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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing amazing update..
Loved it
Manik maofying Nandu..
N I'm sure we will meet on the next thread for this amazing story
:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys...

Sorry for the delay.

I am here with another update.

CHAPTER -63


Manik,Nandini,Pia and Arjun along with the kids reached their house (P.V.M Mansion)

Arjun ringed the doorbell but there was no response.

After continuously ringing the bell for 5 min, all of them entered the house with the spare key which was with Nandini and found that the house was filled with darkness.

Nandini and Pia got worried for their father.

Nandini - Itna andhera kyu hai yahan? Aur Appa kaha hai?

Pia - I hope he is fine.

They started to panic .

Manik - Both of you just calm down. Shayad power cut hoga.

Arjun - Mai check karta hoon.

Saying this he searched for the switch board and switched on the lights.

As soon as the light came, all of them were greeted by huge cheers from the people who were standing in the hall.

Vishnu came forward and said-

SURPRISE...

Nandini and Pia rushed to their father and hugged him tightly.

Pia - Appa aapne to Hume dara hi dia.

Hume laga...

Nandini cut her midway and said- Appa it's a very good surprise. But ye sab Kisliye?

Vishnu - Meri Bachiyon ki shaadi hogayi hai to itni haq to banta hai mera jashn karne ka. Kyu?

Pia and Nandini smiled and hugged Vishnu again and said- We Love You Appa . You are the best.

Vishnu - Best to meri dono bachiyan hai.

Saying this he kissed their foreheads one by one.

The guests were happy seeing the father- daughters bond and blessed them.

Vishnu then looked at Manik and Arjun.

Vishnu - Tum dono waha kyu khade ho. Yahan aao.

Manik and Arjun went to Vishnu and he introduced them to the guests.

Aarav-Khushi were feeling too sleepy.

They went to Nandini and said- Mumma we want to shleep...

Vishnu -

Haan Nandini tum inhe lekar jao.

And inke sone ke baad jaldi se ready hokar neeche aajao.

Manik,Arjun aur Pia tum log bhi jakar ready hojao.

Guests ko zyada wait karwana achi baat nahi hai.

All of them nodded and left.

Nandini took the kids to their room and tucked them to bed and kissed them good night.

Then she went to her room to get ready.

By that time, Manik , Arjun and Pia got ready and went down.



All three of them were being introduced by Vishnu to his business partners.

Manik was least interested in the intro's.

His eyes were just searching for Nandini.

Manik kept looking at the stairs now and then.

After a good 30 minutes, Manik's wait finally ended.

He saw Nandini descending down the stairs in a beautiful red party gown.



Manik was completely bowled over by Nandini's beauty.

Nandini came and joined the rest.

Nandini looked at Manik and found him staring at her.

Nandini felt shy due to the continuous gaze of Manik.

Nandini walked up to Manik and said-

Aap aise kyu dekh rahe ho?

Manik - Dekh raha hu ki how beautiful my wife is...

Nandini blushed.

Manik came near Nandini and said huskily in her ears-

Don't do that Nandini .

Otherwise I won't be able to control myself.

You look too cute when you blush.

I wish we were alone now...

Nandini innocently said- Kyu???

Manik -

Kyu???

Because I am in a mood to get punished by you again just like the punishment I got few hours back.

Remember...

Nandini hit him on his shoulder playfully and said- Manik... Aap bhi na. Bahut bure ho. Aap fir se tease kar rahe ho?

Manik - Acha baba Sorry.

By then Vishnu called Nandini and Pia.

Vishnu made an announcement that he is wrapping up his business here in Capetown and returning to India with his daughters and sons in law.

Pia and Nandini were very happy hearing this.

Vishnu looked at Manik and Arjun and mouthed a thank you.

Both Pia and Nandini noticed this.

They now understood that Manik and Arjun had convinced Vishnu to take this decision.

Pia and Nandini smiled looking at each other.

After sometime the party ended and the guests started to leave.

Vishnu was too tired so he took their leave and went to his room to take rest.

Pia and Arjun too went to their room.

Manik and Nandini were left in the hall where the servants were clearing the hall after the Party.

Nandini and Manik went and sat near the swimming pool to let the servants continue their work.

Nandini sat beside Manik by keeping her legs in the swimming pool.

Nandini held Manik's hand and said- Thanks Manik.

Manik - Thanks... For what???

Nandini - I know ke Appa ko aapne aur Arjun Jiju ne hi samjhaya hai ki wo India wapas chale .

Manik - Nandini... He missed you guys a lot all these years.

Even he wanted to return home to you guys.

Tum bhi to yahi chahti hona. To Maine aur Arjun ne bas unhe realise karwaya .That's it.

Nandini - Manik aap bahut ache ho. Kabhi Kisi cheez ka credit nahi lete.

Manik - Well... Thank you for the appreciation. Ab chalein... Raat bahut hogayi hai.

Nandini - Haan Chalo...

With this both of them got up to go to their room but Nandini slipped and fell in the pool taking Manik along with her.

Both of them got completely drenched.

Nandini didn't know how to swim so she hugged Manik tightly to save herself from drowning.

Manik smiled seeing Nandini's fear of water.

Manik - Nandini relax... You are fine. Just open your eyes.

Nandini broke the hug but was still holding Manik tightly.

Manik - Mujhe Lagta hai tumhe swimming sikhani padegi . Kitna darti ho tum .

Nandini - Mujhe nahi seekhni swimming.

Manik got out of the pool along with Nandini.

Manik - Swimming to mai Tumhe Sikha ke rahunga.

Nandini was shivering due to the cold water of swimming pool.

Manik - Nandini go and change your clothes. Otherwise you will catch cold.

Nandini - Aap bhi change karlijiye.

Saying this she took Manik along with her to their room.


Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.



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Posted: 8 years ago
wpw!!!!!
awesome one

appa gping bck wit them

manan gettin more comfortable
their cute moment

ahhh waiting for swimming classes hehe
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update

I thought pool me manan romance hoga..but hua hi nahi..

still nice update
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow amazing update..

manan cute romance was awesome. ..

and swimming pool scene was nice. .

waiting for next update. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing
Loved it
Perfectly cute n romantic
Thank u for continuing
:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...want more Manan moments...eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
MaNaN Relation was pure.
continue soon
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys...

Here i am with another update.

CHAPTER-64

Manik and Nandini went to their room to change.

As soon as they entered, Manik got a call from Cabir.

Nandini- Kya hua? Kiska phone hai?

Manik- It's Cabir.

Nandini- Oh. Ok. But pehle aap change karlijiye phir baat kar lena.

Manik- Nandini it must be important warna Cabir aise raat ko call nahi karega.

Tum jao change karlo mai abhi call attend karke aata hoon.

Nandini- Ok.

Saying this she went to the washroom to change and Manik went to the balcony to attend Cabir's call.

Manik picked the call and said- Haan Cabir Bol... Kaise kia phone.

Cabir-

Saale... Kamine...

Tu jabse waha gaya hai ek baar bhi call nahi kia.

Isiliye maine socha ki haal chal janlu phone karke.

Lagta hai Nandini se ek minute ki fursat nahi milrahi hogi tujhe.

Manik- Cabirrr... Shutup... Aisa kuch nahi hai.

Cabir- Acha fir kaisa hai. Btw kuch baat aage badi tum dono ke beech ...

Manik smiled remembering the kiss and the cute moments he spent with Nandini.

Cabir- Bhai muskurana bandh kar aur sach sach bata.

Manik- What? Excuse me... Mai muskura nahi raha tha by the way.

Cabir- Acha ... Mai tujhe tujhse zyada jaanta hoon. To chupane ki sochna bhi mat.

I m sure kuch to hua hai ...kuch hogaya hai...

Manik- Tu nahi sudhrega... Acha bata call kyu kia.

Cabir- Oh haan. One of our clients Mr. Khurana has been on vacation with his family in Cape Town. He wants to meet you toh maine tujhse bina puche hi kal subah ki meeting fix kardi. Tu handle karlega na...

Manik- Ofcourse Cabir. I will handle it. Khuranas ki deal bahut important hai hamare liye. We cant take chances to upset him.
I will handle it. You don't worry.

Cabir- Ok. Chal bye mai rakhta hoon. Nandini wait kar rahi hogi tera. Wife's ko Zyada intezar karwana achi baat nahi hoti. Experience se keh raha hoon.

Manik rolled his eyes and said- Good Night.

And he disconnected the call.

Manik went to the room and found Nandini brushing her hair with a comb and was smiling within herself seeing her reflection in the mirror.

Manik cleared his throat to get Nandini's attention.

This brought Nandini out of her dream world .

Nandini looked at Manik who still hadn't changed his clothes.

Nandini- Apne abhi tak change nahi kia. Sardi lag jayegi aapko. Jaiye jake change kar lijiye pehle.

Manik- Haa. Mai toh ja hi raha tha . But pehle tum batao tum apne aap ne smile kyu kar rahi thi?

Nandini looked here and there.

Manik came close to Nandini and said- Waise you are looking very pretty today.

Saying this Manik held Nandini's hand and pulled her towards him with a jerk and held her close to him .

Nandini-

Ye kya kar rahe ho aap?

Please pehle change karlijiye .

Manik- No. I won't.

Saying this he tightened his grip over Nandini's waist.

Manik- I just don't want to let you go out of my eyesight even for a moment.

Nandini- But aapko change to karna hoga na.

Manik- Mujhe nahi karna change.

Nandini- Arey aise kaise chalega . Chaliye jaiye pehle.

Manik- Acha... Toh wife mode is on in full swing.

Nandini- Ofcourse... But aap to meri baat hi nahi maan rahe hai.

Saying this Nandini removed the bowtie of Manik.



She then removed his jacket and pushed him to the washroom .

Manik smiled seeing Nandini's cute antics and went inside the washroom.

He quickly changed into his nightwear and came out.

He found that Nandini was arranging the cupboard as it was all messed up by her while selecting a dress to wear at the party.

Manik went and sat on his side of the bed and looked at Nandini.

Manik- Nandini kya kar rahi ho waha tum ? Wo sab subah karlena. Come and sleep now.

Nandini- Bas hogaya ek min.

Manik got up and went towards Nandini.

Manik- Nandini maine kaha na leave all these. Tum nahi maanogi...

Saying this Manik lifted Nandini in his arms and brought her to bed.

Nandini- Manik kya kar rahe ho. Chodiye na...

Manik didn't pay attention to her pleads and put her gently on the bed.

Nandini made a puffed face as Manik didn't allow her to finish the work.

She looked away.

Manik smiled seeing her fake anger.

Manik blew air over Nandini's face to remove the loose hair strands which were blocking his view.

Nandini closed her eyes.

Manik looked intently at Nandini.

Nandini opened her eyes and said- Kya hua? Aap aise kyu dekh rahe ho?

Manik-

Nandini... Why is it becoming so difficult for me to wait ?

I guess you know what i am talking about.

Nandini got shy on hearing this.

She looked away.

Manik- Nandini look at me.

Nandini nodded her head in denial.

Manik with his index finger caressed her face which made Nandini look at him.

Manik bent down and kissed Nandini's forehead.

Then he kissed both her cheeks.

Nandini was getting affected by the proximity.

She closed her eyes to absorb in the feeling .

Manik then kissed her neck and looked at Nandini's face.

Manik could see nervousness on Nandini's face so he said- Nandini ...

Nandini opened her eyes .

Manik- I know that you are still not comfortable with it. But dont worry i won't do anything unless you want .

Nandini- Manik aisa nahi hai... I mean...

Manik silenced her by keeping his index finger on her lips and said- Shhh... I can understand and i am completely ok with it. I will wait... Raat bahut hogayi hai. Sojao.

Saying this Manik switched off the lights and slept on his side of the bed.

Nandini started feeling guilty .

Nandini self-thought: I think Manik naraz hogaye mujhse. I am not a good wife. Wo mere liye itna kuch karte hai aur mai... Mai har baar unhe disappoint karti hoon. But isme meri kya galti hai. Its all new to me. But i won't let this happen again. Mai kal Manik ki saari naraazgi dur kar doongi.

Thinking of all this she fell asleep.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.



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Posted: 8 years ago
wow!!!!!!
after so long cabir was thr
hehe
and thy are gettin really comfortable
wit one another
its cute
lovely update

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