love story part 4 page 8 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

66

Views

10.1k

Users

28

Likes

170

Frequent Posters

Vandyandy thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Hey Aditi
Thks for the PM
Concept is different n nice
Felt so sorry for little boy Manik..
Manik ke parents esse kyun behave kar rahe hai Manik ke saath??
Good he decided to never come back during his vacations ...
Nandu too felt sad for her..
How can a mom not listen to her daughter..

Ya waiting for the other stories ..
Plz update soon..

sadiya51 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Can u pls make an index of all the stories u have written coz I have lost the track n name of some stories written by u
Thatgirl16 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#13
part 2
sending a bit of special love to kyaramalhotra, bhagupur, vandyandy for lamba comments😉

n u all my sweethearts for ur response

Arnav ...

Arnav Malhotra was a contended man. He was the king of fashion world, had the most loving n beautiful wife. His son Dhruv would turn 25 this year.

Yet there was always a tug at the corner of his heart. He couldn't love Manik, his elder son the way he was supposed to. He just couldn't bring himself to love him like he loved dhruv. May be because he was away from him for the first 6 yrs of his life, may be because he loved khushi a lot n she hated manik.

His 1 mistake ruined it all for his elder son.

They met in college two young hearts fell in love with each other. Their raging hormones just didn't let them think of protection on that beautiful night. They consummated their love.

A silly misunderstanding broke the beautiful relationship. They moved on.

Almost 7 yrs later they met again. Both realised their mistake. They patched up. But manik never could become a part of them.

Khushi insisted that they try for a child right after their marriage. He tried to make her see sense with manik, but might as well try harder.

He loved khushi selfishly n didn't want to upset her. They had dhruv n everyone loved dhruv.

Manik have always been an excluded part of the family, for all but his nani. She loved the lonely child a lot. May be a bit more that dhruv.

His elder son was back a month ago. He returned back finally 18 years later.

Its not like he haven't come, but he came only to meet nani. For a day or two maximum.

Dhruv was unable to go to Havard cuz of his low marks. Manik came back as a gold medallist in management on scholarship. He was not happy. No one except nani was.

It was her ill health that brought the lad back here finally.

He had a temper to match his. Was violent when someone passed his territory.

He just wished he could have a heart to accommodate manik in it.

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

Khushi...

Khushi malhotra was the most pampered child anyone would know.

She fell in love with arnav in college. After their breakup it was terrible for her to cope up with it. Amidst all the chaos she came to know about her four month pregnancy.

Manik came into her life as nothing but a curse. She had to face all the humiliation alone.

Had to struggle in the society.

By the time he was born she truly hated him. Her figure was lost.

Everytime she looked at his face she missed arnav.

7 years of loneliness and humiliation. She met arnav finally n they reconciled. They got married. Her married life always had a nagging speed breaker called manik. She never enjoyed her life.

Her painful experience of having manik made her immediately try for a child. She wanted to cherish her motherhood with arnav. She just wanted to remove the nightmare of that manik.

She finally had dhruv. She loved her child.

Manik is again back in their life cuz of nani. She knows her dhruv would be insecure, because he was always above her child.

Heard that he started off a business n in a short time he was quite successful.

She doesn't care he can never reach their standards. Dhruv would have all of his father's business. Manik can never reach there.

Trust me aise log hote hai. I just wanted to finish off the Malhotra past. Just want to start manan from the next part. I'm already typing part 3. Comment enough for me to upload. Thius would be a thorough manan story very different from my usual style.

Love

Aditi

Edited by aditi16 - 9 years ago
mehak_ahuja thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#14
The start is amazing... She faced humiliation and he loves her so don't love ur child.. I know ese log hote hai.. But really feeling bad for Manik..
Eagerly waiting for the next update and the k u for the update and the pm

rockstarlover thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#15
manik's past is really painful😭
chocolate1234 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Aditi awesome start
Very nice concept
Yaar yeh murthys and malhohtras ka prob kya hain apne child ke sath koi Aisa karta hain vala
How can a mother be do ruthless and heartless
Though facing all humiliations buT for a mother a child is above all always
Manik ki mom totally ek psycho person hain she needs serious treatment
Yeh Aliya and dhruv are gonna be problem in manan's love story
They are Spoiled brats
Waiting for ouR manan meet
Thanks for them dear
Superb startInG
Waiting foR The next part
Tc
With lots of love and hugs
eppie99 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awesum storyline
Feel like cryin right now
Bechare manan
Its beautifully written
Continue soon
bhagupur thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#18



Thanks for pm.dear

Feeling very emotional to see Manik fate. ..

His own parents don't like him. ...very sad...

He is gold medalist in study...a brilliant child any parents could ask. ..but. ...fate. ...

Looking forward how mansn met and get closer. ..

And how is maniks lifestyle ...very curious to know. ..

Please update soon. ..

Thanks for sharing this beautiful story.

Stay blessed dear and keep writing. .




Thanks.





Vandyandy thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Hi Aditi
AWW!!! Thks for the PM

So quick Awesome...
Bad yaar ... Manik's mom she has no right to treat Manik in that way...
It was them who lost control and forgot to use protection... Huh !!!!!
Where is Manik to be blamed ??????
What he knows why he came to this cruel world ??????
Good to know atleast Manik's Nani loves him and cares for him...

The past was horrible... Atleast for the poor kid ...
Hope nandini gives him that much love for him to discard his bad past from his life and same Manik could heal. Nandini ...

Waiting for the nx.
lovesucks_78 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#20
tats really disgusting
they were at fault n
now blaming manik
u cudn't love ur own child
tats just not fair




i loved the update

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".