MANAN- YOU ARE STILL THE ONE.(CHAPTER-38 on pg no.38)(15.1. 2017) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
hey girl, read all teh chapters today and its amazing...trust me
So as per Prologue , Manik is gonna betray her huh so sad..some one just punch that Soha and slap this Manik hard.

he thinks she is his dream girl..that witch lol..Manik is now blindfolded , and I am sure he will run behind Nandu like a love sick puppy soon..brace up girls...coz i am loving this story lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
nice update

manik ki goodness baar baar overpower ho jati hai bet matter par..

but i guess he gonna regret the bet matter later

keep updating yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
CHAPTER -14

Manik and Nandini went to the practice room to start their dance practice. Nandini was very nervous as she didn't know even a step of dancing.

Nandini's self thought- Nandini tu to gayi. Ab kya karegi tu. Manik to itna Acha dancer hai. Agar usne tera dance dekhkar mazak udaya to... or worse agar usne tujhse friendship Tod Di to... Nahi nahi Manik aisa nahi hai. Wo kisika mazak nahi uda sakta. Aur usne to kaha tha ki wo teri help karega. Ek baat try to karke dekhti hu. Chal Nandu hoja shuru.

End of P.o.v.

Manik brought Nandini out of her trance by tapping on her shoulder.

Manik - Kahan kho gayi...

Nandini - Huhhh... kahin nahi.

Manik - So shall we?

Saying this he forwarded his hand towards Nandini and asked through his eyes to hold his hand .

Nandini held Maniks hand hesitatingly and Manik pulled her towards him with a sudden jerk.

Nandini was shocked with the sudden pull and to balance herself put her hand on his chest for support.

Manik held her by her waist and said- Just look into my eyes and move with the music.

Nandini got lost in Manik's eyes and started moving her body along with the beat.

Manik twirled Nandini twice and on the second turn Nandini accidentally stepped on Manik's foot.

Manik- Auuchch...

Nandini - Sorry sorry.. lagi to nahi tumhe...

Nandini panicked.

Manik seeing her worried state said- No I'm fine. Kuch nahi hua mujhe. Let's do it one more time.

Every time he twirled her she either used to step on his foot or fall on him.But Manik was being patient all this while.

Fed up with not being able to get the steps correctly Nandini ran from there.

Manik followed her and found her sitting on the bench in a secluded part of the college ground.

Manik sighed and went near her and found Nandini crying.

Manik- Kya hua Nandini tum achanak waha se chali kyu aayi. Are ye kya. Tum ro kyu rahi ho. Itna Acha jaa raha tha practice session.

Nandini between her sobs- Jhut mat bolo. I know I am the worst dancer of this college. Tum bas mujhe Khush karne ke liye ye sab bol rahe ho. Mujhse nahi hoga ye dance vance. Mujhe to dance ka ABCD tak nahi aata. Tum apne liye dusri partner dhoondh lo. Agar mere sath perform karoge to competition har jaoge.

Manik- Hogaya tumhara. Ab mai Kuch bolu.

Nandini still in sobs- Hume Kuch nahi Sunna. Ap bas kehne ke liye kuch bhi boldoge. But mera dance dekhkar log mere sath sath tumhara bhi mazak udayenge.

Manik - Stop it yaar Nandini tum rona bandh karo Pehle aur smile.

Nandini didn't stop crying.

Manik - Please for me...

Nandini - Ok. Bolo kya bolna hai.

She stopped crying.

Manik - Nandini may be you haven't realized that you dance very gracefully. Your innocence is a plus point in such dance form.

Manik explained her all the nuances of dancing and she listened to each and every word said by him very carefully.

Manik - So you have understood all the important points.

Nandini - Yes.

Manik - Good. So shall we continue from where we left.

Nandini - Sure.

Manik - But please don't step on my foot again. It hurts.

Nandini - Manikkk...

She hit him playfully and they both laughed heartily.

They went to the practice room and continued their practice.

This time Nandini made sure that she didn't step on Manik's foot.

She slowly started to perfect the steps.

Manik felt relaxed that now Nandini was improving slowly but steadily.

After a good three hours of practice both of them got exhausted.

Manik - Not bad Nandini you are a quick learner. I am impressed.

Nandini - Agar dikhane wala Acha ho to koi kaise jaldi nahi seekhega.

Manik - Hmm... wo to hai.

Both of them laughed.

Manik self thought-

How innocent are you Nandini. And your smile. It's so beautiful. If I was not bound by this stupid bet I would have definitely fallen for you.

Nandini -- Manik kaha kho gaye tum.

Manik - Kahin nahi. Chalo canteen chalte hai.

Nandini - Ok Chalo.

With this both of them went to the canteen.


Done with another update .

Hope you guys like it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Nice update...
Nandu is innocent and manik also liked her. Don't know what is gonna happen in end?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Part 14 ajj hi read kia 14 n 15 both


parts r awwwssmm


luv it


luv Manan bondinggg


full full of Manan just luvv it

its too goodd



Nandu is veryy innocentt jab Manik uski heart brk karega to usse bohat hurt hogaa feeling badd for Nanduu
and
this Manik is such a jerk he still in a relation wid Soha n cares abt bet nt abt Nandu

reallyy desperatellyy waiting for that bet truth to reveal infront of Nandu
thn Real story start hogaa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Part 14 ajj hi read kia 14 n 15 both


parts r awwwssmm


luv it


luv Manan bondinggg


full full of Manan just luvv it

its too goodd



Nandu is veryy innocentt jab Manik uski heart brk karega to usse bohat hurt hogaa feeling badd for Nanduu
and
this Manik is such a jerk he still in a relation wid Soha n cares abt bet nt abt Nandu

reallyy desperatellyy waiting for that bet truth to reveal infront of Nandu
thn Real story start hogaa...
Plzzz Update Next ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome update
Nandu is so innocent
Manik also like her cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
CHAPTER -15

Manik and Nandini were sitting in the canteen munching on their sandwiches whe Manik got a call from Soha.

Manik picked up the call .

Manik - Hello.

Soha- Manik tum jaha kahi bhi ho come immediately to the parking. We all are waiting for you.

Manik - Ok coming.

He cut the call.

Manik to Nandini - Nandini tum baitho mai abhi aata hu.

Nandini - Kaha ja rahe ho.

Manik - Kuch kaam hai. Tum ruko mai 10 min me aaya. Kahin Jana mat Ok.

Nandini - Ok. Jaldi aana.

Manik - Sure.

With this he went out of the canteen to the parking.

Manik reached the parking and found all his friends waiting for him.

Manik - Kya hua guys . Soha tumne mujhe yahan kyu bulaya.

Soha- Manik tum kya kar rahe ho. Mujhe avoid kyu kar rahe ho.

Manik - Maine kab avoid kiya tumhe.

Soha- Kal Maine kitni baat call kiya. Tumne ek baar bhi call back nahi kiya. Atleast ek message to kardete.

Jay- Soha tum itna hyper kyu horahi ho. Shayad Manik Nandini ke sath tha.

Shaurya - Exactly.

Soha-But...

Manik - Dekho Soha ye Sara plan tumhara tha . Ab tum hi usey ruin karogi to kaise chalega. Mai ye sab tumhare insult ka hi to revenge le raha hu Nandini se.
(Manik said all this absent mindedly. He didn't mean a single word of it.)

Viren- Soha see Maine bola tha na. Manik purposely tumhara phone kyu nahi uthayega. He to loves you.

Soha smiled a bit hearing this.

Soha- But Manik next time se please ek message to kardena if you can't take my call.

Manik - Ok. Kardunga ab Khush.

Jay saw Nandini coming towards the parking and he told all of them to hide.

Nandini saw Manik and said- Manik tum yahan kya kar rahe ho. Mai kabse dhundh rahi thi tumhe. Maine pura college dhundh liya aur tum yahan ho. Chalo na jaldi se practice finish karlete hai. Mujhe jaldi Jana hai aaj hostel.

Manik - Haan ... tum Chalo practice room me main bas 2 min me aaya.

Nandini - Ok.

And she went away from there.

All his friends came out of the hiding and heaved a sigh of relief.

Viren - Aaj to Baal Baal bachgaye.

Jay - Haan yaar pura plan flop hojata.

Manik - Guys I think we should be careful from next time.

Shaurya - Absolutely correct. Let's do one thing jab tak ye bet Puri nahi hojati hum Manik se nahi milenge aur na hi use koi contact karega. Ok guys.

Everyone - Ok cool.

Jay- What about you Soha?

Soha- Ok.( She said it half heartedly)

Manik - Ok guys now that it's decided see you after 15 days. Bye.

Everyone - Bye.

With this Manik went away to the practice room.

As soon as he entered the room he saw Nandini practising dance moves taught by Manik.

Nandini saw him and stopped immediately.

Manik - Kya hua ruk kyu gayi. You were doing good.

Nandini - Sach.

Manik - Haan. But we need to practice more. To continue kare.

Nandini - Actually I have to prepare for quiz competition with Dhruv and then hostel jaldi Jana hai. Kuch formalities complete karni hai.

Manik - Ok then uske baad to practice katsakte hai na.

Nandini - Uske baad kaise.

Manik - Mere ghar pe.

Nandini - No no no. Mai tumhare ghar nahi aasakti.

Manik - To theek hai mai hostel aajata hu.

Nandini - What?

Manik - What what?

Nandini - But wo to girls hostel hai tumhe koi allow nahi karega koi waha.

Manik - I have my own ways. Tum sirf itna batao ke tum ready ho practice ke liye ya nahi.

Nandini after thinking for a while- Ok done. Agar tumhe hostel me entry milgayi aur tum mere room tak pahuchana gaye to I am ready for practice.

Manik- Oh so you are challenging me.

Nandini- Ab aise hi samajhlo.

Nandini had full confidence that Manik won't be able to enter the hostel at any cost.

Manik- Ok then challenge accepted. See u at 8pm. Ready rehna.

Nandini- Ok. Bye.

With this she went to Dhruv and they studied for sometime and she left to hostel at 5.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Do you think Manik will be able to enter the hostel. What will happen after that?

Stay tuned to find out .

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Nice update...
So nandu challenges manik. I'm sure he is not gonna lose.
thanks for the update..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
how i wish nandini un logon ki baatein sun pati...

nice update

waiting for next update

plz continue soon

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