Manan- Unacceptable Relation (Link to thread 2-pg no.1)(15-9-2016) - Page 79

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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update really really romantic can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ur story is really awesome
getting intresting day by day
Continue soon
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CHAPTER -57

Next morning -

MANAN Bedroom -

Nandini woke up with the constant buzzing of Manik's phone alarm.

Nandini shut the alarm and looked at Manik.

Manik was sleeping peacefully .

Nandini took her phone and clicked Manik's pic while he was sleeping.

Nandini got up and went to take shower.

She got ready and came out to see that Manik was still sleeping.

So she went down to prepare tea for him.

While Nandini was going to the kitchen, she saw Vishnu reading newspaper in the hall.

Nandini went to him and said- Good Morning Appa...

Vishnu - Nandini Beta Good Morning... yahan baitho mere paas.

Nandini hugged Vishnu and sat beside him.

Vishnu - So Beta how is life going on...

Nandini - Ekdam first class.

Vishnu - Oh great. Waise Manik is a nice guy. But tum dono ki shadi. I mean aise achanak...

Nandini - Haan Appa. Us waqt circumstances hi Kuch aise the.

Nandini narrated the whole incident and about the circumstances in which they got married.

Vishnu -

I m sorry Beta mujhe tumhare aur Pia ke sath hona chahiye tha us time.

But ...

Mai ek Acha father nahi ban paya.

Mujhe maaf kardo Beta.

Nandini - Ye Kaisi baatein kar rahe ho aap?

Aap to world ke best Father ho.

In the meantime, Pia also joined their conversation.

Pia - Good Morning Appa. Good morning Nandu... Kya baatein kar rahe the Aap dono mere bina?

Nandini - Di Kuch khaas nahi. But Dekho na Appa kya bol rahe hai?

Kehrahe hai ki wo ache father nahi hai.

Pia - Appa... It's not true. Aap to world ke best Father ho.

Vishnu looked at Nandini and Pia and blessed them both- Khush raho meri bachiyon...

Nandini and Pia hugged Vishnu.

Vishnu - Waise mere dono Damad kaha hai?

Pia- Appa Arjun to abhi tak so rahe hai.

Vishnu to Nandini - Aur Manik???

Nandini - Wo bhi sorahe hai... Mai jakar jagati hoon. Infact mai to unke liye tea banane hi aayi thi.

Pia - Nandu please Arjun ke liye bhi tea banado na... please.

Nandini - Ok Di...

Nandini made tea for both Manik and Arjun and gave Arjun's teacup to Pia.

Nandini took the tea to her room.

By now Manik was awake and was in the washroom.

Nandini set the bed right and took out Manik's clothes for him to wear.

In the meantime Manik came out of the washroom .

He was half naked in just a towel .

Nandini looked at Manik and her eyes widened in shock.

She immediately turned to the other side and covered her eyes with her hands.

Manik saw this and smirked.

Nandini - Maine apke kapde nikal diye hai cupboard se. Aap change karke chai pee lijiye. Phir breakfast ke liye neeche aajaiye.

Saying this she literally ran out of the room.

Manik took the clothes and wore it.

Then he drank the tea and went down.

Nandini avoided eye contact with Manik.

She was feeling too shy to even look at him.

Manik sat at the breakfast table along with Arjun and Vishnu.

Nandini and Pia also joined them after preparing breakfast for everyone.

Aarav-Khushi were already awake and they came down and hugged Nandini and then Manik and said-

Good Morning Mummaaa...

Good Morning Dadooo...

Pia- Awww... They are choo cute.

Saying this she pulled the cheeks of Aarav-Khushi.

Nandini - Aaru Khush aap dono Nanu ko Good Morning wish nahi karoge...

Aarav-Khushi looked at Manik who signalled with his eyes to go ahead.

Aarav-Khushi went to Vishnu and touched his feet out of respect and said- Good Morning Nanu...

Vishnu - Good morning Bachcho...

Saying this he hugged both of them.

Vishnu made them sit on his lap.

Vishnu - Aaj mai aap dono ko apne haathon se khilaunga.

Saying this he started to feed both of them with his hands.

Though Aarav-Khushi were not comfortable with new people but with Vishnu they gelled pretty well.

After breakfast the kids went to play.

Vishnu along with Manik Arjun Pia and Nandini sat in the hall to talk.

After some chit chat with them, Vishnu suggested them to go and explore Cape Town as they hadn't been to Capetown before.

Nandini and Pia insisted Vishnu to come with them but he politely refused stating that he had some work in office.

Vishnu wanted the newly weds to spend time together that's why he made an excuse.

Manik Nandini Pia and Arjun agreed.

They went to get ready.



Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

I don't know what I have written.

I know this chapter is too boring.

Please forgive me for this.

Actually i need sometime to work it out.

I m in serious need of a break.

If I keep writing like this, the charm of the story will be lost. I know you all don't want this to happen.


I hope you guys will understand.

I will be back soon after three- four days with another update.

Till then read my other stories.

But if you still want me to continue like this feel free to tell me.


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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update

take a break and then come back soon..

we will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
i know this is becoming a habit but chill yaar ...update after some days relax
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Vishnu,pia & nandini's convo was nice...
Shy nandini's cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
just came across this story.
the storyline is different and interesting
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
it was cute
manan moment was awesome
yup do take a break
come back wit a bang
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its ok,
take a break but come back soon and give a lamba wala update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey awesome update.. It wasn't boring Yaar... U write really well babe..
N yes go ahead with the break...
Will wait for u

Thank u for continuing

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)

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