#2//Dirty Deals//Chapter 9 on Pg 45 updated on 28.08.2016 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Thank u so mch dear for the update
Story aur bhi intresting ho gyi
Finally jealousy wala part start hua
Love story to start hui dono k bich
Hope realise bhi ho jae jldi dono ko
Bt vo ldki thi kon
Hope next chapter me pta chale
Eagerly waiting for next part
Update soon dear
And ya eagerly waiting for some soft romance too
I know its a dark story bt phir bhi thoda to soft romence chlta h
And waiting for their love story also
Update soon
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Wow awesome update...
Manan r getting attached emotionally...
Nandu was jealous aww...
Manik was soo angry on her...
Pls give Manik pov want to know what he feels...
Last line was aww...
Luved it ...
Waiting for next...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Yaar update soon. You update so late.''''
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Again an amazing update.
She is soo cute.
She told the whole story how she bought watches for him.
How lovingly he asked for kiss at last.
Update was superb cute.
But who was she came in his office. But it was fun to c nandni jealouse.
Next part soon plz. Yaaarrr don't be late this time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Ye masoom bccha itne naughty ideas lata kaha se hai? Hame to ni aate. hehe. Finally the awaited update. And it was phenomenal as usual. Sometimes I wonder what is your inspiration. From where do u get ideas. Every chapter has so many emotions to offer. Well this one was a bit sudden, I didnt imagine Nandini all in love so soon, albeit the fact that possessive Nandu is a treat to watch. And Manik asking for permission to kiss. Haaye shareed bccha XD XD
Your stories are bliss, keep writing, and I wish to buy them all in paper someday :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Hayeee. You are back. So happy...

I read the update in the bus on the way to my dentist 😃

Love that the female characters in your stories are so wild. I hate when authors always show that the eyes of the girls sting with tears. I hate it because sometime women get angry and they can throw things at people as well😉
Last line of the update caught me off guard and got me thinking that manik adores her no matter what. Poor soul who saw them together was totally scandalized. Great Job with the update, the story is taking interesting turn and I am waiting for you to show us what is hidden inside your kitty 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
hi awesome awesome beautiful update love it this story is so different and the way you narrate no words to describe love it all the way look forward for next update take care keep smiling and god bless you sweetheart 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Cute jealous Nandini..& Naughty smirking Manik...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awww...dil khush kardita ...luv uu yaar awasome update ...jealous nandu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Such an amazing update after such a long wait. After reading this i feel that the wait was all worth it. But still I hope that we don't have to wait this long to get the next update, as the story has become too interesting to wait.

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