#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 3

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Congrats for new thread. Loving the way u penning this story. Each and every update was beautifully penned. Keep up the good work. U r an amazing writer

Awesome update. U amazed me with this update. Was speechless. Wow nandini reached beach. Manik's words about darkness and nandini as light was superb. Loved it. Hehe manik loves to tease nandini.manan's moments at gazebo was rocking. They played games. Questions were superb. Helped to understand each other well. Manan's pov was well penned. Manik's suprises for nandini were mindblowing. Song was superb. Fireworks part was phenomenal. Manik's confession was marvellous. Loved it. Manan's moments were beautifully penned. Fireflies part was rocking. Wow nandini wanted to tease manik.finally manik made nandini confess. Manan's confession once again was beautiful.loved it.Manan's moments infront nandini's home was cute. Manik doesn't want to leave nandini. Totally an beautifully update. Loved it so core.one of the best update of this ff.u nailed it. Pics were mindblowing. Each part of update was beautifully penned. Keep up the good work. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read further.

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

Originally posted by: pdiyar193

Yayyy I was waiting for the remaining parts!!!

OMG the update was too good!

I loved it!!!!<3

It was so cute, and Manan were adorable!

Loved what Manik had planned for her!

Teasing her at the beginning was cute!

But the romance was to hot!! Kisses were the best!

Lovely photos added throughout!

Loved the way Nandini confessed!

She's so pure and innocent!

Perfect couple!!

Awww I really liked the game they played, such a unique but beautiful idea!!

They can't live without each other, truly made for each other!

They understand each other perfectly!!

Eeek I'm really excited for the next update!!!

Please update as soon as you can, super impatient!!!!:)

Thanks for the PM!!

Congratulations on the new thread!!!