#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 9

Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Superrr


The most beautiful part

Very longgg tooo.

Lovely manik

Amazing date


Lovely kiss hug.

Everything was sooo perfect


Coun sooon thanks for the update

Thank you

Thank you

Thank you

Originally posted by: knfan

Congratulations on new thread .. Well deserved ..
Perfect is too small to explain the beautiful confession.. So romantic so pure so beautiful .. Amazing job.. Kudos to you for writing so beautifully ..
The way Manik teased her in start, nandini s dress, entire setting at the beach, their little game, the song , confession, kiss, Nandini's confession , their silence at beach, that drop home.. Wow .. So perfect so awesome ..
The pictures just added to the beauty of your update .. I could totally visualize everything you wrote.. Great job.. I am in awe of it still.. I might just keep re reading this update some infinite times.. My favorite update in the entire story..
Thank you for beautiful update .. Waiting for next part ..

Thank you so much for such sweet comments.!!!
👏 applause for you.!

Originally posted by: avantimanan

amazing wala update dear

😊

Very beautifully written..
AAA this was one of my gav stories so over whelming story i loved it...
N m gonna miss it...

Thank so much for every pm
N very sorry on middle have to leave the forum

Take care
Keep smiling
Lord bless

THE CONFESSION NIGHT heading itni bold red lettlers mein read karke aadhi dhadkan aise hi tex ho gayi thi..!! Kya confession tha yaar..!! Very beautiful..totally..!! & nandu wore my fav dress yayiee..!!

Loved the starting..where manik asked her to move ahead & she will see light just like she entered her life & he found light..this was nice..!! And D-day pe bhi itna nok jhok..teasing..cute.!! 😆 I was giggling through out the update & my mom was like wht happened..?? I said nothing..haha..!! All the pics were real beautiful...i specially loved the gazebo setup with moon in the scene..it was damn romantic..!!!

The chit idea was superb..even i was excited..but i think thoda aur personal ho sakta tha..knowing the manik malhotra we all know..!!! But it was good..!! The best one was.. Best moment & then manik stood & asked her for hand pulled her closer...this wad woww..!!!

And then the song was hayee too good..!!! & I LOVE U written with fire works... 😳 I was in awe reading it..it was magical..any girl wud fall for such a gesture..!! & phir aage ka tho..Kisss haha..!!! Those desire passion need..very well written..!!

I loved tht linw which manik said to nandini at her house entrans.." Bahot pyaar karta hun tumse.." I was silent for a min..dil ko chu jaata hai kuch scene..!! It wS a beautiful update!!

God Bless U

Super awesome lovely update dear

Congratulations for new thread 👍🏼

Hey!!😊
1stly, Congratulations 4 ur new thread





okk...

when u started the chap. i was egarly waiting to watch Nandini's Dress..

But Then i saw the venue of their i mean Manan's date..
i uttered only 1 word WOWWW!!!

u knw what kash mera would be agar hua toh then he will give me surprises like this..i will be on cloud 9 u knw what i think i m quite filmy yaar!!!😉 but i m little Romantic also..hai na???

u knw then i jst love the way you proyrated both Manan's pov.. in which actually u penned the feelings of their inner heart..their expectations 2wards each other..
Nd Also Manik setup 4 the Date.. By telling her the Path😊

then u shw Their Dressess.. then i knw k lots n lots of Nautiness wass coming ..on the way
then u shw the Gazebo it was truely amazing..
On My previous comment
i had already mentioned my fv dialogues.. so i m speechless...kya kahu mein tujhe..kabil a tareef..

the chit wala games's idea is very innovative...
i think this is the most beautiful way 2 knw each other better...😊

then u have choosen the song.. love uu 4 that.. a kiss on ur Hand 4 penning the song..nd making me feell so special

the way u made Manik to tell her the 3 magical word it breathtakingly Romantic..
Manik Gifted her the fireflies.. woww what cute nd lively ❤️ touching gesture.. that was too lovely..
i had imagine ManAn in the place of that couple...

then the Confession Time came finally..
U made the most special Kiss,, Their 1st kiss,,,
NOT ONLY LIP KISS..😳
U had made it actually hot as well as Passionate..😳 by Making 😳Manik KIssing his exposed part also.😳. which i had felt when i saw Nandini's attire...this Physical contact is 1st time between them.. coz everytime they jst wanted to be this much close but the situations never Permitt them...

u kw u make me blush while reading those moments..😳
even i m also blushing while typing the comments..

Then dropping Nandini home with Naughtiness..😊
But Next part ke liye i m little worried..
Hw will Manik gonna let his parents knw about his passion nd dream.. 😕

this ""CONFESSION DATE"" is most special,romantic,hearttouching nd passionate, unbelieveably dreamy Date Ever..
i must say My Angy is a very rommaannttiicc nd passionate person as well as writer😉

Mein toh yeh soch rahi hoon k Confession mein yeh haalat hai Shaadi k waqt aue uske baat aur kya kuya kya hoga>???😳

love uu yaarr,,
plzz update soonn...

Congratulations for new thread

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Very beautifully written..
AAA this was one of my gav stories so over whelming story i loved it...
N m gonna miss it...

Thank so much for every pm
N very sorry on middle have to leave the forum

Take care
Keep smiling
Lord bless

Why you have to leave the forum???
Is everything okay?
Anyway thank you so much.!!
Will miss a reader like you