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Posted: 9 years ago

Hola KYYians,parthinans ,nitians ,mananholics and all , let me first introduce myself ...im avika south Indian from Andhra pradesh

Bacically im from Jodha akbar forum , but i am ardent fan of manan too .

Actually i saw kaisi yeh yariaan in youtube two to three months back and i was in awe with the main leads and their chemistry , I loved the angry hulk Manik Malhotra and Barbie doll Nandini murthy to the core and watched all the episodes of season 1 .

Season 2 errr what to say about it ,i didnt like it much yet i watched few episodes of it only for Manan ,but the ending was...umm chodo yaar

I recently started an SS ...Souls Entwined ,which is ongoing story in Jodha akbar forum and i wanted to try it for manan too , so here i am ,posting my story in manan's version .

Give it a try ... if u like it well and good ,if u dont ,then a big big sorry for wasting ur time

Here's the prologue and character sketch

:-Prologue:-

The world in which we live is beautiful infact very beautiful isnt it ? Just like a fantasy dream land so beautiful ,so pure and so divine ,but if we see the other side of coin the world is impure ,ugly, and evil too . With fake people around lies are disquised as truth and some of their hidden dark secrets make the world ugly.

Amidst all this there r two hearts ,two pure souls who r entwined by the destiny thereafter their fates are bind together and now one's sadness ,fears ,tears and love of one is the other to find .

Two hearts ,two souls and the journey begins 😳 .Lets see what happens when arrogance meets stubbornhead 😆😉

:-CHARACTER SKETCH:-

Manik Malhotra : A man full of himself ,arrogant to the world yet soft and kind hearted to his dear ones , a man who never beleived in love , for he fears to loose the ones he loved . A greek god who masked his tears with his smile ,his fears with arrogance .

At a very tender age of 5 he lost his father and thereupon his mother Niyonika malhotra took the responsibility of Malhotra Industries ,whose branches are spread all over the country . ..

Niyonika malhotra :- Riddhima and Manik's mother who regreted her whole life for ..she couldnt prove herself as a loving and caring mother. After Saurabh Malhotra's death(Maniks father) she had to take care of the whole empire on her shoulder, Running such a big company has its own repurcassions as it needs a lot of devotion and hence MRS MALHOTRA dedicated her whole life nurturing the empire and as a result she slowly drifted apart from her small family , her daughter and her son but mostly from her SON .

Riddhima Gupta :- Compassionate wife , obidient daughter,loving mother and above all she is an adorable sister. A kind hearted woman who spent most of the time raising her kid brother MANIK MALHOTRA as he was too cranky around maids . For Manik she was his world .

Raghav Gupta :- Riddhima's husband ,well known businessman who is taking care of Malhotra industries at present after Niyonika's voluntary retirement . Inspite of the heights of success ,he was as humble and grounded as ever. He loved ,adored and respected his beautiful wife Riddhima.

Ruhi Gupta :- Riddhima and Raghav's daughter ,a five year old child who lived in her own world .

Nandini murthy :- Young ,matured ,smart lady who lost her parents in a car accident when she was 18 yrs old and from then her elder brother and his wife was her only family. A stubborn girl who is highly protective of her family and can go to any extent if it comes to her family . A girl who loves to spread happiness around her .

Rishab murthy :- Nandini's possessive elder brother who loved to pamper his kid sister like anything . A blooming businessman who took the charge of his father's family business after his parents death . He not only saved his company from bankruptacy but also took the company to its new heights with his hardwork.

Vibha Anand / Vibha murthy :- Rishab's legally wedded crazy wife and Nandini's bhabhi cum BFF. A girl full of life and Jaan of the brother and sister duo .

Other characters :

Navya naveli : Nandini and vibha's new friend , Happy go lucky soul .

Cabir Dhawan :- Manik's chaddy buddy , highly mischeivous carefree guy who spends most of the time plotting against other students only to irritate them.

Dhruv vedant :- smart ,good looking shy boy who is loved by everyone for his kind and humble nature .

Mukti vardhan:- Another prankster who is always busy in cooking plans with her partner in crime Cabir

Alya saxena :- A fashionista , arrogant spoilt brat who has a secret crush on Manik but he consider her only as a friend .

Manik,cabir,dhruv,mukhti and aliya always hang around together in a group , and they named their group as fab 5

Kishwar merchant :- A widow who is presently working as Ruhi's nanny ,a greedy women who can even kill a person if needed .

Harshad merchant :- keishwar's cousin , just like his cousin he is a devil in reality , a shameless womaniser who lusts and desire for everywomen.

Soha kurrana :- Manik's soul sister cum classmate , after Riddima if manik trusts and loves someone to the moon and back then its definetly her. Very intelligent and hardworking girl who always tops the college .

So guys here is the character sketch ,will introduce the other characters as and when required. 😉

Lets meet all of them under the same roof of FMS (Faculty of management studies) Delhi who r there to pursue thier MBA .

Note :- There is no space academy and no music guys(sorry for that) , they all r here to pursue their management studies , i hope u like the character sketch and prologue .

Pls share ur views in the form of comments dearies and let me know if i should continue this or not . I would proceed if only i get good responce ,in case i dont then i will delete my story without giving u much trouble .

I have no friends here ,nor i will invite my friends from other forum's here . I would be glad if anyone of u can help me in promoting my story ...if only i choose to continue 😆.

If ur interested in reading this story then i will create another account so that u guys can buddy me ,u must be wondering why another account ... well i have already 200+ buddies in my buddy list and i dont want to get confused between JA and Manan buddies hence separate account (condition appiled here too...hahaha )😆

Now enough of my bak bak ... will update first chap soon till then bye bye 😊

Edited by avika444 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

loved the concept ... pls continue soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 1

Aaj botallan khullan do

Daaru sharu dhullan do

Whiskey da peg laga ke

Saari duniya bhullan do

Party all night

We do party all night

The night club was on its full swing ,the ear deafening loud music echoed in the whole room, the muticoloured disco balls hanging off the ceiling flashed on and off on the dance floor ,the intoxicating alcohol assaulted the nostrils attracting the alcoholic youngsters towards it .

The whole set up for the party made the night club more live and happenning for the people specially youngsters who came around to hang out , the people on floor danced on the music beats madly, deeply drowned in the alcohol they dint care if the steps matched with the beats or not, they just knew one thing "PARTY ALL NIGHT"

Gulping down the whole content of glass in one go , the man in green and off white t-shirt paired with black jeans joined the crowd on dance floor with his friends , matching his steps to the music ,the man fully engrossed in his dance .

A hot chic cladded in red short strapless cocktail dress was drooling over the handsome hunk as she marched towards him , throwing her hands around his neck ,the girl embraced the man into tight hug and started swaying her hips to the music touching him at inappropriate places .

Irked by the girls unwanted seduction the man yelled on top of his voice so that it could successfully reach her ears Get ur hands off me girl .saying so her jerked her hands .

To his utter disgustment the girl didnt budge making the man furious and he walked out of the club followed by his dear friend Cabir .

Stupid girls he exclaimed gritting his teeth while his friend tried to calm him down .

Back to home from a late night party ,the slightly drunken man walked upstairs balancing his steps where his room was, but halted in the mid way on hearing the familiar voice..

Is this the time for u to come back home Manik ?? queried the lady in her late 40's who was really pissed off with her sons carefree attitude.

None of ur business replied the man sternly .

None of my business ?? How dare u say that Manik ,im ur mother for god sake dammit .Screamed niyonika in low voice making sure not to disturb the other family members sleep.

Aah god !!she finally realised !! Happy realisation "Mom" air quoting the word 'mom' he continued ,im glad atleast now u remember that im ur damn son countered Manik sarcastically.

Manikkk!! She raised her voice a notch high but Manik interrupted .

Shhh niyonika ,keep a check on ur voice ,u might awake others , and anyways its no point in arguing when i clearly know there wont be any end to this argument , so pls let me live my life in my own way said Manik and went to his room without waiting for any other word from his mother's mouth.

Slamming the door behind his back he switched off the lights making the whole room dark ...aahhh he loved darkness .

Taking out his guitar he started playing the tunes feircely in the sound proof room, it was a kind of stress booster for him which helps to let go off the pent up frustration inside him.

Tears rolled down his eyes as he played the guitar and no sooner the devil was back.

Wiping the tears which were a proof of him being weak ,he jumped on the bed and retired for the day...

This was Manik Malhotra' s routine , spending most of the day in college and after that clubbing and partying with his friends , with no interest in spending his time at home , he usually gets back home late night and straight away goes to his room.

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Shuklambara dharam vishnum

Sasivarnam chaturbhujam

Prasanna vadanam dhyaayed

Sarva vighnopa shaantaye

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Finishing her aarti the graceful lady now padded towards the living room where a the man she adored was sipping his morning coffee fully engrossed in reading the newspaper.

Aarti !! Uttered the pleasing lady with a smile on her face .

Taking aarti the dynamic man enquired the whereabouts of his sleeping beauty who was not up yet.

The lady chuckled and assured with her eyes to take care of his so called sleeping beauty and walked towards the room.

A sweet girl in her early 20's was sleeping peacefully on her king sized bed carring a sweet smile on her lips , which proofs she was happily floating in her dream land .

Placing the aarti thal on the side table ,the poised lady slowly moved towards the bed and pulled the quilt which the girl pulled back on her body as a reflex.

The determined lady walked towards her face and tickled her ears with a feather to which she cried go away idiot , let me sleep and snuggled her head more into the fluffy pillow.

With no other choice left the now irked lady set up the alarm and brought it near the sleeping beauty.

She jerked up and sat staright on her bed as the alarm blazed right near her ear .

Nanduuu... whined vibha, to which Nandini giggled .

Looking at her bhabhis cute annoyed face Nandu kissed her forehead and in return fetched a smile from her adorable bhabhi.

Come down in ten minutes!! Bhai is desperately waiting for u she excalimed with a wink and moved out of the room leaving her bhabhi alone to freshen up quickly.

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College kab se shuru ho raha hai ?? piping the hot coffee the resposible brother asked the details of when their college was starting.

Tomorrow bhai and by the way thank u mouthed Nandini for all the things his bhai does for her .

Thank u ?? For what ?? Asked the confused brother with a frown .

For joining bhabhi in the same college replied the grateful lady.

For that u definetly have to thank me, u know FMS is one of the best colleges in delhi and its so difficult to get a seat there but for u i somehow managed everything using my all sources .Anyways where is ur bhabhi queried the gentleman.

Im here im here came vibha's voice from behind and sooner she made herelf comfortable besides her husbands chair .

Congo bhabhi !!we both r in same college now chirped Nandini extending the coffee mug towards her .

Woh toh hona hi tha Nandu ,afterall it was my husband who was taking care off right she winked with a proud expression on her face .

Yeah right !! But now onwards pls do focus on ur studies ok quipped Rishab look at my sister she topped her class and got a free seat too in delhi's perstigious college.He boasted about his kid sister but truly she deserves the praising, doesnt she .

Oh hello !! Bringing her husband back on earth she protested everyone is not as genious as ur sister ,hope u understand this and besides getting 75% marks isnt that bad ,is it ?? And not to forget i have to fullfill a wife's duty too. So if u see i have so many responsibilities to be taken care off instead of only studying .she blabbered .

Nandini was enjoying the husband and wife banter and why not , they really look cute together while arguining .

Ur saying as if my sister just sits and relax the whole day leaving all the household chores on u right ? He countered defending his beloved sister.

But vibha was not the one to give up soon and so she argued as i said before ur sister is a genious ,multi tasker women who can manage everything efficiently but she doesnt have to do the one extra work which unfortunately im supposed to do everynight .

Getting a confused frown from her not so innocent husband she continued u know she is lucky for .. she can focus on her studies during nights if not in daylight whereas im concerned , i spend my night busily entertaining my husband.

Gosh !! She literally embarassed him in front of his kid sister and as a reflex he shut his wife 's mouth with his hand .

Getting back her senses she bit her tongue back for being carried away and looked at her husband apologetically.

This was enough for Nandini to burst into laughter and there she went laughing hysterically holding her stomach.

Bhai bhabhi u guys r seriously made for each other ,sweet and salt combination proving the famous theory oppossite attracts she winked as she said so making them blush like teenage lovers .

By the way Vibha diverted the topic our new academic sessions r starting from tomorrow so why not enjoy our last holiday ,lets go for a movie suggested vibha earning a glare from her husband in return , to which she pouted and muttered boring workoholic husband

But in a girl dominanted house it wasnt hard for them to bend the only male member of the house to their will and thus giving up to their demands Rishab agreed .

And the two crazy girls dashed towards the kitchen to finish their tiny winy bits of household chores .

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Sleeping on his king size comfortable bed the man was lost in his own dreams totally oblivion to the world out . It was noon time, the peircing sun rays made its way towards his room leading him to open his eyes irritatingly .

Aahhh !!! Hi whined as he opened his eyes ,my head , its spinning .. he had a bad hangover courtesy the last night heavy drink obviously which made the already irritated man more annoying .

And it was then he heard the knock on his door .

Manik grumpily asked who is this ??

Its me cabir came the reply which brought a soft smile back on his face .

Somehow dragging his body till the door ,he opened it for his friend to come in with a warm smile .

What the ... why arent u ready yet Manik ??Shreiked cabir .

Were we supposed to go somewhere asked the nonchalant buddy .

Seriously ur asking me ?? Wasnt it u who planned for a movie today ?? Replied the not so pleased friend .

Oh yeah !! I forgot excalimed Manik rubbing his head and said my head !!its aching Cabir ,can we pls postponed it for the evening . I want to take rest requested Manik to which abdul nodded and decided to stay with him for .. he couldnt take the risk of

$$ Evening $$.

Enjoying the movie to the core Manik and cabir along with Dhruv stepped out of the theatre when they found a crowd gathered around two petite forms. They could not see their faces as their back was facing them but intrigied by the ongoing scenario they decided to have a close look of the scene.

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Leaving the two crazy girls outside the theatre Rishab stepped towards the lobby where their car was parked.

Nandini and Vibha stood by the nearby fountain which looked magnificient under the starlit sky. The alternating red and green lights added more to the beauty of jet streams of water .

A huge smile appeared on Nandini's face as she observed the movement of water streams . Lost in the beauty of manmade creation Nandini kept staring at the fountain continuously and it was then when she found someone's hand around her waist.

Her eyes widened as she turned her face around to see the person , disgusted with an unknown mans touch she jerked his hand away from her body .

Has he lost it she thought and glared at the man but the stupid man smirked and yanked her . He extended his hand again to touch her face which triggered the angst in Nandini and the next moment a strong punch landed on his nose .

Manik and his gang were watching the scene from far away and was mused by the girl's courageous move , they peaked through the crowd to get a clear view of the girl but to their bad luck she didnt turn her face and walked away as the crowd now handled the brute and she stepped inside the car with another girl.

Woah !! That was awesome uttered cabir as he was left sppechless by the girls action while Manik tried his best to get a view of the feisty girl but all he could manage was her bracelet which shined under the street lights when she closed her car's door .

A small smirk crept on his face as he found himself attracted towards a girl when it was always the other way round ,it was girls who died to get a glimpse of him and here he was standing among his friends cursing his fate for missing a chance of getting a glimpse of this stranger but the design of her bracelet encripted in his mind .

Soon they too left the place for their night business " night club " ofcourse 😆

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Hey friends ...i know many of u might have forgetten something like this existed too once upon a time lol...actually ...i wasnt much happy with the responce before *sad* but then ...i thought ...for a totally alien member like me ...its not at all a bad start ...i mean ...hey ...i got 12 readers atleast *Wink* ...so i decided to continue anyways 😊

So this is first chap 😉I know they missed the chance of meeting each other but dont worry aaj nahi toh kal they will meet , wont they 😉 .so hows the chapter?? Do share ur views dearies . Love u all 😳

Edited by avika444 - 8 years ago

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Ok...girls ...i seriously dont know whom to pm and whom not ...by chance if anyone drops in pls give it a try and let me know if u liked it ...if not ...koi nahi 😉

By the way ...any telugu girls here ?? 😉