MaNan SS: Forbidden Love! Link To Thread 2/ Pg 1 - Page 98

Well this was the best make out scene till now!

Quote krna acha sa lamba sa! Nai to tangain tor don gi! Phir jana pindi😉

Amazing superb update.
I realy loved it.
First of all at start how he reminds her that she loves him. And he was worried what if she forget us.
After that another shock Mr murthy already know about rouges. It was shocking for Manik and for me as well.
After that Mr murthy asked Manik to call him dad . Haq banta he. How sweet. I liked Mr murthy's offer of being dad of soon to be son in law.
And then
Her dress was so delicate and beautiful and yeah sexy b. 😉
Then her insecurities that Manik will never like her body.
Tree house was so amazing.
Totally mast scene tha boss.
Then how he started his rumance and after that she was crying she was helpless she was scared.
But how amazing his words were. How beautifully written, His questions, u don't want me u don't love me.
I loved it.
And yeah their make out hmmm that was sooo hot.
And pendant was having so deep meanings. That was different and very suitable to rouge who is eagle of rose.
Superb.

Amazinggg...suprrbbb...mindblowinggg...fabulousss update...nandu ke dad ne bhi manik ka secrer pta lgaa liya...ab toh khuranas gye...bete ki ek glti ni sb bigaad diya...wowww beautifull tree house...awesomee manan...romantic manik...lovd it...continue soon

Awesome update...
Loved it...
Nandani's father had also guessed them as rogue now they have to be more careful...

Awesome update
Finally Manik marks Nandhini

Omg!

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

Well this was the best make out scene till now!

Bohat bohat ache parhe and some of them were written by you! All were magical but iske bad to abhi tak dil dhak dhak kr raha hai meri jaan! Hayee!

Like ek ek word p kuch ho jata tha mujhe! MaNan ka jadu to humesha kam krta hai! But your writing! And specially ye wali! Oh God main kia bolon? I'm going crazy😆

Sachi agr wattpad hota na ek ek line p comment krti but ab sara parhane k bad itna likhane ki himat nai😆 each and every word did something inside me! Yar ye parh k kuch kuch hota hai😳

Firstly to Mr Muthy yar kia bat hai onki! I'm loving his character as well! Manik and his talks and the way how he said he knoe about him! That was superb! I loved their bound and Aryaman ka bhi kuch ho jae ga

The way Manik handled broken Nandini! He is a gem! Finally Nandini is back to normal and I'm more than happy! They are love!

And their romantic time ka to oper bata diya likin phir bata deti hon it was hot yar! Tum ahista ahista kuch zayada hi expert hoti ja rahi ho and not just this it was amazingly beautifully written! Hot hot ;)

And this shameless Manik! Huh!!! I love him damit! Yar you made me in love with this shameless guy! Ab main kia karon? Mujhe to ek shy types mila hai! I want this shameless guy! Tumhari ghalati hai😡 main kia karon? 😆

Waise wattpad se to bohat zayada lamba comment ho gaya bit wahan ek ek line p krti! So awsum update!

Love u janeman! Umaah!

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