MananTS- Mein Rahoon Ya Na Rahoon !!(chapt-3(a)/pg 18) - Page 2

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Chapter 1

LOCATION-DEHERADUN

A man is sitting near a waterfall on a big rock nearby...wearing his uniform...the stream is running down the hill through the waterfall making a calm and soothing sound of the cool water flowing ...increasing the beauty of the view even more...the person is in deep thoughts and throwing pebbles in the water...suddenly another person keeps his hand on his shoulder .he is also in army uniform...

The man comes out of his thoughts and turns around to look at the owner of the hand...

Man-arre cabir tu!

Cabir-haan mein!!kya hua mere bhai ab kya problem hai...itna sab kuch toh achieve kar liya aur wo bhi itni choti ummar mein...i mean...18 yrs mein NDA phir 3 saal kadi tranning pune mein,uske baad captain phir wapis 1 saal service tranning in IMA and now after 3 long years you are finally ,officially MAJOR . MANIK MALHOTRA ...ab kya chaiye tujhe??ab toh khush ho ja mere baap...

Manik- (smiles)nai yaar!!aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...aur tub hi toh MAJOR .CABIR DHAWAN ban gaya na...aur mein buss aise hi...

Cabir- (sittig beside him)oh plz!!now don't give me that crap ki kuch nahi hua ...buss aise hi and all...com on now speak up...tere rag rag se achhi taraha se waakif hun...so just spill!!

Manik- (sighs)cabir...yaar wo dad ka call aya tha...

Cabir- han toh ??ky..kya kaha uncle ne???

Manik- yaar wo...dad chahate hain ki mein kuch dinon ke liye Punjab jaun aur...

Cabir- aur??

Manik- aur...unhonne...unhone mere liye ek ladki pasand ki hai toh wo chahate hai ki mein use milun...

Cabir- arre wah!!!yeh toh bahut achhi baat hai...toh iss baat mein muh phulane wali kaunsi baat haibro...infact this is great news...!!!(giving him shabashi)

Manik- ummmi don't know yaar!!!

Cabir- seriously!!!like seriously manik!!salle !(hitting him)pehele naukri aura b chokri...sab kuch toh tujhe time se mill raha hai phir tujhe kya problem hai...??tujhe koi aur pasand hai kya??

Manik- no yaar! Infact dad jisse bhi mere shaadi fix karenge mein usise shaadi karunga...as I know...dad ki judgement can never be wrong but its just that ke...is it the right time??am I ready for it???as shaadi is a big reponsibility...what if mein usse nibhanahi paya...toh na hi mein aapni life barbad karunga balki usski bhi jo mujhse judne wali hai...

Cabir- don't worry dud!!tu tension mat le...i don't know wether all this is true or not but navya humesha keheti hai ki naseeb mein jo likha hota hai na ...usse koi bhi badal nahi sakta...see tu usse ek bari mil le may be wo hi tere actual soulmate ho???kya pata ,u never know...aur rahi baat shaadi karne ki toh khote...(hitting him lightly)wo log jaate hi tujhe uthake mandap pe nahi bitharahe...samjha ...so just chilll and go with the flow...just give it a short...

Manik-(smiles)-I think you are right!!thanx bro...

Cabir- anytime yaar...

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LOCATION- HOSHIYARPUR VILLAGE,PUNJAB

In a big khandani kothi from which anyone can understand that there lives a joint familly...in the kothi there is a open space at its center where 2 women are busy in grinding the red chillies in the traditional way i.e in big big okhlies...where as other two are busy in making papads...and arranging them so that the get dries ...a middle aged woman is sitting on charpai executing all the work...suddenly she calls out for someone...

Lady-ladoo...are oo ladoo!!!kithe chali gayi a kudi savere savere...aaj ladke wali anwale hain onnun dekhne vaste aur ae kudi hai ki...haye rabba!!!kithe chali gayi...simmo..!!!!

Simmi-ji bua dadi!!aaeee...

She comes running downstairs...

Simmi- ji...

Bua dadi- ja...jake nandini nu bula la...inni badi hogaye hai lekin abhibhi psse inni si bhi akal nahi aaye...aaj ladke wale onnun dekhne aane wale hain aur aee kudi...uff...mennu pata hai...phirse jake keton vich ghoom rahi hogi...ja jake bula la onnun...

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Manik is travelling in his army jeep...actually he is very fond of travelling...especially by road ...so he came all the way from deheradun to punjab by road...he is wearing a deep blue jeans with white shirt with few top buttons open and a black sunglass...

On phone-

Manik- ji dad...buss pahunchne hi wala hun...aap tension mat lejiye...aapke pahunchne se pehele pahunchjaunga...ya dad...mom se boldejiyega ki meine khaliya hai...aur tension mat le...bye..(smiling)

Disconnects the call...

Just then his jeep breaks down in the middle of the road...

Manik- kya hua??

Driver- sab wo shayad gadi mein kuch kharabi aagaye hai...mein dekhta hun...

Manika also comes out of the jeep and streches a little as it has been a long journey...he then hears a waterfalls sound...near somewhere...so he decides to go there ...after reaching there her freshens up a little sprinkling the cold water of the waterfall on his face ...feeling refreshed he looks up and his eyes frezzes on a beautifull scene...

A girl enjoing cold water of the streme...with her friends...wearing a yellow

salwar suit she sprinkels the cold water on her face and smiles feeling the refreshing feeling on her fa ce...

Then she starts dancing...with her one of her friends...holding hand...singing...

Japiyon sa desh hai mera,oh soniya

Japiyon sa desh hai mera...

Japiyon sa desh hai mera,oh soniya

Japiyon sa desh hai mera...

Dancing in circle...

Japiyon sa desh hai mera,oh soniya

Japiyon sa desh hai mera...

Japiyon sa desh hai mera,oh soniya we

Japiyon sa desh hai mera...

Tu dur jitna jaye

Yeh pass utna aaye..

Kab dil tera le jaye yahan pe..

Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Yahan pe ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Tu dur jitna jaye

Yeh pass utna aaye..

Kab dil tera le jaye yahan pe..

Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Yahan pe ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Sawing her hands in air doing bhangda wala step...then they all leave towards the fields...manik follows them...

That girl holding a basket full of floweres moving in the fields dancing with her friends...

Dil mein rehete hain gharon ko kisne pucha ji

Kehe dala jo yaar kabhi na pucha duja ji...

Ho... Dil mein rehete hain gharon ko kisne pucha ji

Kehe dala jo yaar kabhi na pucha duja ji

then suddenly twirls around with the basket and the flowers in the basket starts falling on her ...manik smiles at her innocence...

then suddenly her duptta flies away and she starts running behind it trying to catch it...

rahein sabhi mudd jayen..

tute bhi dil jud jayen..

kab dil tera lejaye yahan pe

Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Yahan pe ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Tu dur jitna jaye

Yeh pass utna aaye..

Kab dil tera le jaye yahan pe..

Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

yahan pe.. Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Then again manik follows them and sees that all the girls are enjoing under a tree from which swings are hanging...and on one swing that girl is sitting giggling happily...then she again starts singing...

Japiyon sa desh hai mera,oh soniya

Japiyon sa desh hai mera...

Japiyon sa desh hai mera,oh soniya we

Japiyon sa desh hai mera...

Tu dur jitna jaye

Yeh pass utna aaye..

Kab dil tera le jaye yahan pe..

Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

Yahan pe ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soniya...

her beautiful long jet black hair coming on her face...,her pink pouty lips...her beautiful doe brown eyes...her smile...uff

then manik gets a call and he leaves from there...just then...

Simmi- didi...NANDINI didi..tusi ithe ki karrahe ho wahan bua dadi gusse se lal hogaye hain...aapko pata hai...meine aapko kahan kahan nahi dunda...

Nandini- arre simmo...shant hoja...(playfully)bua dadi ka kya hai...wo toh roz gussa ho jate hain...agar aapni ladoo pe gussa nahi karenki toh unhe sukoon thodi melega...

Simmi- didi...tuse chalo warna aaj toh meri khair nahi...

Nandini - achha theek hai chal...

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Simmi-didi...tusi bhi na khud bhi maroge aur menuu bhi marwaoge...

Nandini-are dar mat kuch nahi hoga...

Buadadi was still sitting there helping the ladies to spread the chillies on the sheet to dry them...seeing nandini all ladies start to smile as they already know whats going to happen next ...Nandini comes from behind and hugs her tightly...

Nandini- buadadi buadadi o mere pyaari buadadi...(hugging her from behind)

Buadadi-(hidding her smile)kithe thi tu shaitan kudi...tennu pata hai na aj ladkewale tennu dekhne aan wale hain...phir??

Nandini-buadadi plz...maff kardo apni ladoo nu...wo mein kheton vich ghumne vaste gayi thi...plz...pere pyaari buadadi...

Everyone smiles wathing her buttering session as it was her regular routine...buadadi holds her ear and brings her infront of her...

Buadadi-aare wah!!aj toh vadda pyaar aaraha hai tennu mujhpar??...ki gadbad karke aayi hai...??

Nandini- hwww ...aapko sachhi lagta hai mein koi gadbad kar sakti hun...(doing her nautanki and making puppy face)

Buadadi-han han mennu sab pata hai tu ki ki karsakti hai...peechli baar jai aise tennu mujhpe pyaar aaya tha tab padoos wale lukhwinder chaha ghar aaye the shikayat karne ...ke "aapki kudi ne mere ghar ki khidki ka kanch tod diya..."toh na baba na...cheti cheti bata ab ki karke ayi hai...

Simmi- oho...buadadi..kyun chinta kar rahe ho...aaj aapki ladoo ne kuch vi nahi keta...(giggling)

Buadadi-achha theek hai...ja ...andar tere liye meethi lassi banake rakhi hai...ja ke peele...phir cheti cheti taiyaar ho jana...wo loog aate hi honge...

Nandini- meeti lassi..!!!thank you buadadi ...you are the best...

And runs inside..

Buadadi-dheere ja...gir jayegi...hay rabba!!!pata nai iss kudi nu kab akal ayegi...!!

---------------------------------------------------------------------------Nandini was getting ready while simmi and her other friends were helping her...

Simmi- didi...suna hai veer ji army mein major hain...

Nandini- kaun veer ji?(casually wearing her bangles)

Simmi- aare manik veer ji...aapke hone wale pati aur mere hone wale jiju...aur kaun...

Hearing this nandini stops and starts blushing while wearing her babgles...

Simmi-hawww !!didi...aapke gal toh puree tamatar ke jaise lal hogaye hain...(teasing her more)

Nandini- ai...aisa kuch nahi hai...

And stands up and goes near the bed and stands holding the bed post...just by hearing his name this is her haal ...she has never seen him not even a photo ...this was the first time she was meeting someone for marriage purpose...and in a place like hoshiyarpur it is indeed a big thing...

Simi- didi...kahan kho gayi...veer ji ke bare mein soch rahe ho...(straining the word veer ji)

Nandini- hut pagli...tu jate hai yahan se ya phir...

And runs behind her and simmi leaves giggling loudly...leaving nandini all red once again...

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After sometime ...

Manik along with his parents arrieved .They welcomed them whole hearted ly...All were sitting in the living area ...and talking ...

Raj- ji nandini kahin dikhai nahi derahi...

Buadadi- aji abhi aati hi hogi...arre simmo jo nandini nu bulala...

Simmi nods and leaves to bring nandini...

Buadadi- aji nandini bahut choti thi jab uske maa bauj ka accidnt hua tha...tab se meinne hi usse paal pose ke bada kiya hai...thodi si nadan hai...badi nazoon se pala hain meine apni bachiko ...

Buadadi looks towards the door ...

Buadadi- aa lo ji aagayi...

Bg tuning...

Manik also looks in that direction waiting egarly...nandini enters with a tray...manik is mezmarised and surprised at the same time ...as she is the same girl whom he saw some hours ago at the field...

Bg music-

Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon

She keeps the tray on the table ...while manik keeps gazing at her ...then she touches raj and simrans feet...

Bg music-

Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon

Simran- jeete raho...badi hi pyaari bacche hai...aaja beta ethe baith...

Gesturing her to sit beside her...

They ask her things and she answers them with a cute innocent smile with her eyelashes low...

All this while manik keeps looking at her...and this is noticed by simran...

Bg music-

Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon

Simran- ji humein toh bacche bahut pasand hai kyun raj ji...

Raj- ji bilkul ...

Simran- ji aagar aap bura na mane toh kya ek var bachhe aapas mein akele bath karsakte toh...

Buadadi- ji ji bilkul...simmo...ja nandini aur manik puttar nu upar chat par le ja...

Simmi- didi...veerji ayeye...

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bg music-

Tuning continues...

there was a complete silence for few minutes then nandini slightly stealed the view of his face and immediately looked down as he looked up ...this was noticed by manik and he smiles at her innocence...he thinks he should start the convo...

Manik- ummm...tumhe koi iss shaadi ke liye force toh nahi kar raha na...agar tum yeh shaadi nahi karna chahati ya tumhe force kiya jar aha hai...toh you can tell me...bina koi hesitation ke kehe sakte ho...after all you are only 18 ...tum sirf 18 saal ki ho ...dont worry...!!i will handle everything...

Nandini- ji nahi...mujhe koi bhi force nahi karaha...(blushing)

Manik- tum taiyaar ho na iss shaadi ke liye??(concerned)

Nandini just smiles...and seeing it manik also smiles...

Manik- dekho nandini...ab jab mujhe tumhara jawab mil gaya hai toh mein kuch batein clear karna chahunga...aajse hum dono ek nayi shuruwat karne ja rahe hain...and kisi bhi rishte ke liye bharose ka hona bahut zaruri hota hai...and I know ki hum abhi abhi mile haim and itni jaldi ek ajnabi par bharosa karna aur uske saath bharose ka rishta bana toda mushkil hai...isiliye...uss rishte ki neev rakhne ke liye...lets be friends first...so kyat um mere dost banogi...?(politely)

Nandini nods ...she becomes very happy as she has got a persone like him who is so understanding and caring...

Manik- ek aur baat jaise kit um janti ho mein ek army officer hun...mere liye mera desh...mera watan sab se pehele aata hai...mujhe kai kai dinno tak border pai rehena padta hai...hosakta hai...ki mein mission ke liye bahut dinno tak ghar se bahar rahoon toh kya tum...
befor he could complete...nandini looked up at him for the first time...

Nandini- aap chinta mat kijiye...mein aapke aur aapke farzz ke beech kabhi bhi nahi aungi...infact mein koshish karungi ki mere bass mein jo ho mein wo karun ...aapki madad karne ke liye...yeh mera wada hai aapse...

A different kind of honesty and sincerity were twinkling in her eyes...manik smiles listening her answer...and she again starts blushing...

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They both go down and raj and simran ask manik...

Simran- toh...kya hua...teri han samjhu...

Manik smiles and says ji...

Bg music-

Zameen se aasmaan tak hum
Dhoondh aaye jahaan saara
Banaa paaya nahi ab tak
Khuda tumse koi pyaara

Simran- ji humari taraf se toh hai hai ji...

Buadadi- ladooo...tujhe ae rishta manjoor hai...

Nandini nodes blushing...

Buadadi- ji humari bhi haan hai...toh rishta pakka ji...simmo meethai le aa...

Everybody hug eachother...

Raj- agar aap bura na manein toh...mein kya keheraha tha ki...jald se jald ae shaadi kar dete hai...kyun ki aapko tyoh pata hi hai ji...in army waloon ko badi mushkil se chutti milti hai ...iss var we vadi mushkil se dus din ki chutti par aya hai toh...

Buadadi- ji ji menu ki aitrazz ho sakta hai...ji koi nai aaj hi pandit ji se baat kar lenge hum...aur ji shaadi dus din mein hi hain toh mein kya kehe rahi thi ki ...ji agar aap bura na mane toh saare rasmein hone tak yahin ruk jayeye...

Raj- ji ji bilkul...humein ki aitrazz ho sakta hai...