MANAN- YOU ARE STILL THE ONE.(CHAPTER-38 on pg no.38)(15.1. 2017) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Amazingg update
Nandu ko jb pta chlega ke manik ye sb soha keliye kr rha hai tb uska trust toot jayegaa...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Awsm...
Waiting for more n more Manan

n yes Monster Malhotraa paka entry karegaa...
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CHAPTER -16

Manik had accepted Nandini's challenge but he didn't know how he would enter the girls hostel.

He was thinking of a plan to sneak into Nandini's room when an idea struck in his mind.

Manik choose the easiest but not the safest way.

It was almost 7pm . Nandini was in her room taking down notes of the days lecture which the professor had given her on Manik's request.

Nandini had full confidence that Manik won't be able to enter the hostel so she was relaxed.

When she was totally immersed in her studies when someone knocked the door.

Nandini immediately looked at the door and thought it was Manik. She panicked.

The door knocked again. This time Nandini went and opened the door.

The person entered the room and Nandini closed the door.

Person - Hey Nandini . Kya kar rahi thi.

Nandini - Kuch nai bas aj ke lecture ke notes bana rahi thi.

Person - Yaar tum kitni boring ho. Har baar notes aur padhai hi karti rehti ho. Anyways aaj mai mere friends ke sath party me jaarahi hu so I won't be able to come back till early morning. To tumhe akele hi rehna hoga aaj room me. Manage karlogi na. Darogi to nahi.

Nandini - Ofcourse I will manage Pooja tum aise kyu puch rahi ho.

(Sorry to disappoint you guys it was Pooja, Nandini's roommate.)

Pooja- Bas aise hi puch rahi thi. Waise all the best.Good Luck.

She winked at Nandini and left the room closing the door behind.

Nandini was confused as to why Pooja had wished her good luck.

She chucked it and went back to her books.

After half an hour Nandini again heard a knock.

She went and opened the door but there was no one.

Nandini heard the knock again and realized that it was coming from the window.

She went and opened the window and to her shock it was Manik.

Manik - Hello Miss Murthy.

Nandini's eyes popped out of their sockets on seeing Manik there.

Manik - Ab dekhti hi rahogi ya mujhe andar aane dogi.

Nandini - Huhhh...

Manik - What Huhhh? Side me hato. Let me get in. Warna koi dekhlega.

Nandini stepped aside and allowed Manik to get in.

Nandini - Manik... tum ...yahan...

Manik - Haan Nandini. Main... Yahan...

He imitated her.

Nandini - Tum yahan kyu aaye aur kaise aaye.

She said all this in panic mode.

Manik - Arey... Tumne hi toh bulaya tha. Bhul gayi.

Nandini - Maine kab bulaya.

Manik - Challenge to kiya tha na. Aur Manik Malhotra kabhi challenge nahi harta.

He said all this raising his collar.

Nandini - Tum yahan upar aaye kaise.

Manik - Main... mai to tumhare hostel ki building ke pipe se chadke aaya hu.

Sirf tumhare liye...(He said this in full on dramatic mode)

Nandini - Manik tum jao yahan se . Koi dekhlega to problem hojayegi.

Manik went and lied on Nandini's bed and said- No . Now that I have completed your challenge successfully, we have to practice now.

Nandini - But Manik koi aajayege.

Manik - Koi nahi aayega. Sab kuch sorted hai.

Nandini - Sorted hai? Matlab.

Manik - Matlab ke tumhare hostel ki warden hostel me nahi hai. Aur tumhari roommate bhi party me gayi hai. So koi nahi hai Hume disturb karne wale.

Nandini - Haan Par...

Then she realised what Manik said.

Nandini Ek minute. Tumhe kaise pata ki hamari roommate bahar gayi Hui hai.

Manik - Because I had sent her out.

Nandini - But Manik this is cheating.

Manik got up from the bed and started walking towards her .

Nandini started to walk backwards until her back hit the wall.

Manik came close to her and kept his hands on the wall on either sides of Nandini caging her completely.

Manik - Cheating or no cheating. I am right in front of you so I win. Let's practice now.

Nandini - But Manik...

Manik kept his index finger on her lips and said- Shhh... No more arguments.

He brought his face close to hers and eyed her lips.

Nandini closed her eyes in anticipation.

Manik smiled seeing his effect on Nandini.

Then he whispered in her ears- Nandini...So shall we start?

Nandini came out of her trance and opened her eyes and said- What?

Manik - Dance practice aur kya.

Nandini - Oh Haan. Let's practice.

She pushed him away from her lightly and was about to go when Manik held her wrist and said- Waise tum kya soch rahi thi. Bolo.

Nandini N..Nai ku...Kuch bhi to nai. Mai bhi dance ki baat kar rahi thi.

Manik - Really!!!!!

Nandini - Yes.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

Manik left Nandini's hand immediately.

Nandini - Oh no. Shayad warden aagayi hai.

Warden from outside - Nandini darwaza kholo..

Nandini panicked.

Nandini - Manik jaldi se hide somewhere.

Manik - But Where?

Nandini - Bed ke neeche.

Manik - No way . Mai bed ke neeche nahi chupne wala.

Nandini - To washroom me.

Manik - Nope...

Nandini - Manik tum itne relaxed kaise reh sakte ho. Please hide na.

Manik - Ok. But not in the washroom.

Nandini - Ok then cupboard me chupjao.

Manik - Let me think...

Nandini - Manik plz don't make it difficult for me. Plz chupo na jaldi se.

Warden - Nandini open the door. Itni der kyu lagrahi hai.

Nandini hid Manik forcefully in the cupboard.

Manik - Mai yahan oxygen ki kami se marjaunga. Phir mere death ka blame tum Par aajayega soch lo.

He said this in dramatic tone.

Nandini - Ha ha. Very funny. Tumhe aise Time pe mazak soojh raha hai. 2 min cupboard me Rehne se koi Marta nahi hai. Samjhe.

Saying this she closed the cupboard door.

Nandini opened the door and asked - Kya baat hai Madam.

Warden - Door kholne me itni der kyu lagadi tumne.

Nandini - Madam wo... wo.. mai... washroom me thi na. Isliye.

Warden - Acha theek hai. Mai to bas tumhara id card dene aayi thi. Now you can stay in the hostel without any fuss. Saari formalities complete hogayi hai.

Nandini - Oh. Thank you so much madam. Thats so kind of you.

Warden - Welcome. Acha mai chalti hu. Darwaza ache se bandh karlena. Good night.

Nandini - Ji. Good Night.

Nandini closed the door and heaved a sigh of relief.

Then she remembered that Manik was hiding in the cupboard.

Nandini rushed to the cupboard and opened it quickly and found Manik unconscious.

She with difficulty took him to bed and made him lie down.

Nandini slapped lightly on Manik's cheeks to wake him up.

Nandini - Manik utho... Manik.

But Manik didn't respond.

Nandini sprinkled water on his face but still no response.

Nandini started to panic.

She had tears in her eyes.

Nandini - Manik please utho na. Kya hua tumhe.

Nandini to herself- Mujhe doctor ko phone karna chahiye. Mere wajah se Manik ko sach me kuch ho to nahi gaya.

Nandini was about to dial the number whe Manik held her hand.

He opened his eyes and saw Nandini's panic stricken face.

He started to laugh.

Nandini - Manikkk... ye tumhe mazak Lagta hai. Pata hai mai kitna dar gayi thi. Aisa bhi koi karta hai kya. Jao mai tumse baat nahi karungi.

Saying this she turned her face to the other side.

Manik - Acha Baba sorry. Aage se kabhi aisa nahi karunga. Is baar maaf kardo.

Manik held his ears.
Nandini turned towards him and said- Pakka na. Fir kabhi aisa mazak nahi karoge mere sath. Promise me.

Manik - Haan promise.

Nandini smiled and said- Ok ab yeh sab bahut hogaya. Let's start the practice.




Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

I guess this update is a lengthy one so please atleast now give your dher sare comments.

I really like reading comments. Awaiting for it.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#84



Nice update. ..

Thanks for sharing this.




Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Nice update loved it manan are so cute continue soon waiting eagerly take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Yaar jhut mut ka tha ya ni pata ni but he was too cute re,
love it continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Waiting for the next part
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER -17

Manik and Nandini started their dance practice.

Nandini gave her 100 percent while practising.

Manik was impressed by her dedication.

Manik - Not bad Nandini. You have improved a lot . As I had already said you are a quick learner ,so now you don't have to worry about the performance. I am dead sure that we are gonna rock it. Mark my words.

Nandini - I hope so.

They practiced for 1 hour when Manik got exhausted.

He sat on the bed and said- Yaar Nandini I m tired.

Nandini - Itni jaldi.

Manik - Haan yaar . Aur am hungry too. Kuch khane ko hai kya.

Nandini - Let me check.

Nandini searched her bag and found a chocolate bar.

Nandini - Abhi to yahi hai. Tum yeh khao mai neeche Jake dekhti hu ke hostel ke kitchen me kuch milta hai kya.

Manik - Mai yaha akele baith ke kya karunga. Bore hojaunga. Mai bhi tumhare sath chalta hu.

Nandini - No no. Tum neeche nahi aasakte. Agar Kisi ne dekh liya to problem hojayegi.

Manik - Koi problem nahi hoga. Aur Waise bhi time dekho. 10 baje hai. Abtak to sab so chuke honge.

Nandini - But Manik...

Manik - No ifs and buts. Let's go.

Nandini - Ok Chalo.

Manik and Nandini slowly went down without making any sound.

Nandini opened the kitchen door and searched the fridge. She found nothing in it. The kitchen had nothing but empty vessels.

Nandini - Manik yaha to kuch bhi nahi hai.

Manik - Koi baat nahi hum kahi bahar chalte hai.

Nandini - Manik... Are you kidding me? Yeh hostel hai. We can't just go in and out of it just like that without permission. Aur wo bhi itni raat ko. No no no...

Just then they heard footsteps coming towards the kitchen.

Nandini - Manik koi aaraha hai.

Manik- Haan toh. Lagta hai kisi aur ko bhi bhook lagi hai. Par don't worry Jo bhi hai check karke chala jayega. Kuch nai milega usey hamari tarah.

Nandini - Manikkk. ... Tumhe is time pe bhi mazak sujh raha hai. Chupa jaldi se.

Manik - Oh no no no... mai dobara se nahi chupne wala. Koi dekhta hai to dekhne do. I don't care. Tumhe chupna hai to tum chup sakti ho.

Manik said this in dramatic tone shrugging his shoulders.

Nandini - Manik please waha table ke neeche chup jao jaldi se.

Manik - Arey yaarrr... Ok fine. But on one condition.

Nandini - Ab kya...

Manik - Tumhe bhi chupna hoga mere sath. Mai to akele nahi chupne wala.

Nandini - Ok fine.

Both of them hid under the table.

The caretaker came inside and looked around and said to himself - Yaha to koi nahi hai.

Manik took out the chocolate from his pocket which Nandini had given him.

Manik whispered in Nandini's ears- Mujhe to bahut bhook lagi hai.

He took a bite and offered it to Nandini.

Manik in whispers -Arey Nandini tum bhi khao. Bahut tasty hai yeh chocolate.

Nandini hit his hand lightly and asked him to stay quiet.

The caretaker checked the kitchen and found no one.

Caretaker- Ye warden bhi na .. na khud soti hai na hi Kisi aur ko sone deti hai. Ab itni raat ko kaun aayega kitchen me Jo isey awaaze sunai derahi hai. Itni achi neend disturb kardi meri.

Saying this he closed the kitchen door and locked it and went away .

Both Manik and Nandini came out.

Nandini folded her hands across her chest and looked angrily at Manik and said-Manik Malhotra tum kya kar rahe the wahan table ke neeche.

Manik made an innocent face and said- Kya kar raha tha. Tumne hi to kaha tha chupne ke liye . Ab mujhe bhook lagrahi thi to chocolate khaliya. Akele kaise khata. Isliye tumhe offer kiya. That's it.

Nandini - Manik tum na ... tum ...

Manik - I know I am very generous... pata hai mujhe.

Nandini stomped her foot and went to the kitchen door to open it.

Manik smiled seeing Nandini's anger.

Nandini tried to open the door but it was locked from outside.

Nandini - Manik ye toh locked hai. Ab hum kya karenge.

Manik on seeing Nandini's worried face came forward and tried to open the door but couldn't.

Manik - Lagta hai Ab hame subah tak yahin rehna hoga.

Nandini - Manik sab tumhari wajah se hua hai.

Manik - Nandini but...

Nandini - Manik please...

Manik - Par suno to meri baat.

Nandini - Kya sunu.

Manik - Ek raasta hai.

Nandini - kya.

Manik - wo dekho.

Manik pointed towards the kitchen window which opened to the backyard of the hostel.

Nandini - Kya... kahi tum ye to nahi kehna chahte ki hum yahan se bahar jaye.

Manik - Aur koi rasta bhi to nahi hai.

Nandini - But raat bhar hum rahenge kaha. Ab bahar nikalne ke baad mai mere room me to nahi jasakti morning tak.

Manik - Simple. Mere ghar jayenge aur kaha.

Nandini - Noway. Mai tumhare ghar nahi aane wali. Isse Acha mai yahi kitchen me reh jaungi. Tumhe Jana hai to jao. Aur Waise bhi tum yahan nahi reh sakte. Koi bhi tumhe dekh lega.

Manik - Ya right. Aur mai Tumhe akele nahi chodke Jane wala. You are coming with me.

Nandini - But...

Manik - Shhh... zip it...

Manik took Nandini to the window.

First Manik jumped out of the window and then he helped Nandini to get down by holding her by her waist .

Both of them came out of the hostel premises by jumping the backyard wall.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Awesome update..
Manan scenes are cute and manik is very cool
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CHAPTER -18

Manik and Nandini jumped the backyard wall of the hostel building.

Nandini was laughing all this while.

Manik - Kya hua. Has kyu rahi ho.

Nandini controlling her laughter -

You know Manik this is the first time I have sneaed out of the hostel. And believe it or not. Bahut maza aaraha hai.

Manik smiled seeing her happiness.

Nandini - Thanks Manik.

Manik - Ab mere sath rahoge to ye sab to hoga hi. Come let's go.

Saying this Manik took Nandini along with her to his car which was parked at some distance.

Manik opened the car door and Nandini sat in the passenger seat and Manik took the drivers seat.

Manik started the car and they drove away.

Nandini - But Manik hum kaha jaa rahe hai.

Manik - Relax Nandini. Let me concentrate on driving.

Nandini kept quiet for sometime and again said-

Nandini - Manik bolo na kaha le jarahe ho mujhe.

Manik - Date pe.

Nandini - What???

Manik - Haan Dinner date pe.. why are you so shocked?

Nandini - Kya bol rahe ho Manik.

Manik - Wahi bol raha hu Jo tum sun rahi ho.

Nandini - Manik mai tumhari girl friend nahi hu. How can we go on a date.

Manik sighed and said- Ok fine ... tum bhi na. Waise naam Jo bhi do but Matlab to khana khane se hai na.

Nandini - Hmmm...

Both of them looked at each other and then started to laugh.

Nandini - On a serious note bolo na Manik kaha jarahe hai hum log.

Manik - Yaar kitne sawal puchti ho tum. Hum restaurant jarahe hai dinner ke liye.

Nandini saw a pain Puri stall at the road side.

Nandini - Manik stop stop stop...

Manik applied brakes with a jerk.

Manik - Kya hua Nandini. Tumne kyu roka mujhe.

Nandini - Manik restaurant me to tum har baat khate hoge. Ek baar mere style ka dinner bhi karke dekho.

Manik - Matlab.

Nandini - Tum Chalo mere sath batati hu.

Saying this she took him to the pani Puri stall.

Manik made a face and said- Nandini are you serious hum yahan khane wale hai.

Nandini - Manik I m sure you will love it. Ek baar try to karke dekho.

Manik - Ok fine...

Nandini to the stall owner- Bhaiyya do plate pani Puri dena.

Stall owner- Ji Madamji.

Nandini - Aur jab tak hum rukne ko na bole tab tak pani Puri serve karte rehna.

S.O.- theek hai Madam Ji.

Nandini - Manik let's have a competition. Dekhte hai kaun zyada pani Puri khata hai.

Manik - Ok .

Nandini - is baat tum mujhse nahi jeet sakte Manik.

Manik - Dekhte hai...

Manik ate the first plate of pani Puri and started coughing as it was too spicy.

Manik - Pani pani...

Nandini laughed and gave him water to drink.

Nandini - kya hua Manik ek me hi haar maan gaye.

Manik - Huhh... no never. Bhaiyya ek aur plate dena.

Nandini - Manik Agar tumhe nahi khana to its Ok. Let's eat something else.

Manik - No.

Nandini on seeing Manik's state reduced her speed of eating.

Manik had tears in his eyes due to the spiciness.

He gulped down the pani Puri one after another .

Finally Nandini said- Bhaiyya bas mera to pet bhargaya.

Manik - So finally. I win again. Wohooo...

Nandini - Yes you win. Ab chale.

Nandini to the stall owner- Bhaiyya kitne paise hue .

Stall owner- 400 rs .

Nandini searched for money but she didn't bring along money with her while coming from the hostel.

Manik - Wait tum kyu dogi paise. The treat is on me.

Saying this he took out a 500 rupee note and gave it to the stall owner.

Manik - Chalo Nandini let's go.

Nandini - Ok Chalo.

With this Manik went away.

S.O.- Madamji ek minute.

Nandini - Haan Bhaiyyaji boliye.

S.O. - Madamji aap sahab se jaan boijh kar hari ho na. Humne Dekha apko.

Nandini smiled and said- Haan. Apne Dekha na wo kitni mushkil se kha raha tha. Agar mai jeet jati to usey bura Lagta na.

S.O.- Madamji aap bahut pyar karti ho na sahab se.

Nandini's eyes widened on hearing this.

Nandini - Nahi Bhaiyya aisa kuch nahi hai.

S.O.- Madamji humne bahut se ladka ladki ko Dekha hai Yaha pe. But ap jitni caring koi nahi thi. Mano ya na mano aap pyar to karti ho sahab se.

In the meantime, in Manik's car, Manik drank full bottle of water yet his mouth was burning.

Manik shouted from a distance- Nandini kya kar rahi ho tum . Chalo jaldi.

Nandini - Haan Haan aarahi hu.

Nandini to S.O.- Chalti hu Bhaiyya. Thanks.

S.O. - Bhagwaan apki Jodi salamat rakhe.

Nandini didn't say anything and went away.

Manik - Kya baatein kar rahi thi itni der se.

Nandini - Kuch nahi bas aise hi. Manik tum theek ho na. Kya hua tumhe.

Manik - Nahi mujhe kya hoga. Kuch bhi nahi.

Nandini understood that it was the effect of pani Puri.

Nandini - Manik Chalo na icecream khate hai.

Manik - Ice cream????

Nandini - Haan Chalo jaldi. Mujhe abhi khani hai icecream.

Manik - Ok.

Manik started his car and drove away.

He spotted an icecream Parlour and parked the car .

Manik - Chalo Madam ice cream khate hai.

Nandini - Haan Chalo.

Manik ordered for vanilla icecream and asked Nandini which flavour would she like to have.

Nandini - Butterscotch.(Guys Butterscotch is my personal favourite that's why I have selected it as Nandini's favourite).

Both had the icecream.

Manik was now feeling much better.

Manik - Nandini you are a lifesaver seriously.

Nandini asked innocently- But Maine kya kiya.

Manik - Kuch nahi. Chalein...

Nandini - Haan Chalo.

With this both of them drove away from there.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

I just wanted to show Manik and Nandini getting to know each other better in this update .

If you guys liked their bond please comment.

If not then also comment and give your suggestions so that I can improve in further updates.

Eagerly waiting for your comments.

Pardon me for the typos if any.






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