-Mujhe bolne dhenge aap..?? She asked irritatingly.

Ma-Yeah..sorry...continue...

Nan-First thing,I don't like all these things..love and all..I think u know about it..itna kuch jaan liya aapne...yeh bhi patha hoga na..And second thing,mujhe aapke baare mein kuch nahi patha...kuch bhi nahi..aur mein jaan na bhi nahi chahthi...So plzz...don't waste ur time...u better mind ur business...samjhe aap...??

All this while Manik is lost in her eyes,moving lips and fingers.

Ma-yeah...I understood...picture clear...and I liked the second thing...He smirked.

Nan-What..?? She asked confusingly.

Ma-Ha...tumhe mere baare mein kuch nahi patha...that means,if u know about me,like I know about u,there is a chance...He smiled widely.

Nan-what..??what chance...??

Ma-ok fine...don't stress urself...I'll make u know about me...but that won't be a self-intro...u'll get to know me better day by day...

He continued irrelevant of what Nandini is asking.

Nan-yeh kya bole jaa rahe ho aap..??Listen Mr.

Ma-Manik...He cleared.

Nan-Whatever...Stop following me...

She turned around and started walking.

Manik smiled to himself and said "Take Care Chutki...see you tomorrow.."

Nandini stopped and turned back to see Manik smiling and said "Don't call me Chutki...wo sirf mera bhai ka haq hai..."

Ma-Oh...thanks for correcting...mujhe tumhara bhai nahi banna hai...Nandu is fine..Take care Nandu..

Before she could say anything,he ran towards his car.She walked towards her class and thought "Oh My God..!!itne saare proposals dhekha mein ne...aisa toh kisi ne nahi kiya...He knew everything about me...How cute... he is too handsome...Nandini...No...yeh kya soch rahi ho...U can't do this...Think about papa,amms...No Nandini..."

She started convincing herself.

Done...

Let me know how it is...and Cabir's reaction is pending...So,keep guessing...

Thank u all the supporters and commenters

Special thanks to lamba commenters😉

Keep supporting...

For pms,buddy me...

Edited by keerthupranu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Like when manik say alll these i was laughing like a fool

Nan brand name missed hhhehhe


Lovely

Want cabir reaction


Can't wait


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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
awesome update
this update really cracked me up😆
manik was reciting everything about nandu like a parrot
but he missed the brand names
and nandu asked those
so cute🤣
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
wow
awesome
hahaha so cute manik
l just loved it yaar

thanks for pm
continue asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
oh teri!!! maza aa gaya..
awesomely hilarious and cute update..
when manik was blabbering about her I was laughing paglon ki tarah..
and when nandu asked about the brands I just fell from my bed.. ROFL!!
amazing update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Amazing update...
Manan's convo was cute...
Manik recited everything about nandini lyk a parrot...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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